A SwaRon OS: Nirmohi

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow...

i'm amazed... all i will say is that i loved it just like always !

ty for the pm ! do write more !

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I loved the os! 👏 Your style of writing is just amazing...

Please continue to write more os'.

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

WOW!!!

you gave this song a whole new side!!

the theme is he same...

but the way you described it was much better!!

you actually showed the depth of the emotion!!

and it was an absolutely beautiful piece!!

you really did an amazing job!!

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Kankshita this was the most smallest one shot I have ever read but what a treat to read!! Really, the concept and the execution was really beautiful.

As you already know, you are flawless when it comes to writing. You have a way with words and sometimes I fail to fathom certain bits of story due to the complicated english words. I don't have a vocabulary like you na. 😆

I like the song Kabira as well and the title. well it's really apt and good thing that you explained the meaning of it earlier, otherwise it would have confused me.

Good thing is that, I understood your OS. Normally, people take a little while to understand the plot and characters, when it comes to one shots, and hence people like reading long one shots. This OS of your was short, but P-E-R-F-E-C-T. Literally. I did not even feel the need to beat around the bush because this had a perfect blend of emotions. The fact that you wrote it from Sharon's point of view made it look even more beautiful. Really. And sad ending, I like them more than happy ones, so yes, I had a smile by the end of it. 😳

Good job. 👍🏼

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Amazing os kankshita loved it.. Nirmohi is d apt title for this os I think it is line with the theme of ur os.. Sharon's unspoken emotions which were waiting to be conveyed to swayam her daydream all of it was penned down realli nice.. 😃 ❤️
I'm so sorry I hav'nt given u my feedback for smithereens I'll read it from the start and wil post my feedback soon thanx for sending me a pm dear.. 😊

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Regina.Phalange

@Regina.Phalange

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

it is one of the smallest One shot i have ever read..but its simply flawless:) loved it :)

Edited by ---Muffin--- - 12 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

beautiful👏

loveedd ittt😊

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Srry 4 being late...
The Os was beautiful...
Ur imagination is beyond words of appreciation..
and beautifully penned..
Amzing i loved it..:)

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

The size of your write-ups does not matter at all,the impact is always big.
I thought the title was very apt,both her imagination and her reality proved to be pretty ruthless for her heart.
This is vintage Sharon,isn't it,wanting to do something but ending up doing something completely different somehow🤔