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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratualtions Madhu di for becoming IF-Sizzlerz 😳
for wishes please go to this link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3741316/congrats-madhu-di-for-becoming-if-sizzlerz
Here's a OS for you ...😊
Initailly it was a sad OS but as you didn't like sad ones so i had changed it 😳
anyone who wants to read the sad one too can scroll down and see the second post 😊

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A River

This story takes us around 300 years ago. Here, Kria is Kairi and Rey is Rousse.

PS- Both are French names.

"Come on Kairi" Rousse said

"No, I can't run anymore" Kairi replied

"Love, once we reach the other side of the river, you can have plenty of rest. For now we need to hurry. Your father would arrive here any minute"

Kairi gathered some energy, and took hold of Rousse's hand and they both started running towards the river bank.

"Hey you boatman, come here" shouted Rousse

"Yes, (turning towards kairi) How can I help my princess?"

"Get us to the other end of the river" ordered Kairi, breathing heavily due to running.

"But my princess, the weather is not good for travelling. There is rain and thunder storm. It is very dangerous." The boatman replied.

"Just do as I say" commanded Kairi.

"Ok princess, I promise to take you to the other end safely"

The boatman asked them to climb on the boat. He started the boat but they were finding it very difficult to cross the river.

"Kairi, just hold my hand forever. Whatever happens we will face it together."

"Yes, Rousse, even if we don't survive today we will die together"

"We will survive, for sure"

Kairi was holding Rousse's hand very tightly.

After sometime Kairi spoke

"Rousse, what will happen if father catches us, I won't be able to face him"

"Ssshhh. Nothing will happen. Just keep hope.

With this he kissed her forehead.

"STOP YOU BOTH" someone shouted from behind

Kairi and Rousse turned around and saw Kairi's father, the king of Kaffraria.

Kairi couldn't control anymore. Tears were spilling out of her eyes recklessly.

"STOP ONCE, OR I'll GET THIS LAD KILLED"

But the boatman didn't stop. He followed the orders of his princess not thinking about his own future.

Seeing his daughter going away, his wrath changed into bemoaning.

"Come back my daughter, come back"

Kairi stretched one of her hand indicating her father to come and get them but her other hand was holding Rousse's hand tightly never intending to leave him.

But the helping hand of the king never came.

Soon, both of them reached the shore.

"I kept my promise princess and prince of Zaire" said the boatman

They said a thank you to the boatman and ran off to the prince's castle to lead a happy life ever after.

THE END





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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is the sad version of the above written OS

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A River

This story takes us around 300 years ago. Here, Kria is Kairi and Rey is Rousse.

PS- Both are French names.

"Come on Kairi" Rousse said

"No, I can't run anymore" Kairi replied

"Love, once we reach the other side of the river, you can have plenty of rest. For now we need to hurry. Your father would arrive here any minute"

Kairi gathered some energy, and took hold of Rousse's hand and they both started running towards the river bank.

"Hey you boatman, come here" shouted Rousse

"Yes, (turning towards kairi) How can I help my princess?"

"Get us to the other end of the river" ordered Kairi, breathing heavily due to running.

"But my princess, the weather is not good for travelling. There is rain and thunder storm. It is very dangerous." The boatman replied.

"Just do as I say" commanded Kairi.

"Ok princess, I promise to take you to the other end safely"

The boatman asked them to climb on the boat. He started the boat but they were finding it very difficult to cross the river.

"Kairi, just hold my hand forever. Whatever happens we will face it together."

"Yes, Rousse, even if we don't survive today we will die together"

"We will survive, for sure"

Kairi was holding Rousse's hand very tightly.

After sometime Kairi spoke

"Rousse, what will happen if father catches us, I won't be able to face him"

"Ssshhh. Nothing will happen. Just keep hope.

With this he kissed her forehead.

"STOP YOU BOTH" someone shouted from behind

Kairi and Rousse turned around and saw Kairi's father, the king of Kaffraria.

Kairi couldn't control anymore. Tears were spilling out of her eyes recklessly.

"STOP ONCE, OR I'll GET THIS LAD KILLED"

But the boatman didn't stop. He followed the orders of his princess not thinking about his own future.

Seeing his daughter going away, his wrath changed into bemoaning.

"Come back my daughter, come back"

Kairi stretched one of her hand indicating her father to come and get them but her other hand was holding Rousse's hand tightly never intending to leave him.

But now it was too late. The storm had risen so much that the water came over the boat and the boat sank taking with it the two lovers.

"I love you" these were their last words to each other.

"I'm sorry my princess and prince of Zaire, I was not able to keep my promise" with this the boatman jumped into the river.

THE END



anjoriii thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do Tell whether you all liked it or not ?? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
loved it..
sweet short and cute...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice shot. .
Dis poem reminds me of a poem which i ve read. .in ma scl days
Lord ullin's daughter. .
I don't remember in which class i ve learnt it. . .
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was a beautiful OS
really nice..
well written
and very sweet..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aweee. . . . . . . .
Anjori. . . . .
Bada n super tight wala hug to u. . . . . . .
Thank u bolungi toh chappal padenge,bt dil se thank u yr. .
U knw,bahut kam logo ne mere liye aisa kiya hai,and agar kiya bi hai toh mujhe kisi k sath share krna padta hai,
bt not dis time. .
The whole OS 4 me. . . . . .
Yay. . .me super duper happy. . . . . . . .
Ohh toh is liye mujhse meri choice puchi jaa rai thi. . . .
Well baby,
I totaly loved the OS.
And dis super-awsome suprise of ur's. . .
Wel madam ji aapka kal english exam hai naa. .so all the vry best 4 it. .rock in it. .:-D
and lagta hai tune apne english k book ka poem
Lord Ullin's Daughter by Thomas Campbell kuch zada hi acchhe se read kiya hai. . .kyu??
Bt,seriously speaking. .i totaly loved the OS n ofcouse the happy wala ending. .:-D
haiyee. . . . . .itta bada n mast suprise. . . .
Gosh . . .pata hai 32inch ki grin is totaly plasterd on my face. .n m so so so so loving it. .
Thanxs 4 making dis day so memorable n special 4 me. . . .
Love u zada wala :-D
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think I have read this in poem - LORD ULLIN'S DAUGHTER
am i right?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesome
loved it
loved happy version more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..
*****
unres..
********

amazing OS..
loved both parts...
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago

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