SwaRon OS: CIRCLE OF LOVE ❤️❤️❤️ - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Amazing OS..I am just new to read u'r work...u have OOosum writing talent..i like u'r one shot...

I loved the concept...And the way u expressed Swaron emotions are amazingly perfect...

Then ending part was like a fairytale...That was beautifull End...i loved it...
Great work

Thanx for PM

Prateek
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
really beautiful os.. loved d way swayam n sharon expressed themselves n d way swayam's analysis on sharon who s hidden in her n d way she portrayed her was beautiful.. loved d way she named d puppy mr.loser.. loved it.. beautiful.. awesome sweet n cute os..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awosm circle Him👏👏
keep it up😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
amazing os
loved the way u wrote it was heart touching n very sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: BusyIndivaBee

Res

unres 😆
kal unres karing subah subah
abhi eyes closing off 😭


tera kal kab aega!!?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar


tera kal kab aega!!?😕

DUSRE COMMENTS ME BHI REPLY KARNA BABY😉😛😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

DUSRE COMMENTS ME BHI REPLY KARNA BABY😉😛😳


ACHA JI...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar

NISH 🤗

Himi 🤗

Lovely os 😳

Sharon ko nahi maara tune aakir ek ki khooni kaafi hain apne group mein🤣.

Swayam looks dashingg in white ...so true😎
Sharon bhi lal rang mein chamaking⭐️ .

kiss ke pehle wali IDHAR-UDHAR KI BAATE bahut sahi likhi hain dost. 😆

beech main jo mast poem thi..

loved how you showed niyam's[nicol and swayam] bond..

Nahi to d3 mein nicole fokat main swayam ko kiss karke, sharon mein jwalamukhi bhadka ke nikal li🤣

Awww majnu to majnu hain boss...sharon ko uska naam MR loser rakha to bhi khush..
ILH <3<3 ☺️☺️☺️

Sharon nahi sudheregi, she thinks wayam doesn't deserves to dance with her🤪

All -in-all ama-zz-ing OS tha ocean-ic-rock-is-tar 👍🏼

I wanted to read more 🤓
Thankyou aap lengi nahi, to fir bye.😆



yo partner...😎

ek tu hi hai..ye sur aur suki to nikame ho gaye hai..😛

🤣 haan ek hi khooni kaafi hai ...hehe
POEM 😲 kahan...😆😆

IDHER UDHER KI BAATE WAGERAH WAGERAH😆😆😆

zeh naseeb humare jo aapke comment ka didar hua...shukriya😃😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey My Rockstar...🤗


U know how much I love ur style of writing...its sweet and soothing...i loved this concept of geting nostalgic about whole Swaron journey...BEAUTIFULLY done

After walking long...he stopped.. admiring sun...which was about to drown in sea...he sat and wrote something...something which define his life...the sole coz of his life...his love...for whom his heart beats...he wrote her name...SHARON...smiling seeing his angels name...he slowly moves his fingers on it... "my siren Sharon"
I love this eternal lover boy swayam...this made me smile...😳...their togetherness...the presence of love in their life after so long...was beautifully depicted
He stood from there and once again start walking in slow pace...suddenly he felt someone's hand in his ...the one who made his life complete...her presence made everything just perfect...her being with him is magical...it was not less than any miracle that they are together.
Their journey further ...when u showed her reasons..her insecurities..her pain...her jealous...beautiful
I can see something in you for me...that something was your love...affection and your right over me...which was unknown to you...there was a ray of hope in me...that some day...some fate full day...you will understand what is that SOMETHING in you for ME.
Beautiful ending to the fairytale...i so wanted a happy ending for this..together forever😳
Love u baby...love ur write ups😊...keep writing
Luv
Ur Di



Hey Di...🤗
Ek aap hi ho jisko meri writing achi lagti hai 😆
Only bcoz of u and nish this os has happy ending...warna to u knw how much i wanted sad end for this...aap dono ki AKM panti...
thank u for this lovely comment di...ur coments means a lot😊
Luv u
Ur Rockstar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: spongy

res

unres

wow it was beautiful os
very slow and very soothing
u have really written it in such a manner that it touches the heart
it was so romantic
and a really amazing os
loved it
great work
do write more



Thanks for lovelyy comment dear
m glad u liked it😊

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