Posted:
SUDHA...
did lord vishnu or shivji came to your dreams to say that vats you need to present this twist to a swaron story...
To be really honest when i read the tittle in the pm i thought now what is this?? is she watching some mythological show and written an os on that...but when i read the title second time thats when i came to know it is a swaron os...ohk now about os...
the dream and use of lord shiva and lord vishnu was just spot on...it really needed a miracle to make sharon realise that she has started loosing swayam just because of unfinished conversations and misunderstandings...and the way sharon reacted after that dream was outstandingly written...and i am very impressed by one thing that you used the swaron scene that vishnuji briefed shivji while narreting swaron story...and sharon too wake up with the effect of that dream and just remembered that she just today has done with him that had hurted him and she might loose him...and he is too good for her...
but after that sharon decided to go to swayam and the way she was getting restless and strocked her hair with brush got ready in split seconds and ready to go...the detailing was amazing here...this cause to one salute because while narrating such a story in one go you misd out in detailing of many things but you havent skipped anything so biw down to that...
and than came sharon to swayam...and swayam being shown as repairing his cycle here also briefing was too good...and than swaron conversation started...it was just awsomely written sudha...every dialogue, expression and situation was very ideally and smartly and cleaverly descripted there...and you won my all the applause here...you were extraordinery with that part...just flowless...and than just in the end sharon reverted her mind and confessed her feeling was great...and yes in between swayam hearing sharon say i want you and sharon commenting why he heard only that in the whole talk...that was so cute and megical...
and while ending also you left us dumbstruk by sharon asking swayam that does he like beaches??..thst mean a second edition is on the way right???
the swaron hug moment was the best one in the whole os...stood out as a different from all other moments...and ya thank you for dedicating hug to all fans because nobody knows when we will get to see a swaron hug in the show...
thanks for pm..and keep writing more and more...
loved the os totally...
regards
pratik (maddy)
did lord vishnu or shivji came to your dreams to say that vats you need to present this twist to a swaron story...
To be really honest when i read the tittle in the pm i thought now what is this?? is she watching some mythological show and written an os on that...but when i read the title second time thats when i came to know it is a swaron os...ohk now about os...
the dream and use of lord shiva and lord vishnu was just spot on...it really needed a miracle to make sharon realise that she has started loosing swayam just because of unfinished conversations and misunderstandings...and the way sharon reacted after that dream was outstandingly written...and i am very impressed by one thing that you used the swaron scene that vishnuji briefed shivji while narreting swaron story...and sharon too wake up with the effect of that dream and just remembered that she just today has done with him that had hurted him and she might loose him...and he is too good for her...
but after that sharon decided to go to swayam and the way she was getting restless and strocked her hair with brush got ready in split seconds and ready to go...the detailing was amazing here...this cause to one salute because while narrating such a story in one go you misd out in detailing of many things but you havent skipped anything so biw down to that...
and than came sharon to swayam...and swayam being shown as repairing his cycle here also briefing was too good...and than swaron conversation started...it was just awsomely written sudha...every dialogue, expression and situation was very ideally and smartly and cleaverly descripted there...and you won my all the applause here...you were extraordinery with that part...just flowless...and than just in the end sharon reverted her mind and confessed her feeling was great...and yes in between swayam hearing sharon say i want you and sharon commenting why he heard only that in the whole talk...that was so cute and megical...
and while ending also you left us dumbstruk by sharon asking swayam that does he like beaches??..thst mean a second edition is on the way right???
the swaron hug moment was the best one in the whole os...stood out as a different from all other moments...and ya thank you for dedicating hug to all fans because nobody knows when we will get to see a swaron hug in the show...
thanks for pm..and keep writing more and more...
loved the os totally...
regards
pratik (maddy)
Real Estate
9