SwaRon - First Snow *note @ page7* - Page 5

Originally posted by: Joshua_TANHA

Amazing Amazing !!! I enjoyed reading it completetly...

There was never a dull moment with her by my side if she was the angel she very well essayed being the Devil part to my life as well.

Love above line😆 😆

Originally posted by: shikha31

Heyyy Guys...Sudhi is being really modest by saying dis...This is all her work...(Mine was just a rough idea ) ... wat works brilliantly is her narrative style...n d whole OS is wriiten by her...Still Love u Sudhi for saying dis...

n Thank u so much Shreyasi for ur kind words..😊... (although d credit is nt mine)

About d OS Sudhi...I am a big fan of ur writing n u knw dat.. I just love d way u depict each n every emotion so precisely...Loved each n every part of it...👏 n Dis time d feel is Happy Happy...not a single sad Moment...Thank u for dat ... Love U ...😊

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--

Hey Sudha and Shikha awesome work!!dat was soo subtle way of describing the 3 month wedded swayam-sharon spending their life in such a romantic way with every bit of freshness and comfort!dis was how i really cud relate them to be if they were ever shown getting married!!loved it!keep writing more!

Originally posted by: swaron09

res

EDITED

It felt like the picture was sharing the story of all the hurdles we had crossed to be bound together her smile as always was speaking volumes of her happiness she felt from inside and it was contagious as she spread the happiness all around

she was no less then an angel and her innocence inside her volcanic exterior which kept me on my toes. There was never a dull moment with her by my side if she was the angel she very well essayed being the Devil part to my life as well

I luved these lines. love the way you write. it all seems s beautiful and magical. another brilliant OS put up by you. i really loved it. would now be waiting for another OS from ure side

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

res!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
unres
this OS was awesome... simple... and it truly had a new shade of SwaRon!!😊 so it was a combined effort,nice.both of you'll did a great job!👏

I remember telling Rey that if there was anything that I most certainly want from life, it was waking up next to Sharon for the rest of my life.
and this line was the best line which made me nostalgic!!truly loved this line!!!
the way you'll described each and every scene be it,Swayam watching sharon sleeping,of his failed attempts to wake her up,of him making the hot chocolate,of their journey of shopping and then the last bit their first snow!!😳

She was holding my arms so possessively and close that even the cold winds couldn't take the warmth that spread within.
😳
it was a very cute and very SwaRon-licious OS!!!😉
awww thank you so much 4 he dedication sudha!!! 😳 🤗 this would be a memorable OS!!😳
i am glad i read it...a very happy thanksgiving from my side.waiting for your cake's pic!😆
sudha you are awesome... !!!!!!love you more more n more!🤗 😳 can't believe are friendship has grown strong to such extent that i've fallen short of words to describe!!coz by dedicating this OS you've actually left me speechless!!!😳it came as a total shock to me when deeps di told me 😊 i was like this!😳 n damn excited!!
i know you didnt expect this sort of reply coz u expected more more n a long reply!i am really sorry for that but i tried my best to write what i felt about this OS n you!😳

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome os
Sweet,simple as well as romantic. Beautifully penned.
Loved it