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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys this is my first work on IF as well as Swaron. So please bear with my mistake

So the story line is like this that Swayam and Sharon are no more swaron and Sharon tries her best that swayam and Ashi become couple. I didn't even cross check the OS Now enough of my blabbering here it goes

Ashi came to Swayam near rehearsal hall panting... And ask him

A:-Swayam aap kaha the me kabse aapka intezar kar rahi thi

Sw:-kyu kya hua ashi tum itni bhag kar kyun aai (Sharon was seeing all this from distance and didn't like the scene)

A:-Are kuch nahi wo me bas aapka ese hi wait kar rai thi aap itni late kyun ho gaye

After hearing this kind of sentence from aashi swayam feels a bit uncomfortable but coz of Sharon happiness he didn't utter a word coz Sharon's wish is always his command

And she wish that swayam should move on in his life and acc. To her aashi is nice girl and for Sharon swayam follows what she wanted him to do and now shes is suffering the most coz swayam spents most of the time with aashi n gang and for official work they were connected through mails due to which Sharon is now blazing with anger after seeing this sight infront of her she wants to rip swayam head no aashi head no no no she was cursing herself for bringing swayam and aashi together,actually the sight infront of her was like aashi and swayam were walking and talking hand in hand which raged her even more (now coming back to present with aashi n swayam)

Sw:-Are kuch nai aashi me kuch kam me phas gaya tha

A:-Acha koi bat nahi,waise swayam aaj aap sham me kya types kar rahe ho,Mera matlab he ki agar aap bura na ,mane to me aapko dinner types pe bulana chahti hu mere ghar

Sw:-Waise to mujhe aaj koi khas kam nai hai to i will sure come

Hearing this aashi becomes happy and in excitement she hugs swayam infront of everyone and in that process swayam saw that Sharon was watching them and he passes his one of the classy smile (Tannu wala).

Now scene shifts to rehearsal hall where Sharon calls Swayam for some official work

Sh:-Ye Swayam kaha reh gaya waise to kabhi late nai hota phir aaj kya ho gaya she was about to call Swayam n he comes to rehearsal hall talking to Aashi on his phone

Sw:-Haa aashi don't worry me 6:30 tak aa jaunga ok bye tc

Sharon was now fuming with anger coz he was late n now he is talking to aashi instead of her

Sw:-hiee Sharon tumne itni urgently kyu bulaya wat happen?

Sh:-Wo after 2 days our college is going to host an event related to dance so wo sab cheezein discuss karni thi

Sw:-ohh okay

But Sharon didn't like his cold attitude towards her. But she didn't react and then they started their work on the presentation about an hour they discuss about the things related to event etc etc... now they were getting late for their classes so they stop there work and Sharon says to swayam to continue the work after college to which swayam refuse as he has to go to dinner at aashi's home.

By hearing that Sharon become sad and they departed from there

Whole night Sharon was thinking about swayam and aashi which makes her sad and she realises what she done to herself and swayam by making such kind of stupid decision and she realises that she not only like swayam but she is in love with him that to badly and she made a decision that next morning she is going to confess her feelings for swayam

Next morning Sharon got ready in her beautiful white dress to confess her feeling to swayam

She reached college and ask Swayam to meet her in terrace there favourite place where they spent time alone

Now Swayam reached there and was amazed to see the sight in front of him his angel in beautiful white dress

Sharon came and hugged Swayam tightly which confused him and he ask in concern kya hua Sharon?

To which she replied "kyu me tumhe hug nahin kar sakti kya?

Which confused him more and he again ask kya hua he to which she answer "Pyaar hua he mujhe".

Swayam went pale hearing word love from her mouth but he gathered courage and ask"kon he woh".

To which Sharon replied a person with whom i want t spent my whole life who can bring smile on my face anytime. Hearing this swayam turn his back and remove the tears & ask who is the lucky guy to which Sharon replied "YOU".and now he was shockes hearing this and Sharon hug him and says "Yes swayam i fallen in Love with you nahi dekh sakti tumhe kisi aur ke sath nahi hota bardasht mjse saying this she kissed him on his cheeks on forehead and after that she kissed him on his lips which shocked him even more first he was not responding but Sharon's fingers were running in his hair which turned him on and both started kissing each other madly as if it is there last kiss and after some time they broke apart due to lack of oxygen and swayam kissed Sharon on her neck and jawline and in every kiss he was Saying i love you Sharon and she was smiling after what like eternity swayam and Sharon broke apart with our diva all blushy blushy and with that swayam resumed kissing her and she also responded with equal passion...

The end

Hope you like it please kuch bhi comment karna

sorry i didn't send pm to any one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...I loved this OS dear..
.really cute...
jelous sharon is pure gold...aha...
the way she reacted on swayam asshi hug and his dinner at her home .
.the confession..
the kiss...
those words...
beautiful..loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os
Loved jealous sharon n then confession.
Do write more swaron os ..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os...but aashi got the poor end of the stick...i would want a happy ending for her too...swaron confession was superbly penned. first os tha...2nd , 3rd, 4th...many more to come i hope...actually demand
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar


nice os...but aashi got the poor end of the stick...i would want a happy ending for her too...swaron confession was superbly penned. first os tha...2nd , 3rd, 4th...many more to come i hope...actually demand


Hehehe actually I was bit unsure about posting coz first time tha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome os
Loved jealous sharon n then confession.
Do write more swaron os ..:)


Thanks for reading and encouraging me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully penned 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luv the jelly Sharon!!!!! really good job for your first OS!!!!i really liked the confession in the end it was perfect!!!!!!!!do write more and pm me when you do!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os do write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful.. 👏👏

jealous sharon is a treat to watch as well as to read.. 😉😉

loved the os... 😊😊

the confession 😳😳

the kiss😳😳

swaron.. 😳😳

everything was wow... 😉😉

do write more.. 👏👏

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