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Heya peeps...swaroniaans especially, after a n almost awesome precap triggering off positive vibes from swaron, hoping this time round we get a confession or even better, happily ever after...here's something for y'all :D I'm continuing an Os of mine...link is added...but as a different track if I'd like to call it...i don't think we'll see these scenes...so they stay limited to imagination :) Here's my part of imagination, what if swaron roles are reversed? My os was based on this, since I'm continuing it..there'll be parts on that basis as well as normal basis...didn't make sensedid it? Well you'll understand...once you start reading the story :P so what are we waiting for?! Read, like & comment :D
Continued from here: : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3537318/swaron-os-our-flame-of-love-will-keep-us-alive
3 years later: St.Louis college:
"And congrats once again to our graduates of 2016. May God bless and help you all to follow your passions and fulfill your duties to the society" Vp sir said into the mic. Cheers erupted from the stage as they threw their graduation caps into the air, somehappy at the prospect of finally being free from studies; some sad at leaving behind all the familiar faces and memories. Our gang came together for a group hug, careers established, still passionate about dance, held by the strong bond of friendship and love. Taarey were to be married in 6 months and preparations and teasing went hand in hand. It was a beautiful sight watching the group of twelve sing dil, dosti dance and side hug each other. Now that none of them had any college duties of being Gs ags cs and ACS, they'd decided, rather Taani had decided she will become manager to the D3 team. She shouldered the task of managing their appointments, fixing their costumes, updating their website, managing their academy too once they inaugrate it and also served as moral support, something she'd learnt from her honewali bhabhi. Sharon.
Sharon,hearing her name was magical, seeing her. Was surreal, being with her was out of this world, for our majnu, Swayam shekhawat, who was busy staring at sharon thinking of her reaction when he does it. He was in his world, knowing that they had passed 3 years of togetherness. 3 years during which they'd fallen more and more in love, although with misunderstandings, each fight paved way for more love. He smiled at the thought. Sharon meanwhile caught him looking at her while playing musical chairs, and wondered how could such a perfect person fall in love with her. Swayam knew if he stood that way any longer, she'll figure out his plans and so averted his eyes and moved away to the guys, who started teasing him. Meanwhile sharon looked at him, secretly grinning about her plan for the day. To her, Swayam was her better half, he completed her. She loved him for that. As the gang played musical chairs and other kiddish games, for the sake of reliving childhood and to celebrate the entry of adulthood, two minds wandered towards their respective plans for the end of the day.
"Mujhe Milo, party ke baad, terrace mein." Swayam texted her. Sharon smiled and nodded. Perfect timing and perfect place.
Later, Terrace:
Swayam waited for her anxiously, walking to and fro checking his watch, wondering when she would come. Sharon entered looking as delicate and divine as an angel, his angel. He smiled at the thought and went to her.
She stepped in to see him anxiously waiting for her, perfect. He saw her and smiled, she returned a huge grin. And both of them simultaneously came towards each other. Soon she was in her most safest place, her most comfortable place, his arms. He was holding his life in between his arms, his love, his sharon, his eternity. She stayed that way for so.etime and broke apart, looking into each others eyes. "kyun bulaya mujhe?" sharon asked. "Kyunki mujhe akela rehna hai tumhare saath" he replied. "You asked for it, zindagi bar yaad diladungi" she smirked. "Agar tum yaad diladungi tho mein bar bar bhul jaunga" he winked at her. They laughed together. "So, kaisi lag rahi thi main?" she asked lightly. "do I have to answer that? Bilkul pari jaise, khoobsurat as always" he replied smiling but his eyes spoke intense volumes on how she'd looked. As her eyes looked into his for the truth, her cheeks turned crimson, light at first and then darker as the intensity grew. He stroked her cheeks gently,"ye bhi khoobsurat hai, can't wait to see how much deeper can it get" he told her longingly. Unable to handle it she averted her gaze to the floor. "Sharon raiprakash, Sharma rahi hai?" he smirked, he loved the effect he had on her. "Agar abhi itni Sharma rahi ho, tho jab shaadi aur wo hoga tho tum kitni sharma hogi...ye mujhe dekhna hai" he told smirking all the while,gently stroking her red cheeks with his long fingers. "Dekhunga na? Dulha tum ho, aur dulhan main, tho wish fulfill hogi" she replied still averting his gaze, her heart racing as fast as it could. 'Perfect time don't miss it' her heart said. "Aur waise bhi" she continued looking up at him, "agar tum kisi aur chudail ke saath shaadi karoge na.." "Chudail, did u just say that? Omg Sharon raiprakash, chudail boli? Kaise?" he faked a surprised expression. They remembered that moment, before the concert, how expertly Swayam had managed that situation. "Haan mein boli, tho? Waise agar tum kisi chudail ke saath shaadi karoge tho main uss din shadi mein aakar kahogi ki...ki..." she stammered. "ki?" he asked smirking. "Ki...chodo usse, tum meri naam galat bol raha hai...mein Ms.Sharon Raiprakash nai, Mrs.Sharon Shekhawat hoon." she completed, happy that she'd taken the first step towards today's plan. "tum banogi, jab humare shaadi hogi, aur tujhe kaise patha, mein kisi aur ke saath shaadi nahi karunga?" he asked her playfully, teasing her. "Kyunki you're already taken mr.shekhawat, rightfully you should do this but, I'm gonna beat you to it" she said, and with that she brought out a red rose from her purse, "Swayam shekhawat, kya tum mujhe apne biwi banoge, so that mein tumhe zindagi bar dila sakun ki mein sharma sakti hoon, and that I love you from the bottom of my existence, with every breath and no one can stop that? Kyunki agar kisi ne mujhe rok liya ya phir Hume alag kare, tho mein ji nahi paungi...tumhare bina, kya tum mujhe introduce karvaunge tumhare family se as your soulmate and not as girlfriend, will you accept me as yours?" she asked all in one breath, as she paused for she want of breath and his reply, he gazed back at her, came towards her, and said," Tum already meri ho chuki ho, aur mein tumbe aaj propose Karnewale the..par you beat me to it" he whispered. She smiled as he retreated a huge genuine one, and hugged him tight giving him a big peck on his lips. They stood that way for quite sometime, as the moon showered its blessings on them. Two angelic lovers, on the threshold of entering a married life.
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Vadhana

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW..WOW...WOW...

New SS from YOU😊...

Loved the whole idea of last day of college..3 yrs of togetherness..hayeee...

Sharon proposed Swayam...couldn't get better thn this...

LOVED the 1st part..just AMAZING...

This SS going to be so much fun...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharon proposed Swayam?!?!!
wow i love that idea!!! loved their cute little naughty convo!!!
it was such a cute proposal!!!
Great start!!
and i can tell its only gonna get better!!!
can't wait so UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

Sharon proposed Swayam?!?!!

wow i love that idea!!! loved their cute little naughty convo!!!
it was such a cute proposal!!!😃
Great start!!
and i can tell its only gonna get better!!!
can't wait so UPDATE SOON!!!

@pink loved it
Sharon proposed Swayam?!?!!😳
update soon
will be waiting for the update eagerly
plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...u always surprise me by ur writing...nd do write regularly as u r the grt writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very happy with the responses...thank you so much...😃
A round of applause to you guys for being wonderful audiences readers 👏 without y'all we won't be here :)
Here's part 2: (a lil less on swaron though...next part I promise will be swaronlicious...btw the scene begins in the shekhawat residence where the gang's partying and the boys leave to rey's place and girls go to taani's room.) without further bak bak...
The trumpets and the drums played and the gang set the dance floor on fire. The girls were looking pretty in their lehengas and anarkalis, and the boys looked equally handsome in their sherwanis. The beat dropped a little later and a few minutes later the gang had vanished. The boys to Rey's dressing room and the girls to Taani's. A very protective brother hovered around his best friend and soon to be brother in law. "Dude! Ye meri shaadi hai...tumhare nai! Agar kisi ne dekhliya tho un logo ko lagoge ke tum dulha ho mein nai!" Rey told swayam. "Arrey mein shaadi ke baare mein na thodi pareshan hoon, mein aaj sharon ko officially propose karnewale hoon...aur mein mera proposal bhul gaya!!" he replied tensed. "Arrey jab hum yahan hao tho how can you fear?" the boys entered lead by Vicky. "Huh?!" swayam asked. "We'll help you...proposal tho humare liye piece of cake hai" nil said. "Nah agar mein aap logo ki baat sun liya tho sharon pucca mujhe dake se maregi!" Swayam replied remembering the last time he'd listened to them. "Chill Swayam, imagine this" rey said, and off they went into a dream sequence. 'Tum aur sharon mandap mein, aur tum sharon ki aankhon mein kho gaye ho, aur phir tum propose karoge' rey said 'Propose...' 'propose kaise karunga mein?!' swayam asked getting worked up. 'Bollywood style' Vicky piped up "sharon mujhe maar dalogi" swayam replied. "Tum cycle enter ho jao, aur ye kaho, agar tum mujhe nahi accept karogi tho mein mujhe maar dalunga" bharat said. "Wo threatening hai, proposal nai aur waise aap log ye chodo, mein meri style mein propose karunga, the majnu style" swayam said putting on shades and then he winks. "You mean the lover boy style" Nil said making a heart next to his. "Exactly!" swayam grinned. "Boring..." Amar said "Sharon ko naturalistic proposal achi lagegi go for it" Rey said.
The bharaat started and Rey jumped making the rest of them startled. "Guys chale?!" he asked, putting on the turban ready to be a dashing dulha.
The boys (men wever) danced their way to the marriage venue, with rey on the traditional horse and all. They entered the hall and saw the entire hall decorated with flowers and lights, with the entire shekhawat and singhania clan assembled together. There was a very contagious festive mood in the air, exciting the gang entering the hall even more. Rey was made to sit at the sacred fire, and swayam stood behind him. Then arrived the bride, decked up in heavy bridal attire, shy coz of her friends teasing her. All the eyes were on the bride except one set of eyes which was on the person next to the bride. Swayam was stunned into silence, marvelling over her beauty. He had eyes only for her, time stood still in his world when he saw her in a sari, that clung to her elegantly, making her look regal and out of this world. Sharon saw Swayam gawking at her, at smiled, happy no, more than happy at the effect. Still smiling and controlling her laughter at his expression, she tilted her head slightly as to ask him what. He shook his head dying nothing, finally closing his mouth. The poor fly which, if given a second more, could have taken a tour into swayam shekhawat buzzed of in another direction. Sad indeed isn't it? Swayam averted his eyes, lest he faint unable to bear her beauty, to his friend who was still in the same position as he was a few minutes back. "Shut the waterfalls" he whispered to the gang who were busy admiring at their respective girls. Rey hadn't revived yet," Rey control, Taani yahan hi aa rahi hai, you can drool later too" he told into rey's ear. Rey controlled his expression and retorted, "Tho tum kya kar raha tha? Jab sharon aayi?" "Mein? Meine kya kiya?" he replied with an innocent expression. "Tune kuch nahi kiya?" asked Rey "Nahi kuch nahi" he replied smirking. "Arrey rey kya guss gussa rahe ho tum dono? Kahi tune mind change nahi kiya na rey?" Vicky asked. "Taani ko chodke...Swayam?"Nil pondered. "Aisa kuch nahi hai, chee, he's isn't good" Rey chided them. "Ey, i make a good boyfriend k?" Swayam inserted. "Kya" Rey asked. "Kya ho raha hai?" Mr. Shekhawat had come to see what were they talking so seriously. "kuch nahi puppa, bas aise hi" Swayam answered. "Tumhe yaad hai na? Shaadi ke baad kya..." Puppa asked. "ji yaad hai, bhul kaise saktha hoon?" he replied smiling. "Ha, ye lo dulhan aa gayi...bohot pyaari lag rahi ho tum aaj" puppa complimented Taani. "Thank you tauji" she replied smiling. Swayam saw her again, and do i need to say more? "Stunning" swayam said, not realising what he said. "Thank you bhai" Taani replied. "Haan stunning tum bhi lag rahi ho" swayam said looking at his sister with affection. "Tum bhi...matlab pehla stunning was for someone else..." Simmi caught him. "Jiske liye tha wo samaj gayi" he replied smiling at sharon's slight blush. "Are you blushing?!" Rinni exclaimed. "Me blushing? Pfft kuch bhi" she chided, trying to cover up. "Hmmm we knowing everything sharon" neha said grinning. "Haan Hume patha hai, aap blushing types ho" aashi said. "Ok chodo usse, before rey gets anymore anxious, let's start the rituals?" swayam asked diverting the topic and saving Sharon.
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Vadhana <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...gang mastii...taani-rey wedding me Swaron romance..

Swayam's majnu boy style proposal

WOW...going to be awesome😊

Update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharon proposed Swayam?
i love the idea
loved it whole..
Rey nd taani's marriage nd swaron llhh
great update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both the updates are lovely ❤️
Sharon proposed Swayam!! that was awesome ❤️
the gang part was hilarious!!
Swayam's majnu style proposal waiting for it!!!! 😛
awesome work 👏
Do update soon 😆
and plz pm me when u update 😊
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I'm really sad with this part...it didn't come out as planned :(
so any kind of comments is accepted. Even no likes or no comments is accepted coz this is just a piece of crap. Next update hopefully turns out well😕
Engagement:
The marriage took place and after all the pheras and all were done, it was masti time for the gang. Dance performances were put up, one by the group, showcasing the future life of taarey and their congrats and one by our swaron, on the journey of taarey. Swayam entered the stage as the crowd waited, patiently for him. The music played, it was a fusion of songs which started from chup chup ke and then went to maula mere, and then it came to Zara Zara. (Pls imagine a few steps from every song sequence performed by swaron) They danced, initially to the music, but slowly the essence changed, from for the audience, to passion. They were passionate about each other and their dance reflected it, in terms of intensity. As they swayed gracefully and passionately, they were caught in their world. The music came to an end and so did they, eyes still locked they turned a deaf ear to the cheers of the audience. Until...
'Ahem, hmmm' it startled them. "Beta, tum kuch karnewale hai na?" Swayam's mom reminded him quietly. He looked at sharon now blushing with Simmi and rinni teasing her. 'Well she's occupied, time to do it' signalling to the gang to take Simmi and rinni from the stage, he turned and went backstage. Sharon meanwhile was clueless about where he'd gone, and her eyes scanned the crowd trying to locate him. Until nilesh and Amar came to take rinni and Simmi away. And then he entered.
He made his way through the crowd with a hand full of fresh orchids, and just as he was about to step onto the stage, his dad announced "aap sabke liye, esp sharon ke liye ye bahot bada surprise hoga, Hume socha ki iss khoobsurat din ko aur khoobsurat banane ke liye, hum ye decide kar liye the ki aaj humare bete ka engagement hoga." The audience now having only close relatives and friends, applauded.
Meanwhile, on the stage, our love birds had already escaped into a world which consisted of only them, their small cute little world, where they could do as they wished. The applause of the audience brought them back to reality.
Swayam gracefully went onto his knees, never breaking the eye contact, "I know ki hum already engaged hai, still, I want to do this right, Will you please make a tiny change to your name, so that people will address you as Mrs.shekhawat and not Ms.raiprakash? Kya tum mere saath zindagi bar rahungi, putting up with everything I might do or say, can we make more memories to add to our hearts and of course the boxes, to look at it during our last days, kya tum mera ban kar, mere liye ek aur pari dedungi, jisse mein pyaar kar saktha tumahare tarah? I promise, mein tumhare saath doonga, kisi bhi haalat mein, in life and death, sirf aur sirf tumhare saath, kyunki sirf tum hi ho, jisse mein sabse zyaada pyaar karta hoon." he said with an intensity that left her heart fluttering fast. "Agar mein na keh diya tho?" she asked. "Tum na nahi kahogi, mujhe humara pyaar par pura barosa hai" he replied smiling. "Tho haan, mein tumhare saath shaadi karungi" she replied blushing with each word, her voice overcome with shyness. "Kya kaha?" he asked innocently. She glared at him, and screamed "Haan, mein tumhara saath shaadi karungi" "That's more like my siren" he grinned before getting up to get the tiny velvet white box which had two rings in it. He carefully took out one, very elegant ring, which was intricately designed. It looked fragile, the ring was designed in such a way that the curves curved to form 2 S's with a diamond in each curve. He slowly slid it onto her finger, all the looking into her eyes which were filled with unshed tears. She took the other ring and slid it on to his finger blushing fiercely. And once that was over, they smiled, her vision turning a bit blurry coz of the tears. One drop ran across her cheek and before it could fall he wiped it away shaking his head, and pulled her into a hug. She melted away in his arms, "waise tum aaj bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho" he whispered into her ears. She was happy beyond limits, it was perfect, everything was at that moment. His compliment, she'd missed but now she felt complete, perfect.
As they hugged the entire hall cheered, throwing rose petals on the couple now lost in each others embrace. The gang rushed to the stage and hugged them tightly. while the boys thumped Swayam on his back, the girls hugged sharon, congratulating her. Their parents came onto the stage and swaron seeked their blessings. "Mujhe nahi patha tha ki, mera beta ko intna acche se propose karna aata hai" his dad told. "Unhe...usse..un..uss..Swayam ko bohot kuch aata hai, meine kaha na wo bohot talented hai, perfect hai aapka beta" she told his dad. "Meine aapko ye kab se keh rahi Thi, lagta hai aapko aapki bahu ki Baath par zyaada barosa hai." his mom told. "kyun nahi hongi, wo humara bete par phd ki hai, tho kaise nahi karunga baarosa?" his dad told smiling, making sharon go red again. "Bahot pyaari lag rahi hai meri bahu, Sharma ke" his mom told. Meanwhile Swayam who had just come back after talking to rey said "Wo pyaari nai khoobsurat hai, as always" she blushed deeper, "Tho tumhari mumma khoobsurat nahi hai? Jab tum chote tha, tab tum hamesha keh raha tha ki tum meri tarah khoobsurat ladki ke saath shaadi karoge, tab mein khoobsurat tha aur ab kya hua?" his mom faked a sad face. "Shaadi tho kar raha hoon na ma, aapki tarah khoobsurat ladki ke saath" he replied. She felt his arm snaking around her waist, pulling her close. "Swayam chodo, kya kar rahi ho?" she muttered. "Mujhe pura haq hai, meri honewali biwi ko pass lane ka" she muttered back, she was speechless and her face grew hotter. "Hum kuch nahi kahoge, Jo karna hai karo" his mom told her, noticing her son's noticed. That made both of them go red. "Aah Mr.Shekhawat, kya hum thodi der Baath kar sake? Joint venture ke baare mein?" mr.raiprakash came with his wife. "haan kyun nai, Swayam tum bhi aaoge? Ya tum Sharon ke saath rehna hai?" he asked. "Aap mujhe pooch rahe hai?" he asked surprised. It was still hard to digest the fact his dad actually liked him. "Haan aur kisse?" he asked. "Ji aap jaayeye aur mein dho minute nein aapko join kartha hoon" he replied smiling a bit. Both the dads left talking. "Mein abhi aaunga, aur Sharon thank you ye sab le liye" he whispered into her ears, gave her a peck on the cheek which surprised her and gained a lot of awwws from the on lookers.
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Love,
Vadhana

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