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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

loved it sunvad---and just came to know ur name is vandana...

nice name and nicer writing.

love--medha

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

awesome .. loved it..
beautiful..
both d boxes had everything abt them.. loved d way sharon stored everything n shared it with swayam.. d end was so so so cute n beautidul.. loved d way u explained how they were wen gang saw them was nice...

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Beautiful update dear...

loved the way u described those gifts ...the way u connected with the priced possession part was just so beautiful...

loved these lines..they were dreamy...i wish we could hear these lines in the show 😳😳😳...phew ..dreams

"you set fire to my prized possessions, remember?" she asked. He remembered of course he did, it was in the locker room...and he'd set fire to it, out of spite. He grinned sheepishly. She smiled, "I couldn't let go of it that easily" she said. Beneath that was a huge number of letters and pictures. Every letter contained something about him, it was all addressed to him. The beginning few were harsh but slowly their tone changed. From egoistic to admiration to like to pain to love. He understood what was in the letters. Her feelings, for him, everyday what she'd wanted to but had not told him. The initial few weren't addressed to hi., they were more of diary pages, but later on after the secret admirer incident the letters were to him, full of questions...one frequently asked was "How can you love me so much Swayam?".

How beautifully u showed her feelings changing with time😊😳

Then came the letters full of hatred for herself for deceiving him, for losing him, they had blood spots at some points, he touched them and let his tears fall on it. He smiled, as he saw the more recent ones, after foot loose, they were longer and filled with self doubt, and fright. Fright she wouldn't be able to love him as much. Then came the letters written when she was away...it was filled with love, love and love. And a bit of regret, coz of asthma. Later he came to the revelation letters, where he could see the spots where her tears had dried. Finally he saw the last one dated the previous day, filled with happiness love and dreams of their future.

AMAZING update swthrt ..loved the gang part...i would love to read this SS further 😳

Luv
Deep

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Loving the story :-) I'm happy you decided to continue the story please carry on pm'ing me

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sunvad278
this was my os in the swaron os contest...i reposted it coz i wanted to continue the os...

Oh, That's okay dear! 😃

In any case, a really wonderful OS it is! ^_^

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Thank you sooo much alll of y'all :-D I loved each and every one of your comments, likes and comments made me feel appreciated and loved😊 love y'all sooo frkin much, as much as Swayam luvs sharon 😆 a huge round of applause to my wonderful egg-straw-ordinary readers 👏

Here's the link to the next part 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3592183/swaron-ss-the-life-of-love