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Posted: 12 years ago
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The sharon rai prakash diaries

After sharon called swayam to college 2 o'clock in the morning to college and told him about her asthma and broke up with...sharon comes home and write her feelings in diary expressing emotions in poetery...tears roling down her beautiful cheeks for swayam shikhawat while writing this poem...


"Aankhon ne pehne, khwabon k ghehne, palko pe gham k bhoj uthaye,


Khushbu ki rim jim
Pyar k mausan
Aaye magar kyun raas na aaye
Dard ko dil ki teh mein chupaye

Zindagi se hai gelah, phir bhi hamein jeena tu hai,

Humne jo chaha
Wo hi na paya
Dil se jo manga
Paa k gavaya


Aadhy adhoory sukh sapno ke
Apne hi haaton humne lutaya

Thak haare hain, Aas lagaye
Baarha kiya shikwa, phir bhi hamein jeena tu hai

Dunya se fursat mil jaye tu
Dil se kiye hum vaadein nibhaaye

Ye wafa hai ya jafa, phir bhi hamein jeena tu hai
Zindagi se hai gelah phi bhi hamein jeena tu hai"

Put pen down and look at swayam's photo and cry and cry and cry...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow veryy nic poem i loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's very nicely written :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was painful but at the same time beautiful as well!!I loved the poem!!!!Nice update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was really beautiful
so well written
loved it a lot...
really well done 👍🏼
thanks for the PM
do write more... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww its so beautiful...please do write many more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
whoa...
the poem is jst beautiful...
really...
hands down awsm...
it describes true feelings of aperson...after breakup...
but more than this...
it truly did justice to sharon's feelings after d break-up...
it was really very very very very very khubsurat...:)

kudos...

Rohan :)
P.S.: i dont know but i think u shud mention it is a poem...in an os...u know how will they come to know abt it...??
Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very touchy and very well written please write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautifully written...! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey

This is a song. Pls give credit to the original writer/artist before using it to describe a situation

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