SwaRon OS: Say That U Love Me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello people,

As I finished with my exams today, I am posting this OS. And I would keep bothering u all frequently now.. Plz bear me..😆😆

Its my first attempt in writing a sweet vala OS

A big vala thanks to deepa dii, aruba and aaditya. :)

Plz tell me, how boring was it..? 😊 I would wait for replies...

So here u go with the OS.



SwaRon OS: Say That You Love Me.


Girls, I tell u, the most complicated species on earth. How on earth can person get his things done from a girl? I mean, I know that she loves me; even she knows that she loves me. But she wouldn't say that. I don't know what the problem in saying is. Actually there is no problem; she isn't saying it just because I want her to say.

There had been a significant change in our equation these days. I got to know about her asthma; in fact she only disclosed it to me. I broke up with her at that time with the fear that I may keep her stressed. I was broken, completely shattered. But, I had to be normal so that Sharon won't feel guilty. I was trying hard to cope up and my dance team played a keen role in it. I kept myself busy and this somehow worked. We had even visited a Punjabi sangeet function, where we performed bhangda. Now here, something huge happened. I had gala time with Sharon, the Sharon Raiprakash.

We have fun these days, even her health is better. Our relation has reached new heights of friendship. I still love her, hehehe, I guess now even more. Btw why I am telling that, that is my identity, Swayam Shekhawat, the loverboy. And whilst all our treasurable friendly moments, I get back into majnu mode and then use my most constructive weapon to see the heights of expressive face. I unexpectedly bombard her with "I love you" and then, the result'her those expressions'u must be noticing them too.

Seeing those beautiful eyelids meeting each other whenever I say I love you; I feel she was craving for that, and she would also reply back. But no, she never does that, but she doesn't know I guess that "Actions speak louder than words."

We sometimes even get a little more personal while talking and once I took advantage of such situation and asked her that why doesn't she say it once. She confessing I love you doesn't mean that I am gonna force her to be in a relationship with me and I won't even remove that topic to make her uncomfortable and she knows this fact. But, she is adamant.

It so happened that once while our so called argument cum fight was going on where Sharon Raiprakash was in her full on diva mode who wouldn't leave arguing unless she wins the argument, was defeated actually she left the battlefield midway.

Not a major issue actually, I purposely pulled that useless topic so that at last she would be in her siren mode and that attitude and anger would finally lead her to confess. I was on the verge to hear those heavenly words.

It was like "what the hell swayam, it is just because I LO..." and she realized what she was about to say and she stopped and just went away from the canteen.

Now I guess I have to think of something else which has to prove fruitful for sure. And I thought. How about the jealousy game..?Now, I guess this would surely work.

I tried to boost my confidence. And I didn't sleep the whole night. I thought of asking Aashi for help. I know that's mean, because I mustn't hurt her sentiments just because of the fact that she likes me. But except Aashi, It couldn't be anyone else. I have seen Sharon's expressions when she talks to me.

So I called her up that late in the night and explained her, requested her and apologized to her, and then she had agreed. She was ok with it as long as I am concerned with the matter. I felt awkward but there was no other option. I was guilty too. But anything for Sharon...

Next day, I started executing my plan from the morning itself. In the first lecture itself, I sat besides Aashi and we were purposely murmuring during the lecture, so that Sharon could notice. And then we even distracted the professor so that he puts both of us out of the class TOGETHER' :D :P

And then as soon as we got up, the gang did their famous CHE...MISTRY...action with the hand.

And even that worked. :) :)

After the lecture, Sharon called me up to ask where am I because she knew I was with AASHI and then she was fumbling with words. She was finding a valid reason to call me to see her, So she had to use the fact that I am his assistant and she said that we now were supposed to be going to projector room for discussing about our website; whereas this was a lie. We had decided yesterday that this work would be done in evening.

I told her that I am in canteenwith AASHI and I need some time' :P and purposely while talking on phone, I spoke to aashi in between so that Sharon could hear.

While hanging up, she told me that she is coming to canteen but I hanged up before she could complete her statement. Sharon could bear anything but not ignorance and now toh even there was jealousy coupled with it. I wonder in what state she would be.:P :D

Sharon: "What has happened to Swayam today? He for the first time was punished for his misbehavior during the lecture'and that too with Aashi. And what the hell is he doing in canteen with her. He didn't even talk to me once from the morning. And did he hang up on me'? How dare he'?But he himself had once said that hanging up over a girl is rude' and now he himself is doing the same..."

Now, it was time for final attack and add fuel to the fire. I then left the canteen before Sharon could reach. I took Aashi and then went to the projector room.

Now, once again she called; I told her that I failed to listen earlier that she was coming to the canteen and not projector room. So therefore I came to projector room. I could visualize her expressions' Gawd.. I m missing them'

I then removed my final weapon and said that Aashi is so cool, she is having very creative ideas for the website.

She then said " The meeting was supposed to be between u and me, and not u and Aashi'"

I smiled at her reply' Aww, my siren Sharon'

Sharon bit her tongue... " I...I...mean'

I replied "hmm yes, but she is here to help na..."

She then said that she isn't coming to projector room, I should carry on with Aashi.

I was damn happy. Finally, all worked. I also didn't see her for next hour; all had left since there was nothing significant in college.

But I know, she must be there in rehearsal hall. And I was correct. There she was' fidgeting with her laptop' trying hard to concentrate.

As soon, I entered, she looked up and then had eyes still on the door.

"Hey, don't look there, Aashi nahi aayi hai,so don't worry..." I smiled.

She immediately got back to laptop showing attitude and

"Worry, Why would I worry...? How does it make a difference to me...?"

"how does it make a difference to u' the answer for this lies with u..."

"Ohh plz, what are u saying, it doesn't make any difference..."

"Hmm, yeah, that's clearly seen from morning...ur behavior said it all... U were irritated with the fact that I was with Aashi and ignored you... ab deny mat karna..."

"ohk, fine, It affected me..."

"Why were you affected Sharon...?"

"Arrey, what kind of question is this... I am a girl...who..."

"oh,, so u mean every girl in the college was having problems from morning...?"

This was turning into rapid fire round like argument

"Arrey baaki ladkiyon ko kyun problem they don't .. L..."

"hmm yeah They don't call me their friend na..."

"no yaar, they don't love you na' but I love you..I"

And I smiled...She was speaking still but then she saw me smiling...and had that confused expressions as to why was I smiling. She stopped and was cutely trying to remember what did she just say which is making me smile harder...

She then remembered... her face was flushed... I still was looking at her with same look. She was opening her mouth to say something in her defense but she couldn't find words...

I was damn happy... It was like m achieving a Guiness world record... or an Oscar for my debut... no, actually it was more than that'

And thus, finally I got to hear...what I craved for...

Swayam: "And I love u too...Yeeas, Finally you said it... Itni mehnat karni padi..."

"what the hell, that's cheating..."

"heheh, everything is fair in love...

"and war... and this is world war III.. I am not going to leave u..."

She started hitting me with the laptop in her hand...

I was running to save myself...She was chasing me...Our rehearsal hall had become a playground... but I remembered about her asthma and stopped with a sudden jerk purposely...

My this unexpected action led her to bang with me.. She landed on my chest... I put my arms around her waist and now she was trapped between my chest and my arms. She was trying to free herself.

"Leave me, Swayam..."

"Arrey, why? Just now u said that you are not gonna leave me; see then UR wish is my command..."

"Swayamm..."

"Sharonn ..."

And I continued, "You don't, you don't know how it feels...It feels like... like... ...

Sharon "like you have heard the most beautiful words anyone could hear, it feels like you have got ur paradise, ecstasy on earth, u feel the world should stop and only these words are repeated continuously...?"

"hmm,yeah... I love you Sharon..."

She rested her head on my shoulder and her hands on my chest...

"I love you too Swayam..."

It is rightly said, "The feelings that go deepest are the hardest to express."

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- Ria.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited
Nice OS👏
Aww beautifully written
Swayam doing planning to hear sharon's confession😲
Their rapid fire que ans
Superb ending
Loved ur OS
well written👍🏼


Edited by sweet_sanju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt..🤗

As i always say...few of the writers i am reading lately are like a breath of fresh air..so fresh..so lively...u have a different charm in ur writing style...i just ADORE it...this OS ..so so different from ur previous OS..which was more of an emotional roller coaster ride.. ..where as this one is just amusing and adorablility personified...i simply love the flow in ur writing..its flawless...
LOVED the begging..Swayam notion about girls...the most complicated spicies...that was cute..amusing and true 😆
Girls, I tell u, the most complicated species on earth. How on earth can person get his things done from a girl? I mean, I know that she loves me; even she knows that she loves me. But she wouldn't say that. I don't know what the problem in saying is. Actually there is no problem; she isn't saying it just because I want her to say.
Poor lover boy..trying so hard to hear those magical words...loved the cute plans he executed to hear those words from the DIVA..loved this part😳..so damn ADORABLE...So SWARON..😳

Not a major issue actually, I purposely pulled that useless topic so that at last she would be in her siren mode and that attitude and anger would finally lead her to confess. I was on the verge to hear those heavenly words.

It was like "what the hell swayam, it is just because I LO'" and she realized what she was about to say and she stopped and just went away from the canteen.

Awww..poor Swayam...could hear those words...and he went back to action...MISSION I LOVE YOU...i dont like the Aashi angle in the show but i loved it here😆😉😛..
Jelous Sharon is PURE GOLD...ahaaa..😆😉

She then said " The meeting was supposed to be between u and me, and not u and Aashi'"

I smiled at her reply' Aww, my siren Sharon'

Poor DIVA..i love this helpless side of SIREN SHARON in front of her lover boy...😊..so so cute...

"Arrey baaki ladkiyon ko kyun problem they don't .. L'"

"hmm yeah They don't call me their friend na'"

"no yaar, they don't love you na' but I love you'I"

And I smiled'She was speaking still but then she saw me smiling'and had that confused expressions as to why was I smiling. She stopped and was cutely trying to remember what did she just say which is making me smile harder'

Swayam smiled..i smiled along with him...ahaa...such a fresh piece of write up...LOVED IT..u toatally made my day..and thanks for showing me the OS even before posting it😳...

I LOVED THE ENDING ALOSO..JUST PERFECT..LIKE OUR SWARON...Sweetest confession EVER😳

And I continued, "You don't, you don't know how it feels' It feels like' like'"

Sharon "like you have heard the most beautiful words anyone could hear, it feels like you have got ur paradise, ecstasy on earth, u feel the world should stop and only these words are repeated continuously'?"

"hmm,yeah' I love you Sharon'"

Love u swthrt...and ur style of writing..plz keep showering us with such amazing write ups...
Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a really sweet swaron os...
SWAYAM KE PAAS SHARON KE HAR BEHAVIOR KA ILAAG HAI :p:p
LOVED THE WAY SWAYAM N AASHI WERE ACTING..
SHARON WA SO DAMN JEALOUS
AND AT THE LAST LOVED THE CONFESSION..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spongy

it was a really sweet swaron os...

SWAYAM KE PAAS SHARON KE HAR BEHAVIOR KA ILAAG HAI :p:p
LOVED THE WAY SWAYAM N AASHI WERE ACTING..
SHARON WA SO DAMN JEALOUS
AND AT THE LAST LOVED THE CONFESSION..


Hey, 😊
Thanks a lot for ur comment.. :)
M glad you liked the OS.. :) 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u vithu... 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dang!!!I loved it!!!!!!!!Man Swayam and his planning dude ...where does he come up with this stuff??? Really Nice job i really liked how you effectively wrote in swayam's POV...Do write more!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
I'll unres on sat
Mera sat aa gaya..:p
Coming to update
It was fun-filled and amusing os.
I always loved jealous sharon.N I love her more when she says I love you to swayam angrily..:p
Majnu was all set to hear I love you from sharon.Mehnat rang layi😆.But I found it a chotu os.:(
Ps. update ur ff too.3 months ho gaya tere n exams bhi khatam ho gaya :p
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago
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Awesome os loved every bit of it Sharon's jealousy, Akashi swayam part nnn the cutest confession part just loved it... U shud write more os..👍🏼
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Seeing those beautiful eyelids meeting each other whenever I say I love you; I feelshe was craving for that, and she would also reply back. But no, she never does that, but she doesn't know I guess that "Actions speak louder than words."

just what i've felt whenever they get close...you have described the language their eyes speak...the hidden emotions.

Hey, don't look there, Aashi nahi aayi hai,so don't worry'" I smiled.

She immediately got back to laptop showing attitude and

"Worry, Why would I worry'? How does it make a difference to me'?"

"how does it make a difference to u' the answer for this lies with u'"

"Ohh plz, what are u saying, it doesn't make any difference'"

"Hmm, yeah, that's clearly seen from morning'ur behavior said it all' U were irritated with the fact that I was with Aashi and ignored you' ab deny mat karna'"

"ohk, fine, It affected me'"

"Why were you affected Sharon'?"

"Arrey, what kind of question is this' I am a girl'who'"

"oh,, so u mean every girl in the college was having problems from morning'?"

This was turning into rapid fire round like argument

"Arrey baaki ladkiyon ko kyun problem they don't .. L'"

"hmm yeah They don't call me their friend na'"

"no yaar, they don't love you na' but I love you'I"

And I smiled'She was speaking still but then she saw me smiling'and had that confused expressions as to why was I smiling. She stopped and was cutely trying to remember what did she just say which is making me smile harder'

pink vale lines...were fab...they made me LAUGH..especially the all the girls were having problems vala...i wish CVs tumse ideas le...yeh show mei aaya toh mast hoga na?

u feel the world should stop and only these words are repeated continuously'?"

this one ...well the peaceful feeling in it just...well was leaking out...don't have another metaphor for it...:P
loved it ria...and do bother us more...,medha.
Edited by medhasarkar - 12 years ago

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