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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello, people..😊
Here is my another OS... written for Pratik' s Birthday.(Pratik54000)
A biggie vala thanku and hug to Deepika dii...luv ya dii..🤗
So, without much ado..Here u go...


I am in Love.

Enough, yaar sharzie...Its just a Sangeet function..not marriage...

Ohh God...u will always be a jhalli kriyo...I mean its your sangeet, YOUR SANGEET...and u...from past one hour you aren't allowing me to dress u up properly...

But Sharz, I don't want to look Chinese makeup ki dukaan...ek ghante se pata nahi, kya kya laga rahi hai mere face pe... Vaise bhi whoz gonna see me...everyone is coming to enjoy...

Arrey Rey is there na,... my JIIJUU... he will see u...

I didn't mean that re... he wont come and notice that the shade on my eye is light or dark.. I mean common yaar...

Saying this, Kriya, turned her head towards Sharon who was behind her...looking at her hairs..Both facing the mirror...

Shut up kriyo... Let me finish...don't move..And she made her sit properly, and started doing something

I toh say even you shoudn't do much of your looks...Swayam already likes you...So, kisko dikhaana hai... Sharon on hearing this, suddenly stopped her hand...And gave a light smile...

OMG, blushing haaan...

Shut- up ... She was blabbering with words, to hide her smile... Shut up kriyo...He doesn't like me or something like that, we are just class mates... nothing else... and yeah...soon is he gonna be your devar...

Let it be now, Sharz..Don't fool me... I know that he likes you, I have seen it...And I have seen that same thing in your eyes too... Stop faking around...now..ohk...

Hey, what are you.. saying..k..k...kuch nahi hai aisa...

Ohh pull-e-e-z Sharz, Chal tell me, Did he say it..

She asked with glint and excitement in her eyes...waiting for Sharon's reply...

Sharon now thought it is useless to hide anything from her sister.. as it is..she will find out herself..even if she denies...

No..actually he didn't say anything, thats the problem kriyo' Shayad main hi galat interpret kar rahi hun...

No, Sharz..He will say re...give him some time...and may be, he says today...you are looking gorgeous in this graghra..

She said winking at Sharon...Sharon left smiling...

Jaldi kar...yaarr...Rey dude...pichle 2 min se baal thik raha hai apne...Said irritated Swayam

Mere pyaare chhotte bhaiya...Rey said teasing him softly... 2 min hi liye hai..aap bol toh aise rahe hai, jaise 2 ghante se idhar hi hun... HE said a bit louder and faster... And Yeh Sahhii..hai...khud ready ho jaao Dulhe se pehle, fir usko sunao..tu hamesha kitni der baal banata hai..vo bolu kya...haan bol bolu kya..?

Aye, chal chal ab time mat waste kar..Mr. Dulha...and aaj dulha, nahi hai tu..ajj sirf Sangeet hai..badi jaldi hai tujhe... Said Swayam, keeping his arm around his shoulders.

Dekha...ab aaya track pe..Sirf baal and Sharon hi hai jo tera muh band kara sakte hai... Rey said smirking..

Swayam's eyes widened...He was thinking that what reply should he give..

Dude, jaldi chal, mujhe dekhna hai ki Sharon ne sab arrangements thik se kiye yaa nahi...Kal se bada udd rahi hai...

Arrangements Dekhne ki jaldi yaa Sharon ko Dekhne ki? haaan,,bol Dekh dude, I know you like her...and I m sure she likes you too..and 4 saal se sath rehte ho..ek hi college mein ho, ek hi class mein ho, aadha time, ek dusre k ghar pe hote ho...Toh ye sab toh banta hai boss... Rey said calmly and assuringly.

Ohh hello,...ye sab matlab...Aisa kuch nahi hai...

Swayam yaar, bas.. melodrama mat kar... Abey.. fattu...bol de na usko dil ki baat...kya fattu bhai hai mera...koi mujhe bachao..Dekh, swayam, aaj mauka mila hai, chauka tu maar de..main toh bolta hun seedha chakka maar...

Swayam pulled Rey outside the house as will he was still blabbering...

They were in the car heading towards Kriya's place.

On their way, Swayam received a call from Nil..asking about his whereabouts...Nil was telling him something about game and challenge...

Actually, since whole of the gang was to be present at the venue, Sharon had decided to play some games...in which boys and girls would form two separate teams...

Both the brothers had now reached the mansion, looking equally charming...soon they entered and caught the attention of the crowd...Every girl present there had only two things to speak...how lucky Kriya was to find Rey,.. how lucky they would be if they get Swayam..

But these two were lost in their own world...searching for their world...

Rey sat there where the dulha was supposed to sit...and Swayam moved away to check all the arrangements..and to find faults in them... as Sharon had done them..So he somehow wanted that he should get a chance to pinpoint Sharon...But all in vain.. everything was just so perfect...

He moved towards the place where he was ought to meet the gang..he found the gang there..but his eyes were searching Sharon..

His heart is telling him that the reason behind his such restlessness on not finding Sharon is because he loves her...he always awaits for her single look...and today is a special day too..

Whereas his brain is covering up and saying that he is waiting for Sharon because he has to co-ordinate with her for the necessary arrangements..

It was a gift asked by Rey and Kriya for their wedding that Swayam and Sharon together plan the wedding ...and specially highlighted TOGETHER.. so that they don't goof up this time...they always mess up...whenever they meet..

Its their way of showing care towards each other..atleast this way they get a reason to talk...Their fights always end up sweetly where Swayam...at last apologizes just to bring a smile on Sharon's face...But Sharon...she takes this as her victory...Poor souls actually.

After meeting whole of the gang...and answering everyone about this whereabouts..They all settle down..Girls on the either side discussing about their silly talks whereas boys on the other pulling each other's leg.

Finally, the wait was over as everyone saw Sharon bringing down Kriya. Everyone's gaze was fixed at the two living angels making their way through the pavement...Of course Rey and Swayam were in the league as to who can stare the most...

And Kriya and Sharon were just whispering and giggling all through the way...

Everybody settled down...Kriya sat besides Rey and Sharon opposite to Swayam...

It was time for some fun...all the people had joined the gang for the game...The game was as such that both the teams had to sing a song...and then dance with any member of the other team.

The bottle was spinned and the girls took the lead...Aashi sang a song...and sprang in the centre...dancing...There bharat also joined Aashi... soon gang joined them.

In the same way...every team started a song...and danced on it...complete fun and entertainment.. Kriya and Rey also enjoyed...and joined them too...

It was last round and Sharon's turn.

Sharon showed a thumb's down to swayam..and mouthed loser.. and moved towards Kriya.. She hugged her from behind and looked and Swayam and sang Didi, tera devar deewaana...pointing at Swayam...

Soon all the girls joined and were head on teasing Swayam...

In response even Swayam started...He took Kriya's hand hugged her from the shoulder...Bhabhi teri behna ko maana... He danced with kriya first...and then caught Sharon's hand...He was teasing her on one hand and dancing with Kriya on the other...He winked at her...brought her where he was dancing and purposely bagan to irritate her..by trying to hold her from the waist..each time he would, she would remove his hand and try to move away..and he again caught her... He lifted her up...and brought back to the stage again when she ran away...

Soon this cute little moment turned enjoyable...All boys and girls were teasing laughing enjoying and dancing.

Suddenly, there was electric failure, all the lights in the hall and the place were off...

Sharon herself was panicked but made others settle down...

She told that she would check and come back..and Swayam accompanied her.

Swayam: Hey Sharon wait, let me also come with you..

Sharon: Umm.. no.. Ohk wait..let me get a candle by the time you wait here...we will check fuse..I think its only a normal trip due to overload. Wait let me come.

She gets the candle and they both move towards the meter box...

Swayam: vaise bhi its at a height, ur hand won't reach.. let me check..

Sharon glares at him..but then allows him to see...

Swayam on the other hand is busy looking at her...her glowing face was more enlightened by the golden rays from the candle...Her beauty and her perfect features were at its best..her traditional attire ...to the candle lit face...all pointed towards one thing according to Swayam.."Sharon is so beautiful...naa.. Sharon is khoobsurat...

He somehow had waited for this so long..but now he had decided that no more..

He once looked at the fuse...it was completely normal...he had to just pull up the MCB trip..

Sharon: Careful swayam..

She said fumbling..she had panicked a bit due to sudden power failure when all the guests...are there at the palace.

Swayam slowly moved towards her...and looked at her..brought her close to himself..and mouthed don't worry...assuring that everything is fine...

He gently moved her hand a bit sideways because she was holding candle in that hand..he took candle little away..pulled her towards himself..she bumped into his chest...

She had a mixture of worry and confusion on her face. Swayam asked to listen.

Sharon had got a slight Idea as to what Swayam had to say. She looked at him with patience and pleading eyes.

Swayam finally gathered courage and spoke up.

Jab pehli baar tumko dekha toh pata nahi tha k pyaar kya hota hai...

.Lekin ab shayad samajh paaya hun,...

He said piercing his gaze in to her eyes.

Agar kisi k saath din raat... ek ek second spend karne ka mann karetoh I think I am in love ...

He continued speaking softly and gently.

Class me sath vali seat khali dekhkar agar dil ki dhadkan tham jaaye toh ,... toh ,... toh I think I am in love

Andhere mein kisike sath agar wire repair karne me mazza aaye toh I think m in love ...

Sharon, tumhara naam sunte hi chehre par ek ...He smiled staring at Sharon's lips... ek hasi aa jati hai

Main aakhen bandh karta hun toh tumhe dekhta hun..,

aankhen kholta hun toh tumhe dekhna chahta hun...

Tum paas nahi hoti toh tumhe charo taraf mehsus karta hun, har vaqt, har ghadi, har lamha ...

Aur meri aankhen apne aap tumhe dhundhne lagti hai...

Electric failure toh kya, life ka har failure, life ki har victory tumhare bina adhuri hai

Thik ussi tarah har love story un 3 shabdon k bina adhuri hai ...

Sharon raiprakash, I love u.

He said it all with immense love in his eyes...She had teary eyes knowing the fact that he too loves her...that too so much...

She smiled looking at him...She was crying at the same time...And she left the candle and hugged him tight...Swayam too caught her..and she whispered..I love you too Swayam.

--The End--

PS: Ending is inspired from a show.😳

Hope U all liked it..would be waiting to know how boring was it.? Criticism Most welcomed

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW that was one longgg OS 😆 But it was really wonderful. A very nice read. Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is one of the os which I want to read again n again.
It was just simple,cute n yet the most beautifull os among ur all os
Loved the ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Ritz tu kamal ki hai
I could only blush and smile
and Aaj Kal aashiqui 2 ka nasha chada hai toh Aur bhi Acha laga
awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww sweet cutee and lovely os<3<3<3
:-):-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc os
i had read it on bday thread
very well written
keep writing more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os ria

swaron were so cute

and swayam's line were so touchy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ria,,

i saw this on pratk's b'day bash thread once...

and i'm glad u made it into a separate topic so i can comment on it now.

i loved how lovey dovey swaron got...and how both fell simultaneously in love

and kriyaansh sangeet...wow.

also...the sibling concept of kriya sharon, rey swayam...loved it.

loved your writing ...and your storytelling is like i'm hearing it...not reading it... mentioned this before and saying it again.brilliant dialogues.

love---medha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great OS!!!!
i luved the ending part!!!!
that was such a beautiful speech!!!
it was like oozing with so much love!!!!!
THat was SOOO cute!!!!!!!
really nice and cute OS!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, i know about u'r os..I read it from pratik bhai's b'day thread..So,the one shot was Oosum..i really like the concept..and its beautifull gift from u'r side to pratik...

I really love the ending part..The way u show swaron fall in love with each other..just Oosum..and yes,i liked the ending part of swayam..

So,in short..i just loved it...Wonderfully written..I enjoyed a perfect read..

Thanx for pm

Prateek

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