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Posted: 12 years ago
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Next day at st.louis:
The sun rose beautiful and in full glory, waking up 2 souls, who were lost in the most sweetest of dreams. Dreams of togetherness, and love. Swayam and sharon now in their respective homes woke up, each with a smile on their lips. The promise of togetherness and unity for an eternity still in their hearts. Sharon kept smiling and was lost in her Swayam world and Swayam in his sharon world both in their swaron land (just like us ;)). Their alarms beeped, bringing them back to earth and reminding them of their duties to be fulfilled. And so they rose and went through the daily notions that every human had to go through irrespective of weather in love or not. Finally dressed up and fresh and excited, sharon stood in front of her mirror, wearing a white dress looking as dainty as an angel, pari as he called her, his pari, siren pari. *beep beep* her mobile beeped. "Good morning love. You looking stunning (as always) in white. ;) be ready, I'm coming in 5 mins." She smiled and wondering how he knew she'd worn white. And right after 5 mins he heard him ringing her doorbell, well before that, coz her heart had started doing its flips just as he neared her house, a sign she always got when he was near by. She rushed to open it, with a huge smile on her face. He had worn his light blue checked shirt, the one she'd loved the most, coz of the dance camp. "Ready?" he asked. She nodded blushing. He put out an arm smiling, and she showed him a bit of attitude, and slapped his hand away. Shocked he looked at her, and she burst into giggles and held his arm. And hand in hand they went down. She was surprised on seeing only his cycle, and no car or anything else, and before she could speak, "Aaj hum cycle mein japaungi? Coz you know how special it is to me...and don't worry if you're uncomfortable then I can ask the driver to get the car." he told her. "Koi baat nahi, I want to go by cycle with you, close to her heart, just like before." she replied looking at him. "Agar koi dekh liya tho?" he asked. "tho? Tho kya? Mein meri boyfriend cum fiancee ke saath hoon so usme problem kya hai?" she asked raising an eyebrow. "Nothing" he replied with his eyebrows raised, "so chale?" his smile had returned. "let's go." she beamed. He sat on his cycle and helped her onto it. As they drove, she held his hands for support and helped him drive. "You know you're driving me insane." he whispered into her ears. She looked up and smiled "and I love it" she replied sweetly. He looked at her forgetting about the cycle for the moment, when suddenly someone beeped loudly in front of them, quickly making them snap back into their senses. As they swerved to avoid the car coming in the opposite direction shaaron shut her eyes in fright. After sometime she felt swayam's lips at her ear, "We're safe" she opened her eyes and sighed in relief. "ok I'm not gonna distract you until we reach college" she decided and kept still.
Swayam left his cycle in the stand and looked at sharon who waited patiently. Then he came to her and together they walked, talking about what to do that day, and sharon entwined her hand with Swayam's. He looked at her surprised yet again, and remembering her talk earlier smiled happily.
Meanwhile in the atrium,
"Guys do you think swayam aa paunga? I mean sprain tho lagi hai na? And he didn't come yesterday for rehearsals." nil said. "Sharon bhi nahi aayi" rinni said. "Sharon bhi nahi, swayam bhi nahi...kahi ye dono..." Vicky trailed off. "Sharon and swayam saath mein? Ye not being possible babu" Neha said. "nahi ho saktha bey, sharon sirf galli marthi hai Swayam ko" barath added. "oh come on guys, it's not in that stage still, I mean sharon's changed aur swayam bhi, wo dono ab friends hai, you guys saw na how they were talking and laughing during rehearsals?" Simmi said thoughtful. "Haan isliye lo meile ye keh laha hoon ki, kahi swayam aul sharon saal mein hain..." Amar spoke up. "Huh?" the gang stared at him. "Guys ye keh raha hai ki isliye ye keh raha hai ki swayam aur sharon saath mein hai..." rinni said. "Ye bilkul impossible hai" Nil said. Taani and Rey just looked at each other and smirked, thinking of the shock they were about to get.
"Hi guys" Sharon's voice came followed by Swayam's "Aur kya impossible hai?" "ye lo aagaye ye don...OMG!!!!" and the gang gasped while taarey just stood silently and laughed. "Someone pinch me, ye dream tho nai?" rinni exclaimed. "Ouch" she yelled when Simmi pinched her. "Taani went and hugged sharon "Congrats bhabhi" she said happily while rey just hi 5 ed Swayam and hugged them both. "You both knew?" Nil asked. "And you guys didn't tell us?!" Simmi asked incredulous. "Yaar obviously they'll know, afterall sharon Taani ka honewali bhabhi hai na?" Vicky said. "Haan family types ban gayi tho obviously rey aur taani knowing types hogi swayam and sharon ki baare mein" aashi spoke up. "Types again" the gang said and smirked. Aashi smiled, with a knowing and happy for it smile. "ab tho Hume treat types chahiye!!" aashi said. "Treat hogi, chale canteen ke taraf?" swayam asked all of them. "Let's go!" they choruses. "Ek minute guys, I'll join you in a bit" sharon said . Swayam looked at her and motioned her inhaler, she nodded and she left. "Mujhe bhi ek kaam hain i'll join you all in 5 mins, you guys start" swayam said. "Ohooo, ye lo Sharon gayi ek minute ke liye aur swaym ko bardash nahi paa rahi hai...isse kehte hai chemistry..." nil said. "Shut up, kuch bhi!" swayam said and left. Soon after that, the gang started moving toward the canteen when rey stopped them and asked them to follow him.
Meanwhile swayam had gone to the boys locker room to get sharon's inhaler if she needed it. He got a message from sharon asking him to meet her in the rehearsal hall. Wondering why...he left.
Part 3 done hope U guys like it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Lovelyyy update dear...
Cycle ride made me nostalgic...
Gang knows that they are together...
Awww..cute update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh lovely and the cycle-----ooohhh---dream
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
loved the update. really cute 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
wow
lovely update
really liked it a lot
thank u for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute update loved it.. awesome.. cycle ride was nostalgic.. loved gang's interception of how n y swaron wont happen was cute.. loved d way gang was shocked wen they saw swaron together.. rey following swaron???? waiting to know y sharon called swayam to Rh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i'll complete this part by 12:00 today, hopefully 😲 so until then,
Part 4:Rehearsal hall, sharon opened the door and stepped in to be greeted by a huge banner with her and swayam's photo below which it was written sharon loves swayam. On another poster was written together for an eternity; eternal lovers-swaron...and so on. From the corners hung pretty pink orchids wound with white lilies. In the centre of a mat of rose petals lay a table with a chocolate cake. In the corner lay two boxes, one in white and one in red.
Sharon sent a text saying 'just as i told...thanks' to rey and smiled lost in her world. The hall held a special meaning to her, this is what connected them, their passion, their dance. Dance was her first love, his too, and their love bought them together, first made them notice each other, made them fall in love, made them get to know the other, changed them forever. What couldn't be expressed through words was expressed through their dance. Be it love, asthma or anything else.
Sharon called him, and heard his phone ringing nearby. She quickly went switched off the lights and hid behind the music system, and watched him enter.
He entered into pitch darkness, except for what the ray of light showed him, he could see nothing else, he was shocked when suddenly even that got cut. He looked behind and the door was shut. He felt her behind him, her hands quietly blind folding him, and then holding his hands. "Happy Birthday Swayam" she whispered into his ears. He was surprised and happy. Surprised she knew something no one else but Taani did, and happy that she knew. He felt her, slowly leaving him...and he groped in the darkness wanting to see her feel her...after which he removed the blindfold. What he saw stunned him, he stood rooted to the spot. He took in his surroundings, from the candle lit red hearts hanging from above, to the posters, to the orchids and lilies, and then he spotted her, waiting, anticipating his reaction. Judging his expressions. He solemnly looked back at her, his face not giving away any signs of how blessed, happy, special and loved he felt. His heart was singing its happiness. He watched as her face turned into an expression of doubt and then it fell. He slowly walked towards her, and pulled her against his chest, by now she could take no more, her tears almost fell when he caught it on his palm, shook his head and whispered, "I love you sharon, and I loved this". Saying so he gave her a peck on her cheek. "No more sharon, you won't cry coz of me any more, tears of sadness will not fall from your eyes coz of me, if U cry, it'll only be tears of happiness." he said and kissed away her tears gently. She looked at him and smiled. "Glad you like it" she said. "How can I not like it? Afterall you did this, and every little thing you do is precious to me" he replied. He pulled her into a hug, "you are the most precious thing that's happened to me, and no matter how you seem to the world, you'll always be out of this world for me. Meri khoobsurat pari, meri siren sharon, my sharon" he said in a voice filled with emotion, the emotion if love, pure and true love. "I love you Swayam" she choked out. They broke the hug and held hands. She turned him around and he saw the cake and the rose petals, he smiled. She lead him towards the cake and together they cut ut and fed each other.
Meanwhile the gang alongwith rey had come, in time to see Swaron feed each other. The girls went awww and the guys went chemistry. Swaron saw them and as each one came to wish Swayam a happy birthday, sharon left his side and admired him, wondering how could someone so perfect, be in love with someone like her. So lost in him she was that she didn't notice Taani and Simmi sneak up next to her. "Ahem ahem" they coughed, bringing her back to reality. "Bhabhi aap kahan kho gaye?" Taani asked. "Tumhari bhabhi, tumhata bhai mein kho gaye" Simmi replied and as sharon blushed, they both hi 5ed each other and nudged sharon. "Girls stop it!" she said, and left.
"Pehla nasha, pehla khunar, naya pyaar hai, naya intezaar..." came a voice which made all of them quiet. Swayam looked in the direction of the voice and saw her singing their song, looking at him from a corner. "Meri pehli pyaar, dance, dance ki wajah hua hai meri asli pyaar, tumse...tum meri akri pyaar nahi ho kyunki, humara bacche bhi hai, jisko mein pyaar karungi. Ek ladka aur ek ladki, who'll be exactly like you, in every aspect, perfect, unlike me. Aur phir humara grandchildren, humara family. Choti si cute si family. And then i'll fade away from this world, with you by my side, cherishing every moment I spent with you, good or bad, doesn't matter, as long as you're by my side...everyday will be beautiful when you're with me...and at the end of each day shall be a souvenir which i'll keep safe, so that we can re live it again until our last breath. Even if one of us is called early, we won't miss each other, coz we're with each other, in our hearts." she said still looking into his eyes. Swayam who was smiling at first, now had tears in his eyes like the rest of the gang. He moved swiftly to her side and hugged her, " Never ever talk about you being imperfect or about leaving me again, ever again!" he said shaking her a bit. "Tum perfect ho, mere liye, out of this world aur extraordinary ho!" he said pulling her into another hug.
The gang cheered and clapped. Swaron who had forgotten that they were around broke apart and sheepishly looked at them, blushing. The guys surrounded Swayam, and the girls around sharon, each one congratulating them again. Swaron unable to do anything just kept looking at each other longingly, rey who noticed this, "Guys so hum chale canteen pe? Treat hai na??" he diverted their attention. "oh haan!" they said and left leaving swaron alone.
"phew" they let out a big sigh. Sharon took his hand again, and lead him to another corner, where the two boxes lay, she asked him to open the red one first.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...that was such a beautiful update...

I loved the way u showed Sharon doing all these things for her Swayam...

Till now we have seen only Swayam planning everything...the ROLE REVERSE is cute and adorable...

These lines by sharon were beautiful..heavenly

"Pehla nasha, pehla khunar, naya pyaar hai, naya intezaar..." came a voice which made all of them quiet. Swayam looked in the direction of the voice and saw her singing their song, looking at him from a corner. "Meri pehli pyaar, dance, dance ki wajah hua hai meri asli pyaar, tumse...tum meri akri pyaar nahi ho kyunki, humara bacche bhi hai, jisko mein pyaar karungi. Ek ladka aur ek ladki, who'll be exactly like you, in every aspect, perfect, unlike me. Aur phir humara grandchildren, humara family. Choti si cute si family. And then i'll fade away from this world, with you by my side, cherishing every moment I spent with you, good or bad, doesn't matter, as long as you're by my side...everyday will be beautiful when you're with me...and at the end of each day shall be a souvenir which i'll keep safe, so that we can re live it again until our last breath. Even if one of us is called early, we won't miss each other, coz we're with each other, in our hearts."

Loved this update...Swaron with Gang is just PERFECT ...beautifully written part dear👏👏

Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

WOW...that was such a beautiful update...

I loved the way u showed Sharon doing all these things for her Swayam...

Till now we have seen only Swayam planning everything...the ROLE REVERSE is cute and adorable...

These lines by sharon were beautiful..heavenly

"Pehla nasha, pehla khunar, naya pyaar hai, naya intezaar..." came a voice which made all of them quiet. Swayam looked in the direction of the voice and saw her singing their song, looking at him from a corner. "Meri pehli pyaar, dance, dance ki wajah hua hai meri asli pyaar, tumse...tum meri akri pyaar nahi ho kyunki, humara bacche bhi hai, jisko mein pyaar karungi. Ek ladka aur ek ladki, who'll be exactly like you, in every aspect, perfect, unlike me. Aur phir humara grandchildren, humara family. Choti si cute si family. And then i'll fade away from this world, with you by my side, cherishing every moment I spent with you, good or bad, doesn't matter, as long as you're by my side...everyday will be beautiful when you're with me...and at the end of each day shall be a souvenir which i'll keep safe, so that we can re live it again until our last breath. Even if one of us is called early, we won't miss each other, coz we're with each other, in our hearts."

Loved this update...Swaron with Gang is just PERFECT ...beautifully written part dear👏👏

Luv
Deep

Thank U thank U thank U sooo much :D
I luvd ur comment, btw...d Hindi part was correct? Coz I don't speak Hindi...much...so idk :P
still THANK YOU deeps di 😃
Luv,
Vadhana :)

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