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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i still dont get it who wrote it as none of u are taking credit for it

but still GREAT work guys

this was such a cute soft and subtle os. the combination of hot chocolate with snow is always perfect and it always does tend to end with some cute moments which this os has captured beautifully. although i felt the ending was quite abrupt !

dont u think that?

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Edited😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69922588

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter
i still dont get it who wrote it as none of u are taking credit for it
but still GREAT work guys
this was such a cute soft and subtle os. the combination of hot chocolate with snow is always perfect and it always does tend to end with some cute moments which this os has captured beautifully. although i felt the ending was quite abrupt !
dont u think that?

Thanks :)

Lets just say i spin in some words to give exact emotions to what my friend wanted to convey.

And i know what you mean about the ending but this being an OS had to end just as it started no back story. thanks for your comments :) Feels good to know you liked it.

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awww...this was an awesome update...the 3months wedded couple and that too our swaron was really a treat to read...their romance,feelings and everything was so pure and magical...as always... 😊

Dunno whom to appreciate...shikha awesome work...do keep writing...everything was beautifully penned down...:D

And for sudha...Damn wat do I say...u were so sweet to msg me in fb regarding the update...do u want a special appreciation??coz u know yesterday only I tld u how much I am fond of ur works...and this is no less..."perfect" is the word...and *special hugs* to u... 😃 👏
And do tc...dnt strain too much... 😊

Once again awesome guys... 👏

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Simply beautiful...beautifully penned down by you sudha.

"Oh the luck of a guy like me" I thought, she was no less then an angel and her innocence inside her volcanic exterior which kept me on my toes. There was never a dull moment with her by my side if she was the angel she very well essayed being the Devil part to my life as well"

"She gave a good look to the hot liquid inside before indulging in the aroma and then the taste of the same, its like she knew how to appreciate life even at its simplest. That certainly was not the opinion everyone had of her but this was the real deal which only very few were aware off"

Love dese lines A LOT...now this is what SHARON is all about..my most fav character from D3..though now everything is over for me now.

P.S Sudha tk proper rest.

Edited by AmRiTa_S - 12 years ago

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Loved it!!

Simple and Sweet😃

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gp sandhu

@sandhu89

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

amazinggg...

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

amazing yet simple
really enjoyd alot while reading

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Nice yar .sharon swayam made for each other.you wrote it nicely.

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

splendid job...dat was sooo romantic n dat too with snow...swayam wakin up sharon with hot chocolate was damn cute...n ofcourse deir togetherness...keep on writin such os's...👏