SwaRon - First Snow *note @ page7* - Page 8

Originally posted by: Punith...

Originally posted by: kool kanz

splendid job...dat was sooo romantic n dat too with snow...swayam wakin up sharon with hot chocolate was damn cute...n ofcourse deir togetherness...keep on writin such os's...👏

Originally posted by: Aashu14

Wow its very nice... u rocked it..👏

Swayam sharon married and finally became Swaron... wow its like dream come true...😉

I liked it very much.. its so expressive and touching..😊

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

awesome os..!!!

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Sudha and Shikha a very awesome OS! Now as the winter have arrived i could feel the chills of this OS along with the Hot Chocolate! ;D Idea of this OS was brilliant and Sudha your writing style is as usual Excellent...nobody can snatch this writing style from you not even your glasses! But kindly do some pity on us by taking care of yourself...! And Happy Winter to both :) I loved it <3

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Awesome work sudha n sikha...just luved the whole os...very beautifully written...n even the flow of the os was just perfect...hatts off to u girls.

Originally posted by: unaj

thank u 4 da pm. Luvd dis os for its simplicity as termed by u guyz. Hehe. But 4 me its still a class level writing. Hats off to both sudha and shikha. Dis is so rt. Tym 4 me 2 go through such beauiful swaron os widout complications in their lives coz m missin my tanhawala swaron so so badly. Thank u again n ya plz cum wid a new update vry soon. Will be waitin.

Originally posted by: nikita_arsha

Firstly, I sincerely apologize for the delay. I had read it earlier but couldn't comment as I was online from mobile and perhaps this OS deserves a much longer comment.

First Snow as a title appeals extensively from a reader's POV. Sudha, there's always a certain amount of serenity involved with all your works and this one was no exception. Things were plotted in an aesthetically beautiful manner and it was completely a pleasurable read. Shikha, I guess, it's your first write-up and I must compliment you for this brilliant piece of work.

The opening lines were beautiful. Swayum thinking about spending his entire life with his beloved was beautifully presented. Sharon on the other hand was projected to be an innocent soul wrapped within a tough, firm exterior. The very thought of them owning a dance institute in New York was enchanting in itself. The shopping part as enjoyable. I loved the idea of SwaRon celebrating Thanksgiving together.😉

Sats, Ananya, Shreyo, Shika and Sudha, fab job girls.👏

Suds, dun worry about the chasma😆

I've heard that people who write beautifully look beautiful too. I know it sounds inane but a petty set of spectacles won't affect your beauty.😳

So, you better don't fuss about it.