SwaRon - First Snow *note @ page7* - Page 6

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome os
Sweet,simple as well as romantic. Beautifully penned.
Loved it

Originally posted by: pooja123456

cute os...
u r a gud writer!!

Originally posted by: ambuja4

unres...
wow...luvd it...
awsum concpt nd beautiflly penned down..

Originally posted by: Neeti96

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Amazing OS di😊 It was so so romantic! Just perfect😳

I loved the beginning with Swayam trying to wake up poor Sharon😆 And when she placed her head on his chest..Ahhh..That was super sweet

That hot chocolate bit made me wanna go have some Why did u describe it in such a delicious manner?😡

Aww... n my fav line was when Swayam stared at Sharon as she drank her hot chocolate..So Majnu-ish❤️

I loved the last bit as well.. Their first snow..The kiss..enchanting.

Thanks for the PM Ananya

Lovely OS di😊

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon

EDITED.

Sudha,this was an awesome OS By your and your friend's side. you both did a splendid job. the theme was a charming husband and the devilish wife. SwaRon magic filled in the time reading this OS. Swayam's efforts were good while Sharon tried hard to resist them. i loved how you wrote the OS with the minuscule moments penned down effortlessly. it surely made a pleasure read which brought a smile to my face.

P.S:No thank you-sorry among frens. 😳

Originally posted by: shaani2209

Lovely one sudha and shika...

simple yet so beautiful...pleasant to read...

thanks for the pm ananya...

Originally posted by: nature2

res awosm update sudha 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Sudha...🤗

The OS was so sweet and adorable...it sent me to swaron dream land...u & ur friend Sikha have done a great job...as always...a sudha OS means a treat for readers...

Coming to the OS...the lovely start...where he was thinking about day when said to wake up every day next to sharon is his biggest wish...it made me nostalgic...

I remember telling Rey that if there was anything that I most certainly want from life, it was waking up next to Sharon for the rest of my life.

Loved his state mind depicting her as his angel and how she changed his life..

"Oh the luck of a guy like me" I thought, she was no less then an angel and her innocence inside her volcanic exterior which kept me on my toes. There was never a dull moment with her by my side if she was the angel she very well essayed being the Devil part to my life as well.

The Hot chocolate and 1st snow...perfect combination along with our swaron...awww...loved the kiss part...it was dreamy...& the OS was true to ur style of writing...simple yet perfect...

She ruffled my hair as I pulled her even closer and placed my lips on to hers this time claiming every part, and wished every day for the rest of my life to as be as beautiful as today with her by my side.

Thanx for such beautiful OS dear...hope u had a great thanx giving day...continue showering us with ur brilliant writing 😊


Love
Deepika

Originally posted by: Karen_sharon

Sudha...I'm a big fan of ur works and luv reading it...though I'm not dat regular in commenting but I just luv reading ur OSs...like all ur other works dis had to be Fab...and it was...luvd it dear! :)

Originally posted by: manasie

Aaawwwiiieee it was so cute Sudha seriously loved it...

Shikha seriously awesome work and Sudha thanks for posting on her behalf... would love to read more of her work...

and Sudha waiting for more from your side...

Love,

Manasie.