SwaRon OS: The two thieves

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Awesome os yaar...it was a new dimension u gave to SwaRon...catwoman n batman...u have described their past perfectly...the reason why they ran away from love...n even luved sharon dialogue when she told swayam that she will teach him to love her...very well written os...n thnx for pm.

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luv_swayam

@luv_swayam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Awesme os...it ws funny & ofcrse full f romance...imagnin swayam as thief ws realy comical.:-D:-Dour peacelvn shant swayam thief..i ws rofling at dat thgt nly.bt d chnge ws nyc..sharon's feelins wre nycly wrtn..dat girly vunrlble and swt attitde inspte f being d thief catwoman...:-Pgr8 wrtn as usual...do wrte mre soon..

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Awesome os yaar...it was a new dimension u gave to SwaRon...catwoman n batman...u have described their past perfectly...the reason why they ran away from love...n even luved sharon dialogue when she told swayam that she will teach him to love her...very well written os...n thnx for pm.

Thanks a ton for commenting Shrutika,glad you liked it.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Awesome os!!

Thanks a ton

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: luv_swayam
Awesme os...it ws funny & ofcrse full f romance...imagnin swayam as thief ws realy comical.:-D:-Dour peacelvn shant swayam thief..i ws rofling at dat thgt nly.bt d chnge ws nyc..sharon's feelins wre nycly wrtn..dat girly vunrlble and swt attitde inspte f being d thief catwoman...:-Pgr8 wrtn as usual...do wrte mre soon..

Thank you for the comment and yeah as per the character of Swayam and Sharon shown here they are slightly different from the ones shown in the show. And yeah imagining majnu bwoy as thief was indeed funny.

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Awesome os rutu !!

The most unique story on SwaRon and I totally loved it.

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

thnx fr d rply..

Edited by tannu_swayam - 13 years ago

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

nd ya thnx fr puttin all ur wrks at one place...it wud b easier 2 keep track nw...u shud open ur own gallery girl..😊

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
nd ya thnx fr puttin all ur wrks at one place...it wud b easier 2 keep track nw...u shud open ur own gallery girl..😊

Own gallery I don't know re I have just written few works and gallery ke liye you need zyada works na. Besides I don't know how many people would actually go through the gallery.🤔