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Heeeylooo :D I'm back with another Os I wrote on swaron for the swaron anniversary Os contest :P I think many of y'all swaronians would have read it...but for those who didn't...this is for you :D ;)for PMs add me to your buddy list, much easier and since I'm in 12th now, I can't individually send pms :/ so buddy me for pms...and for this update I shall send pms after a lil while :)
so here it...oh before that conditions for forthcoming updates:
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Ok now let's start shall we?
Index:
Ch1: scroll down
Ch2: scroll more down :P
Swaron Os: Love that cares
"Ok guys, ready and 5 6 7 8..." rey called out while rehearsing for the NDC. It was a fusion of various dances ranging from Bollywood to hip hop to couple dances. The guys had many stunts in their dance and swayam being the tallest had an extra risky stunt. It was a part of their flash mob...but when mixed with the indiafest dance, it became a bit too risky. Ok sorry for the bak bak.
Back to the rehearsal.
'Activate' the guys were on swayam for their formation and he was hauled up for a twist...as each one jumped of from him...he perfirmed a complicated routine. *crack* he landed badly. "Ouch!" he yelled. The gang immediately came to him...sharon reaching him first. "Kya zarurat thi yeh routine karne ka?" she yelled while hitting him on his arm. "Ow sharon!" swayam screamt again. "Phew nothing that big...its a minor sprain...but it could have become a fracture and he wouldn't have been able to participate in NDC" Rey said. There was relief on everyone's face except sharon's who continued arguing.
Sh: "Be thankful its just a sprain! Agar kuch hua tho?"
Sw: Tho? Tho kya? Kuch hua nai na? So chill!
Sh: Agar tumhe kuch hua tho...do you have any idea how much it'll affect...
Sw: Affect whom?
Sh: Me...*Swayam looks up and the gang go "Sharon..."* i meant me and the the dance team..the rest of us...it'll affect our dance..
Sw: Fine baba chill. I'm fine.
Nil: Gimme the beat guys
Boom boom pak boom boom pak
Swayam ko hua hai ek chota sa sprain...
Aur ho rahi hai sharon ki pain...
Aur isse hum kehte hain
Umm...isse kehte hain...hain...
Vicky: Love due to pain.:D
Nil: waah kya baat hai yaar
They all cheer and the guys raise their hands meaning chemistry while swayam feeling that sharon might feel uncomfortable ...says "Ey chup kar" sternly.
Sh: kyun rok rahe ho...rehne do usse...she said blushing a bit. At that swayam looks at her in wonder and they share a hawwa hawwa eye lock, all pain momentarily forgotten, they become entranced in each others eyes...while the gang notice it and say chemistry again.
At that swaron come out of their trance and look away and try to change the topic.
After rehearsals, during which swayam had to watch due to the sprain, the gang fixed the timing for the next day, wished him well and left. He was struggling to get up as his ankle hurt. Sharon was in the corner drinking water facing the mirror when she suddenly felt pain coursing through her ankle...not very bad but slightly. These signs usually come when swayam was in pain, she thought and glanced in the mirror at swayam struggling to get up, wincing in pain. She rushed to his side and put one of his arms over her shoulder for support. He looked at her in awe. Since their 'break up' happened, they'd maintained a good friendship...though he felt he was a replacement for rey initially when sharon and rey were fighting...he later was confused. She understood him perfectly without words, she knew him in and out, complimented him often, and even won the admiration of his dad...easy to do considering his dad thought he was nothing :P
As these thoughts went his mind and he looked at her, she looked up and questioned, " What?" . He just shook his head indicating nothing and they continued looking at each other, letting their eyes converse. "Ahem hrmm hmm" rey cleared his throat bringing them out of their trance. "Umm Sharon...ye kya ho raha hai?" he asked teasingly. "Kuch nai, well he was struggling to get up so I thought i'll help..." she replied blushing slightly. "Oh ya help. I understand completely understand" rey said smirking a bit and when sharon opened her mouth to oppose he continued "no sharon you don't have to justify, I completely understand...you were helping swayam." Swayam feeling she was uncomfortable, " Rey shut up...aur wo kuch nai hai, my ankle was hurting and she helped as you all left me alone" he quickly changed the topic. " Haan see I forgot what I actually came for, Swayam ko mein ghar drop kar deti hoon...coz you know I'm dropping taani too so Swayam too can come along, and your cycle nil said he'll get it home " Rey said. "So chale?" rey asked. "Haan just help me a bit please" Swayam asked. Slinging one hand over rey's shoulder for support and after much effort they finally got home and Swayam was in bed. "Dude you're hot!" Rey exclaimed. "Umm thank you but that kinda seems gay coming from you..." Swayam replied confused. "No man! And chee how can you think like that?! I meant you're burning, with fever!" Rey exclaimed. "Yea I know, I'll be fine, don't worry" Swayam casually replied "And taani ko kuch mat batana...i think the tablet wore off" he added after a pause."Are you sure?" rey asked again. "yes my friend, ab jao aur thoda aaram karo, kal bohot practice karni hai." Swayam assured him. "Teek hai, so I'll leave now, see you tomorrow." and with that rey left leaving Swayam in his room.
Meanwhile Sharon was lost in thoughts..Flashbacks of what happened earlier, and her fright when he fell and heard the crack and Swayam yell. And the later moments when she tried supporting him. She blushed at the thooughts. 'Wait a minute, aaj Swayam kuch zyada hi hot lag raha tha...well waise be he is hot, too hot..lean yet muscular tall and perfect lover boy material...with that cute dimpled smile of his and his voice which made him much more lovable kash i could be with him in his arms forever...ugh sharon ye tum kaha kho gayi phir se? Wait hot, he was warmer than usual and also kinda tired...is he fine?' the sudden beep of her phone distracted her from these thoughts. Thinking it must be Swayam she quickly picked up her phone and checked her inbox. Her face fell when she saw a message from rey but her eyes caught Swayam's name, so she read the message. "Swayam's got fever, that's why he looked tired and fell...he told me not to tell Tanni...so don't tell her", she read. She quickly kept her phone in her purse and left home.
Shekhawat residence : *Ting Tong*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its very well penned down
plz update the next part soon and do pm me
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I have read this somewhere before!
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this was my os in the swaron os contest...i reposted it coz i wanted to continue the os...
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Originally posted by: sunvad278

this was my os in the swaron os contest...i reposted it coz i wanted to continue the os...




thats ok dear..its a lovely OS 😊I have read it on the OS contest thread😳

LOVED IT 👏

update the next part soon

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Here's part 2 of part 1...to those who've read it before in the swaron anniversary os contest...i know you've read it before...and ta da...i'm d os#2 's writer. Took me 3 days :O anyway, i wanted to CONTINUE the os. So i REEPOSTED the os. So peace ppl, and patience to coz i'll continue this work soon ;)
Shekhawat residence:
Tanni hurried over saying "haan aa rahi hoon". She opens the door to see sharon dressed up in a blue dress with a full on diva attitude. "Sh ..Sharon bhabhi..i mean Sh.. Sharon aap? Kuch kaam tha kya? Aap is waqt..." She asked surprised. "Haan wo actually Swayam ke saath kaam tha, cultural activities ki baare mein, wo kahan hai?" she asked. "Umm bhai apne kaamre mein hain, aap rukhiye mein call kar deti hoon" she said and was about to call Swayam when sharon stopped her saying, " Nai uski koi zarurat nahi, mein usse apne kamre me milungi...ankle sprain hai na..tho I think I'll meet him in his room.""Aap? Bhai ko Milne ke liye? Unki room mein? Akele?" Taani gulped, "Haan so? You know what chuck that, ye kaam bohot important hai so I'm gonna go meet Swayam" And with that Sharon left for Swayam's room. While Tanni looked at her in shock...she shrugged and smiled with a silent prayer thanking god for her brother's good luck. With that she left for her room.
Swayam was still sitting on his bed shirtless, unable to change as he couldn't walk and thinking about the earlier events and moments with Sharon , sighing with a goofy dreamy smile on his face. When suddenly his door opened and in came sharon. She stopped in her tracks seeing him shirtless and lost in his dream world. 'Why?? Oh why do you do this to me?! Why did you make sooo hot and cute at the same time?! Look at his muscles, so hot. His eyes so enchanting and deep. His hair so soft and silky. His lips which I wanna taste. His smile so adorable. His dance full of passion. His words so sweet. Him as a whole so lovable.' said the Laila side of her head. 'Shut up Sharon. You know its not possible. You hurt him enough. He need not suffer with you. Don't be selfish. You can't love him' said the selfless side of hers. 'Give it one last try, you both complete each other' her heart said over riding her brain. 'For now keep it away and focus on restoring him back to health' the sensible side said. She coughed a bit to catch his attention, but he was so lost in his sharon world that he didn't hear her. 'Swayam Shekhawat kahan kho gaye ho tum?!' she yelled the diva style. "Tumhari world mein" he replied dreamily..."Kitni cute ho tum, jab tum attitude mode mein..otherwise too tum bohot khoobsurat ho aur cute. Aur itna sweet bhi...aur sensitive...aur loud. Haha my siren, my sharon." She heard it all, with each word her heart fluttered...and when he said my siren my sharon, she remembered his name for her. "Siren Sharon" they said together softly.
"Sharon! Tum yahan? Akele? Kaise? Iss waqt? Kuch kaam tha? Par hum tho kal mil..." He couldn't continue coz Sharon had kept her finger n his lips, "Ssh Swayam. Itna sara questions ? Obviously I came through the door, mein koi bandhar nahi hoon, khidkhi se aane ke liye...aur mein diva hoon aur ek ladki bhi, khidki se chup chup ke nahi aaungi mein, wo tho ladkon ka kaam hai. Aur Tumhe fever hai, aur mein bohot pareshan ho gayi thi, isliye mein yahan hoon. Rey aur Taani bahar jaa raha hai kal, so meine socha kyun na mein tumhara nurse thodi der ke liye banungi. As in meri majnu ki nurse. Anymore questions?" she looked at him expectantly. "Ab kyun kuch nahi bol rahe ho?!" she asked a bit irritated. Swayam motioned with his eyes towards his lips, following his gaze, she blushed when she saw why he couldn't talk. "Umm sorry" she said quickly removing her finger the feel of his lips still lingered though, which sent pleasurable vibes through her. "Tum...Meri nurse...kyunki Rey aur Taani date pe chal rahe hai kal...so tum aaj hi yahan aayi inti raath hone ke baad bhi."he slowly said. " Aaj kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tum tumhare davayian nahi lelungi aur tumhara health aur bigad jayengi" she answered his unasked question. "Ok" he allowed. "Tumhare paas wo ankle sprain ke liye wo bandage hai?" she asked.
Sw: Umm nai, par jodhpur mein hai.
Sh: Ab mein jodhpur nahi janne wali hai, so... She took out a sprain bandage from her purse, and as she took it out her phone also fell out. Swayam seeing this got up and leaned forward . He caught the phone but pain shot up through his ankle and he landed with a thud on the floor. "Swayam!" sharon panicked. "Ooow" he replied. She quickly went next to him, supported him and made him sit on his bed. "Tum teek ho?" she enquired. "Haanein teek hoon, chill" he calmed her down. "Kya zarurat Thi meri phone ko save karne ke liye? Kya tum superman ho? Well for your kind information you're not! Aur koshish bhi mat karna! Tumhara health aur biged jayega!" she shouted at him. "Arey chill, mujhe kuch nahi hua...i think you should leave, its very late..." he said. "Nai mein kahi nahi jaa rahi hoon...aur mein yehi rukungi!" she told her tone indicating no more arguing.
Sh: Accha ye batao, tumhare medicines aur first aid kit kahan hai.
Swayam indicates to the cupboard.
Sharon opens the cupboard and finds her sharon corner, still intact...'Does he still love me? After all that I did?' went through her mind with tears in her eyes. Control Sharon, Swayam isn't well, uska khayal rakni hai. Be strong and calm.' saying this she searched his cupboard. She opened the first drawer and found his stuff there, paintings, dance drawings and a red scrapbook. She knew the scrapbook, it was about her. She'd caught him working on it once or twice. She wondered if it was complete.
She opened the second drawer and found his medicine and the painkilling spray. Taking it with her, she put it on his bed stand and help him into a half sitting half lying down position. He just watched her, unable to do anything. She reached for the spray, asked him to relax his ankle. She sat on the opposite side of the bed took his leg onto her lap gently and was about to spray the painkiller when Swayam stopped her, "chodo na sharon mein ye khud kar lungi" "Tum kuch nahi kahoge. Mein nurse hoon aur mujhe pata hai kya karoon or kya na karoon." she said with diva attitude. "Ok." he gulped and said. She gently felt his ankle and then sprayed the medicine over it. Then she carefully tried butting the bandage as well but he yelped she panicked said sorry and tried again. "Swayam, look at me" she said. Unnecessary though it was, he was already looking at her. As they shared a silent eye lock conversation, Sharon slipped the bandage over his ankle effortlessly. "There, ab dard hua?" she asked anxious. "I felt nothing" he smiled. 'Nothing but love' he thought to himself.
"Ok ye lo tumhara medicine , but before that, did you have your food yet?" Sharon asked.
*knock knock * "bhai sharon, aap dono please dinner le liye aaiye please" Taani's voice came from outside, followed by her. "Haan Taani aa rahi hoon" Swayam replied and was about to get up when, "Stop right there! Where do you think you're going?" Sharon asked him. "Arey dinner ke liye, aaj pizza night hai!!" Swayam replied elated. "Pizza wizza kuch nai! It's not good for you now." sharon reprimanded him. "Tum yehi ruko, I'll get you your food." she continued "But...but..." Swayam tried speaking.."no buts you're not having pizza that's full and final. Come with me Taani" Sharon sternly told him and left with Taani.
Kitchen:
Ta: so, you'll have pizza?
Sh: Umm ek slice, and yeah before that I need help in making dinner.
Ta: par dinner tho already ready hai na?
Sh: wo junk hai, aur Swayam ko healthy food chahiye...
Ta: par bhai ne tho kaha pizza order karne ke liye...(confused)
Sh: Par war kuch nahi...i'm gonna cook today. So will you help or not?
Ta: Ok :)
Sh: ok then lets start.
The two girls start cutting and cooking. Soon dinner is ready. Sharon had decided on green salad; chicken soup and pasta along with an omelet. The healthy pasta coz that was Swayam's favorite. To top it off she'd made fruit juice. After taking enough portions for Swayam, she took them to his room in a tray.
Meanwhile Swayam got a call from Rey and had asked him about how sharon knew that he was ill. Rey was confessing when sharon entered and told him, "Rey ne meri suspicions confirm kiya tha, usne mujhe kuch nahi bola, ab phone rakho aur dinner khalo!" she said setting the tray on his bed in front of him. "Did you eat?" he asked. "Yeah I did" she lied looking away from him. "I don't wanna eat." he said. "You have to, no option" she answered. He pushed the tray away like a little kid. Sharon thought for sometime, took a spoonful of soup and said, "Ok behave like a kid and I'll treat you like one" and with that she tickled him and as he started laughing immediately put the spoon into his mouth. Poor Swayam had no other option but to gulp it down. Boy it tasted really good, it was delicious. He thought to himself. Next came the pasta, but before sharon could make him eat, Taani entered with another tray, having Sharon's dinner. "you didn't have anything." he accused her. "Yeah I thought I'll have it after you finish yours" she said. "Aap please khalijiye bhai ke saath." Taani requested her. "Ok leave it here i'll eat it later." she said. Taani left the tray and went to have her dinner. "Chalo now finish your dinner." Sharon told Swayam. "Aur tum?" he asked. "I'll have it later" she replied. "Nai tum bhi khao mere saath" he insisted. "mujhe khane ka man nahi hai, baad mein khalungi" she side stepped. "I'll make you eat" he said an started tickling her, and fed her the soup. And so they continued feeding each other the rest of the dinner too, playing with each other, secretly loving every moment of it.
They finished dinner and time for medicines declared Sharon and Swayam paled. Sharon made Swayam look into her eyes, already distracted Swayam gulped down the medicine without his knowledge coz he was so lost in her eyes which spoke volumes of how she liked him.
While tucking him into bed, Swayam asked "Tum kahan soyegi?" to which she replied instantly and as if it were obvious"Yahan..."
Sw: It's gonna be odd.
Sh: What?
Sw: Tum aur mein, yahan akele, itni raat, mere kamre mein...
Sh: IDC. You're not well I'm your nurse and I've full rights to stay here
Sw: As you wish, if you want you can use Taani's room. If you feel uncomfortable.
Sh: I'm fine Swayam. Good night sleep tight and don't let the bed bugs bite.
Sharon made herself comfortable on some bean bags in the corner and watched Swayam sleep, wishing with all her heart, if she could be with him like this for the rest of their lives.
Morning came and sharon woke up earlier to see Swayam sleeping peacefully, she went and checked his temperature. It had gone down a bit. She gently caressed his forehead and kissed it, swayam smiled a huge smile and sighed in his sleep. She said i love you swayam, get well soon, and he murmered i love you sharon in his sleep, she smiled him gently, adoring him.Taani gently came in, and saw sharon and was about to ask her something when sharon stopped her and motioned 'Lets go outside, he's sleeping ' .
Once they were outside, Taani asked, "Aap puri raat yahan thay?" "Haan kyunki Swayam ko chot lagi hai, aur mujhe pata hai ki tum aur rey aaj kaam karni hai, isliye mein rukhi thi. Rey ko mat bata na ki mein yahan hoon." she replied. "Ok bhabh..Sharon. Aap teek hai na? As in comfortable? Agar aapko kuch chahiye tho mujhe bata dijeye." Taani said. "Ok ab tum jao aur Rey ko milo, mein Swayam ka khayal rakhungi. Agar kuch hua tho mein call karungi k?" Sharon said. "Ok bhabhi..sorry Sharon. Bye Sharon." Taani said as she rushed through the door. "Bye" Sharon said, thinking how good she felt when being addressed as bhabhi, she felt belonged to him.
She went and freshened up in Swayam's washroom, and then went to prepare breakfast. "Taani mujhe thoda help karo na please" Swayam called out. Sharon immediately went to him and helped him get up. "Sh Sharon? Tum? Still here?" he asked. "Yes I told you I won't leave until you feel fine and I haven't and I won't. Taani had some work so she left. Now, brush your teeth, freshen up and come for breakfast." sharon said calmly answering his upcoming questions. Swayam couldn't do anything about it, so once sharon left him in the washroom, he brushed, shaved, freshened up and called Sharon for help. Sharon supported him and took him to the dining area where sharon had laid out the breakfast. It was almost like the breakfast that Swayam had made for her, except that everything had been arranged in a more romantic sort of arrangement and the table was set for two. He saw Sharon standing, and knew what she was gonna ask. "Yes Sharon I still love you, always have and always will." He said. "Mein bhi tujhse pyaar karti hoon, its just that I was scared of my intensity and yours, our intensity of love for each other. I was scared of the asthma, I didn't want you to leave dance for me." Sharon said, deep in her thoughts. "What?! Say that again?" Swayam asked in a strangled tone, sharon broke away from her reverie shocked, but then relieved coz he wasn't really choking. "Yes Swayam, I love you. I realized it when I was in Delhi, but I didn't tell you, coz if my problem. I told you now coz I realized life is too short, after yesterdays incident, I realized I was lucky to still have you, if that fall had ended badly then you would've..." she trailed off unable to speak anymore, too scared of what could've happened. "Ssh Sharon. I'm fine, see, I'm good, come here," he said, opening is arms. She was unable to resist the invitation, and ran into his arms, but since he was sitting she had to sit on his lap, where they stayed in the same position for sometime and then broke apart. She kissed his forehead and whispered I love you Swayam, looking into his eyes. I love you too Sharon, he said, looking into her eyes. Then they had breakfast together, feeding each other, Sharon still on Swayam's lap. And as the happy couple finished their breakfast, Sharon went to put the dishes. Swayam saw her coming went on one knee and proposed," Sharon rai prakash, I promise to love you in ever moment of my life, your wish will always be my command. Will you just do small change to your name and be mine?". "Yes, I will" she whispered. "Thank you." and with that he stood, with Sharon's help, this time with his hands around her waist. He pinned her against a nearby wall and closed in a much awaited kiss. She blushed and closed her eyes with her lips parted. She could feel his breath on her lips, his lips on hers, like a gentle breeze. *Tring tring* her phone rang, bringing them both to the world. She blushed and was kind of irritated with whomever called her at the wrong time. It was Taani.. "Sharon bhabh...bhai teek haai na?" she asked. "Haan Taani wo , usse baat karna chahthi ho tum?" "nahi bhabh..Sharon" "Tum mujhe bhabhi bol sakthi ho.Abse." Sharon said, turning even more red. "Wha..what?! Bhabhi such?" "Much...abhi abhi hua..proposal aur confession." she said blushing , her face as red as a cherry. Taani had put it on speaker mode so Rey also heard it. "Woooh Sharon! Congrats! Aur waise mujhe pata hai tum Swayam ki ghar jaungi, tum pareshan lag rahi Thi jab mein Swayam ko chodne ke lie gaye the." Rey said. "Haan haan fine, ab hum saath mein hai aur jab tum aur Taani saath mein ho, do we disturb you lovebirds? " sharon "No" Swayam said "so now" sharon said "Do not disturb" Swayam completed and cut the phone. "So where were we?" Swayam asked sharon grinning naughtily at her, Sharon blushed a little, pulled Swayam closer by his shirt while his arms encircled her waist, "I think we were somewhere here, just a bit more closer." she said grinning a huge grin. As their lips met, they fell onto the couch sharon on top of Swayam. But even then they didn't stop, they kissed away passionately, letting their heart takeover their brains.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely work dear..

.i loved the way u have portrayed Sharon's reaction seeing swayam in pain...

gang was funny...

Loved the confession ...adorable👏


Sorry for my lame comment..my net is acting weird
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Lovely work dear..

.i loved the way u have portrayed Sharon's reaction seeing swayam in pain...

gang was funny...

Loved the confession ...adorable👏


Sorry for my lame comment..my net is acting weird

Thank you sooo much deeps di😃 and it doesn't matter if ots lame or awesome, U commented, that's matters to me and ily for that and your works ofc😆 THANKS again ⭐️😊
Luv,
Vadhana😊
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Originally posted by: sunvad278

Thank you sooo much deeps di😃 and it doesn't matter if ots lame or awesome, U commented, that's matters to me and ily for that and your works ofc😆 THANKS again ⭐️😊
Luv,
Vadhana😊



I will surely edit my comment here and give a long comment tomo...i loved this OS...

M glad u like my work 😳


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its a beautiful OS dear 😊

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