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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: ABBY92
This was a really beautiful OS !! Simple and sweet !! I loved how Swayam and Sharon took so much pleasure from the simple things in life !!

Thank you Abby :)

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
awww sudha you mean a lot to me. words are really too less for this 2nd dedication and especially you!!!oh!yes,that chap was a memorable one too ...n both would remain close to my heart till my last breath!!that sunset update...was beyond words!!😃😳...n this one made me go awww!!😳
i always feel good talking to you and you touch a chord to even at my worse of mood...and lighten me up.
now that made me go up on cloud 9!i am really glad that distance doesnt matter in our frndship ...i can't believe it ...😳 sudha,though we've not met,you appearing online makes my mood switch in not less than a mili-sec!!!such is your appearance!!!which is why you'll be very close to my heart just as SwaRon!😳i wish i could write something dedicating to u!!but *sigh* i dont know to write stuff ...
but on the 1st thought,why did u dedicate it to me? i mean suddenly,out of the blue ME!!😆there are so many better ppl you can dedicate this to.😉
there must be a sudha-ish reason behind it.i am eager to know!!!😃

Yep thats the beauty of friendship we share, just like SwaRon.

Its good that i started writing and made so many awesome friends here and you of course are one of my mischief sweet kiddo who i find, what is the word - adorable every time i talk too.

I know i don't come to AT's to talk too and may not be really great with conversing but whenever i do..i really do feel good. ITs like a perfect break from my otherwise hectic days sometime. The sudha-ish reason being the same..i do feel guilty often to make you wait and send you miniscule comment which may look like i am not interested.. But i am so happy you see past all that and are never much upset over it..Well for most the time. 😳

Love you loads 🤗

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Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: aishu3003
Awesome 👏
Loved it 😊

Thanks 😃

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: marauder
You know Sudha and Sikha ( sorry I haven't interacted with you before ) this OS was an one shot in true sense. Something which began just randomly and ended like that but in between showing us the glimpse of what SwaRon stands for. This OS was simple and beautiful as many said but this OS was high on essence of SwaRon e knew and felt in loved it. This is how SwaRon will be as a married couple. There romance will be as enchanting as the first snow. Loved this OS. Hopeful we will get to see more such works.

Thanks for commenting Shishir :)
Yes not much of a back story but just an excerpt which stopped just as randomly as it started and glad you liked the interpretation on SwaRon as a married couple and we could hold the essence we all love so much about them. And you out of all sure know how much i have started enjoying writing..so sure will keep writing any time i have :)

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123
Amazing update ⭐️

Thank you 😊

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

its a romantic one..i loved It...
swayam will always remain swayam only..he prepared hot chocolate for sharon..dats awww thing...
n awww if i was In d place f sharon i certainly did d exact same thing to welcome d snow...

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

It was as beautiful an experience as the first snow described in the OS...it has been kept straight and simple and that is the most endearing quality - gud job Sudha & Shikha and thanx for posting and pm to Ananya

Edited by meevee - 12 years ago

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

I know, I know I'm horribly late Sudha, but I just didn't want to rush up the comment at that time. Anyways so I'm addressing this to both Sudha and Shikha, this one was so pleasurable to read. Loved the start , I remembered Swayam's dialogue in the show, "Ki agar kisi ka chehra main suraj ki pehli kiran ke saath dekhna chahta hu... Toh woh Sharon hai"

just the way you mentioned in the first para itself.

There was a certain level of subtlety as well as a charm of its own radiating from the update throughout. The concept was simple but crisp which lead to a satisfying smile on my face when it ended.

Thanks for this wonderful piece, both of you😳

PS: Well the chasma thing, I remembered my school days , when I had one. So I do understand the aftermath of it😳 All I can say is don't strain your eyes much and eat loads of carrots

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Im so sorry!! Im sorry for myself too! Itna tym laga diya maine isse padhne mai!!

I totally loved it...It was great!

Amazing os!! luv it!!

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Sudha di & shikha...awesome os.😃..it ws a vry light nd pleasant read..😳.nd Luvd d concept😉...swaron njoyin d first snow...well swaron r married here..😃.nd dey r alwys such a treat to read...luvd it so much...sharon z alwys d boss nd our majnu z so cute..😆😆😆.disturbin sharon in her sleep...he strtd cookin fr her.😳..he z alwys a swthr8...well dat ws kinda nyc nd really swt...😳😳😳dey spent deir day nycly... sharon doin shoppin...sharon's expression on seein d 1st snow ws nyc.👏..nd Swayam's expression wre mre entertainin...he z alwys in awe of evry move f his princess..😳😃.a swt romantic os...gr8 job both f u...👏⭐️👏