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Roslyn

@Roslyn1991

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha
it's fabulus...

totally different . ...

loved it...

me. attitude ko miss. attitude mil gayi...

nd yes plzzz give d details of song...

u r an awsum writer...

plzzz continue...

thanxx 4 pm

Thanks a lot dear.

Ur comment made my day. "Awesome writer"

Well the song is of pitbull called "Call of the world."

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Roslyn

@Roslyn1991

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: dips098
WOW...AWESOME OS ...m not a kriyansh fan ...but u made me fall in love with the characters...loved it ...Rey's attitude...kriya's confidence ...the last bit was too cute ...rey got his baat cutter... u justified ur title ...keep writing 😊

Awww u r not kriyansh fan and still read it? Thank u so much dear.

Glad to know that i could make u fall in love with the charaters.

Ya finally rey got his baathcutter.

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

U wer right.. I loved it!
Awww..
Poor reyaansh.. Lik itne attitude se kriya ko stage pe laua tha n instead kriya humiliate ho.. Rey ki e bak gyi..:p
Btw y rey is lik dis??? Thr gita b some soul reason for it tht made hin not less dan a stone..
But but d thing is rey fell for kriya:D
Y coz kriya wasnt lik other girls.. She ignored rey.. She was least interested in him.. Where every gal was droolin over him.. She was busy wid her phone..
Uska k effect har jagah kaam krta h..
N i loved d moment when rey was trying to speak again n again n kriya was snapping him.. They must b lookin cute.. Haww.. I badly wana c their reactions durin dis scn!!
Finally rey ne kriya ko tag de e diya "baatcutter".. N alas kriya too turned back to c rey before leavin out..
Connection toh bn gya re!!
I love ur writing style.. Ots kinda unique n enjoyabl!!
Do pm me:) whneva u update nxt!

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Roslyn

@Roslyn1991

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
U wer right.. I loved it!
Awww..
Poor reyaansh.. Lik itne attitude se kriya ko stage pe laua tha n instead kriya humiliate ho.. Rey ki e bak gyi..:p
Btw y rey is lik dis??? Thr gita b some soul reason for it tht made hin not less dan a stone..
But but d thing is rey fell for kriya:D
Y coz kriya wasnt lik other girls.. She ignored rey.. She was least interested in him.. Where every gal was droolin over him.. She was busy wid her phone..
Uska k effect har jagah kaam krta h..
N i loved d moment when rey was trying to speak again n again n kriya was snapping him.. They must b lookin cute.. Haww.. I badly wana c their reactions durin dis scn!!
Finally rey ne kriya ko tag de e diya "baatcutter".. N alas kriya too turned back to c rey before leavin out..
Connection toh bn gya re!!
I love ur writing style.. Ots kinda unique n enjoyabl!!
Do pm me:) whneva u update nxt!

Awww thanks so so so much dear.

Rey is like this because he got ego coz of his fandom. mentioned in os that he is adamant as he is the most popular dancer in the country.

Rey has fallen in just one sight of her think what will happen when he will come close to her?

I am glad that u loved it.

Thank u so much once again dear.

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Fantabulous update
Omg ray's attitude
Thanks so much for pm
Loved the entire story

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

loved the story...rey with a huge ego abd pride shaken up by kria in the bestest way possible and that was his way being arrogant and rude...

nice to see rey already had fallen to her for that quality if her's...

looking forward for updates to this if any...

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Awesome!! Loved the song too😊

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Malvaika

@Malvaika

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Loved the song

I think it was Pitbull.

Watervr, Rey's character was just so cool. Like he is King Khan or something.

Kria's attitude was awesome. Just like diva & so she is.

Awesome Os...thnx fr P.M.

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awesome...😃

loved it...

rey egoistic, over confident..😲...

kriya ne kya jawab diya...

rey's love at first sight...😆

AMAZING...😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Wow . . . . Amazing 😃
rey khadoos dancer,, egoistic,,, full of attitude 😈
itna attitude ki jo dance nhi dekh rhi hai uspe bhi gussa . . . . . How dare she?? 😆
that was crazy . . . . . Kriya ne to rey ki pungi baja di 🤣
aur bolti bhi band kar di . . . . 😉
& he's in love wid her now . . . . . . Takkar ki jo mili hai 😛

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