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Aashik MS

@Aashu14

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow its very nice... u rocked it..👏

Swayam sharon married and finally became Swaron... wow its like dream come true...😉

I liked it very much.. its so expressive and touching..😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Sudha and Shikha a very awesome OS! Now as the winter have arrived i could feel the chills of this OS along with the Hot Chocolate! ;D Idea of this OS was brilliant and Sudha your writing style is as usual Excellent...nobody can snatch this writing style from you not even your glasses! But kindly do some pity on us by taking care of yourself...! And Happy Winter to both :) I loved it <3

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awesome work sudha n sikha...just luved the whole os...very beautifully written...n even the flow of the os was just perfect...hatts off to u girls.

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unaj

@unaj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

thank u 4 da pm. Luvd dis os for its simplicity as termed by u guyz. Hehe. But 4 me its still a class level writing. Hats off to both sudha and shikha. Dis is so rt. Tym 4 me 2 go through such beauiful swaron os widout complications in their lives coz m missin my tanhawala swaron so so badly. Thank u again n ya plz cum wid a new update vry soon. Will be waitin.

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swaron_ss

@swaron_ss

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome work once again Sudha.

Loved the simplicity the OS had. Sharon being the angel and Devil to Swayam was really unique to think off and it proves what love swaron share.

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Firstly, I sincerely apologize for the delay. I had read it earlier but couldn't comment as I was online from mobile and perhaps this OS deserves a much longer comment.

First Snow as a title appeals extensively from a reader's POV. Sudha, there's always a certain amount of serenity involved with all your works and this one was no exception. Things were plotted in an aesthetically beautiful manner and it was completely a pleasurable read. Shikha, I guess, it's your first write-up and I must compliment you for this brilliant piece of work.

The opening lines were beautiful. Swayum thinking about spending his entire life with his beloved was beautifully presented. Sharon on the other hand was projected to be an innocent soul wrapped within a tough, firm exterior. The very thought of them owning a dance institute in New York was enchanting in itself. The shopping part as enjoyable. I loved the idea of SwaRon celebrating Thanksgiving together.😉

Sats, Ananya, Shreyo, Shika and Sudha, fab job girls.👏

Suds, dun worry about the chasma😆

I've heard that people who write beautifully look beautiful too. I know it sounds inane but a petty set of spectacles won't affect your beauty.😳

So, you better don't fuss about it.

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

EDITED.

This time i edited my post early so i should be credited.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

This was a really beautiful OS !! Simple and sweet !! I loved how Swayam and Sharon took so much pleasure from the simple things in life !!

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
Even though u did not needed to mention me i must say dat d lil change was very gud! Kudos to u nd ur frnd sikha for dis simple yet brilliant OS! Nd yeah i m wid ur sis if she thnks u nid to rest coz u knw too dat u do need dat lil rest specialy nw since u got dose reading glasses! So do take care f urself plz! Nd nw cuming to d OS! D theme f d OS was brilliant! Nd loved how it retained d true character of swayam nd sharon! I loved d teasing sharon nd caring swayam! Lovd how u described der xperience f der first snow together! Lovd certain parts very much wich i wil quote latr! So at last wud lyk to say to ur frnd sikha dat she did a grt job too nd wud definitely want her to write more if she can! Nd sudha wat do i say to u! U already knw i m a fan f ur writing! So wont say much! Take care nd happy thanksgiving to u too :)

Thanks Shreyo 🤗

IKR - Teasing Sharon and a caring Swayam combo is always a hit 😳

Sure will take care re..