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Posted: 12 years ago

It's very well written, short, crisp and cutting. The dream's been described very really, and the longing comes across, it touches. Swayum is not usually aloof, this is purely Sharon's head. But the way you've written about Swayum, clearly shows how deeply you feel for him, with all the nuances. :) I actually am glad with this, and do not as such wish for you to continue. :P

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Ardour.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Reading it again. I noticed you wrote about Swayum's pimple. 😛

Seriously, you're too observant Kankshita. 😆

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was just fabulous and wonderful written os...

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful. Kanks, I loved it. So much.

It's sad, but just wonderful.

More words I say would defeat it's beauty.

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