Roslyn1991 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#1

No FREE READERS, NO ONE LINERS please I am serious. Turn On speakers.
Guys drop in your comments and that too long ones. Guys here's my second OS on Kriyansh.
This one is deicated to my little angel Miley. (Enrique). She keeps on saying me to write an os for her in D3. So Miley this one is for you. Go ahead and enjoy. Will keep getting more and more for you.



There was a fashion show tonight in "La Paradise International" the finest hotel in the country, holding a great image in international countries too. There was an opening dance act in the show. The exclusive limousine car stopped outside with a huge screeching sound. There were several other cars which stopped around it as they were the cars of bodyguards. There a man stepped out from the limousine, dressed in blue jeans and funky white hooded jacket wearing black coloured day and night shades. That person was Reyansh Singhania. The best dancer along with ego and anger filled mind. He was very adamant, just like the letters of his name stand for. R- ruthless, E- egoistic, Y- yanker. He doesn't have any emotion, feeling or kindness towards anybody until the matter involves his business. If the matter was related to his business he was all nice to people and once the deal got done he was all stone hearted to them. He was indeed the best dancer in the country. But was he really the best?

He walked past the huge main entrance up to the place where the fashion show was going on. There was massive crowd to see him. Everyone cheering him up, shouting his name, dying for an autograph of his. His security guards were trying hard to push the crowd aside so that no one should get too close to him. He walked past the crowd moving smoothly towards the stage.

"Welcome sir, it's an honour to have you here tonight. Please have your seat." The manager of the fashion show event gestured him to sit down, he took his seat and sat down planting a small forcing and attitude filled smile on his face.

Few minutes passed and he was still sitting there. Ever eye in the room was on him. He was scanning the room with his egoistic eyes around. There he saw a group of girls sitting and chatting. There were three girls among which two were looking at him and were drooling over him but one was busy in her phone reading something and giggling like a maniac, showing her clean and pearl white pair of teeth. She was still not looking at him.

What was wrong with her. This act of that girl touched his ego. He thought that she will definitely look up when he will dance. He went into his costume room to get dressed.

The host announced Rey's name and he was walking on the stage. Will walking his eyes fell on that girl again and she was still busy with her phone. This was going beyond limits for a hunk like Reyansh Singhania. That girl was encouraging his adamant behaviour more. He forgot everything when music was on.

The dance began.




While the dance was still on he peeked at her and she was still not looking at him. He stopped for a second and looked at her. Everyone were thinking as to what happened to him. He got down from the stage and walked up to her. He snapped him fingers pointing at the girl. The spot light suddenly moved towards the girl. She jerked up getting startled. He slowly took her phone from her hands and slid it in his back pocket. He held her wrist and pulled her up on stage. Everyone wondered and were shocked at this behaviour of Rey. They all always knew he was adamant and rude but never expected this.

Rey noticed a tattoo on the girl's arm. It read "Kria."

"Dance," he ordered her with a wicked grin thinking that she can never. His illusion that he was the best dancer in the country made him over confident.

She started dancing.










She danced like a swan and moved like a satin ribbon in the air. Her moves were so flawless. The way she dance left him speechless. All his over confidence was shattered in just few minutes.

She gave back an attitude and pride filled look to him.

Oh my his ego was damn hurt and shaken to see the confidence in this girl's eyes. The confidence is her eyes moved and made him question his own confidence. She snapped her fingers and then pointed her fingers at him.

"How dare . . . " Rey was about to continue but Kria snapped in middle before he could speak.

"Thank you. You don't need to praise me." Kria said cutting his sentence.

"Do you even know who I . . ." Rey was about to continue further and she snapped and cut him again in between.

"Yeah I know you are. . . Whatever." She said trying to make a disgusting face as if he was some kind of garbage stinking in front of her.

"My evening, my dance, you have spo. . . " he was about to accuse her saying that she has spoiler his dance and evening until Kria snapped again.

"Yeah I know, I have made your evening and dance happening." She said with gritted teeth and smirky face.

As it was a stage she couldn't talk further so she turned around to walk away but something struck her. She turned back with a smile on her face and walked up to him. Rey thought that his magic has worked on her and she is coming to apologise him. He smirked back trying to open his arms to hug her until she slowly bent towards him, trying not to hug him, she gently took out her phone from his back pocket and showed it to him on his face. His expectation that she came back to apologise was shattered again just like his over confidence.

"You. . ." He whispered with gritted teeth.

She snapped again in between before he could speak she slowly whispered back in his ear before getting away.

"What you expected?" She smirked back and left from there.

For the first time Reyansh Singhania was feeling happy on losing. He was happy about getting mocked. For the first time he felt nice when he was losing his ego. He has never met any girl so confident and brave like her to stand in front of him and his ego. This girl shook his ego and tortured his anger, pride and ego in a very sweet and gentle way with giving any back answers, infact all the while she never let him speak. With he even knew he was falling in for her so fast.

He was in love. He was determined to make her his love for life.

While walking away she looked back once and then turned and walked away.

"Meri Baathcutter." He whispered slowly with a smile on his face.


And from here the Saga of their love began. The determination of Reyansh Singhania started taking life.



THE END



How was it guys?

Tomatoes and garbage deserving?

Or applause and comments deserving?

Please do let me know.

Thanks a lot guys.

Hugs and kisses in advance.

And for the song contact me.

Just leave in a comment here on the OS if you want song details.

Do not PM me for the song just drop in a comment.



Those who haven't read Unexpected here is the link.

It is completed.

Unexpected!!!!




Edited by Rozyln - 13 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Created

Last reply

Replies

47

Views

5.4k

Users

31

Likes

111

Frequent Posters

Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Me first to comment yeepi

di mai aap ke kya tarif karo

ur just the best

omg itna ego, attitue hai is reyansh mai

The way she ignored him is commendable

his eago was hurt by this ignorance

the dance was awesome i liked it

u rite so well and u say i am good

now ur the best writer ever

i just loved ur update

please continue this for me please please

now mai jati hu

aree ye to bhool gayi
Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
arsha.kriyaansh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
awesome...luved it..😆
it was gud..😉
rey the attitude king 😲

kria ne sahi javab diya..😛
aur rey ko toh luv at frst site ho gaya..👏
Roslyn1991 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: arsha.kriyaansh

awesome...luved it..😆

it was gud..😉
rey the attitude king 😲

kria ne sahi javab diya..😛
aur rey ko toh luv at frst site ho gaya..👏



Thanks a lot dear.
Hehehe Ya "Rey" the attitude King.
Arya.100 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#5

OMG.. NO words FR DIS...REY's attiTUDe and KRia's Confidence...

Plzzz continue...
Roslyn1991 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: ackraalkriyansh

OMG.. NO words FR DIS...REY's attiTUDe and KRia's Confidence...

Plzzz continue...



Thanks a lot dear.
Its a one shot.
GayatriJethani thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Res
unres
wonderful os..
Rey the arrogrant nd over confident
nd kria sweet yet super power girl
only kria hav the quality to change rey...
I dnt think u should stop here...
Its awesome.. I know its os but still atleast try to write more parts of it
i really want to know further story..
As whole os was amazing but i personally liked the face off..
Just PERFECT
keep writing nd pls think once for contuning it... I really liked it
Edited by GayatriJethani - 13 years ago
HPHolic-3 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Awesome os
Rey the arrogant yanker
Rey also understand that someone is there who can challenge him..that face off part was best...:)
Loved it
priyasogani8 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
awesome dude... wow do post part 2 of it i know its an os but believe me its just one of those wow stories nd too gud fr just an os... wundrful😃
kreya_dance thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Awesome! I loved how Kriya made every sentence in her favor ;)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".