Shiva - Vishnu -& Her Outburst-SwaRon OS

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Awesome update...liked how u made them solve their mu...n made sharon clarrify...even luved the ending ...thnx for pm.

Thank you 😊

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shaani2209
sorry for being late sudha...
coming to the OS...
First when i read the title was wondering how is it suppose to be relating to swaron...
When i read it...
It was beautiful how you have made that scene the reason to all solutions...
finally reading FULL SwaRon convo was reliving...n SwaRon hug was dream come true...the question sharon asked was amusing😆 hope we'll get to read what happens when that beach part comes true😉
Beautifully penned sudha...
thanks for the pm...

That's ok Rosh, you don't have to be sorry 😳 i am happy you liked it.

and hopefully something inspires me to come with the second (beach) part.

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Can i request the few RES to be Edited please...😳

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: shantanu.swayam
I loved how you incorporated mythology in an OS!

Kudos for your idea!
You've represented them represented them well!
I loved how Swayam chuckled when he thought his philosophical talks were confusing him!

I liked how you made them let go of their baggage and start afresh.

At this point in the show, there actually needs to be divine intervention for them to be happy and together.

Thanks for your comments Anmol 😳

I am happy that you liked the idea behind the OS...and sure the current scenario of SwaRon in D3 needs divine intervention..and some creative thinking from the CV's would be more then welcomed.

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chimpukli10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

hey really very very srry for commenting dis late.i know i have res a post but i m lazy on finding it now..i liked d concept.i had first thought that it wuld be shiv and parvati as swayam and sharon but it turned out to be completely different..it was awesum..

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ananya randhawa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

spirituality always leads to something pure and divine just like it led to in this OS. Lord Shiva and Vishnu's conversation was a pleasure to read. i agree with every of their statements. at first when i read the title i was a little confused actually not little but much cause a thought peeped in my mind what does Lord Shiva and Vishnu has to do with SwaRon..? as i started reading the OS a ticklish smile played on my lips. i loved how Lord Shiva responded to Lord Vishnu's description of our not-so-common couple! the tale told by Lord Vishnu was a must read for every D3 fan out there. coming to Sharon her realization was very much expected cause we know that this silly girl is seriously in love with Swayam but yet always tends to hurt him moreover the thought of loosing him to some other girl is the most horrifying experience for her [just like Kriya and Nicole ma'am 😆] the second part started at an ease with the "i want time" clause of theirs nothing unexpected but as the story proceeded further it took a whole different turn leading to an altogether different destination the one which is supposed to be only theirs. loved this OS to the core. it had perfect Story-line,perfect dialogues and with it the perfect characters. AWESOME OS.

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Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Well sudha di...i'm in short of wrds...an awesome os..👏👏gr8 writin...u choose to write wit a vry vulnerable portion of swaron relationship...seriously at dat tym nly upar Wala cud hlp swaron come out of dat misery.😆..Luvd d shiva nd vishnu convo...it ws cute nd really nyc.😳..sharon's dream ws sumthng nyc...it rly hlpd sharon to understand dat wt she ws doin ws wrong...nd dat 👏fear of lusin Swayam washed over her again...finally she decided to end d fights.😕..on seein sharon Swayam's expression wre gr8...ya indeed he had ws full of ques...he himself cdnt understand y she ws doin dis...i absolutely loved how u justified sharon here..👍🏼.how she z nd wt she wanted...she z Nvr a regular girl...nd Swayam knew dat...well i'v felt dat Swayam's philosophical toks sumtyms tkes sharon to deep thoughts nd she thnks hard bout dem😆...well d convo durin d "spcl" prt ws nyc...nd dey again came on d defendin jhagra once again...Luvd how u handled it...nd dis space thng..seriously i wntd to hear dese wrds frm sharon..😡.space sumtyms creates distances...wich ws d case fr swaron at dat tym...d part how sharon poured her hr8 out to Swayam...😳discussed bout d cheebum party issue...dere r so many issues dat on screen swaron needs to clarify..nd dis shivam fiasco nd gifts r among dem..😕.nd wen Swayam said i love u to her i cud totally relate to sharon here...though she knew deep down dat Swayam wud alwys luv her bt sumtyms hearin dat u r loved hlps nd z needed...nd i lyk d prt where she asked fr tym...a little...nd how u ended it ws jst perfect.👍🏼..⭐️"He turned his back and said all the time you need Sharon your wish is my command.She clenched her fist and finally made her mind. She knew he would wait a lifetime for her but she was in no mood to reject her feelings anymore.She ran to him and hugged him with all her love. He stood there surprised as he slowly turned around facing her. For the first time he could see the same love in her eyes as for him. He put his arms around her giving her the sense of love and security."⭐️she finally did except her feelins for him...nd gave him a hug...how can any1 hlp but nt lve dis person😳😳😳...sswayam was angelic as alwys...it ws nyc how u brought her dream after d realisation...i gave such a long comment.😆.i hope u r nt bored...gr8 story once again...nd superb writin...⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

^^ I Read all your comments even on the previous ones and it feels great that one would read my work much later i wrote and enjoy it the same :D

And i personally like Sunsets, nature and candles alot..so you will find that usage in lot of my works...any why i make Swayam cook in most of my work is..because i find that very romantic 😳 and its also because Swayam told Shaorn that he would cook for someone special during the boat ride..and i just love that SwaRon scene..so who better then Sharon can be special in Swayam's life for him to cook for.

Sudha 😊

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flirteyed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING! How do u write so beautifully each nd evrytym? Well i know its a silly ques to ask bt my god ur evry OS mersmerizes me in its own way nd dis one was no different! I m literaly cursing myself 4 nt reading it earlier coz evrytym i saw d title it highly intrigued me bt sumhw i nvr got to read it nd i cant remember nw y! D concept was amazing! Even though d title was apt for d story i nvr thot d starting wud b d way it was! Since i m very late in reading d OS so i wish dat dis cud have happened widout d divine intervention ofcourse coz v know god is all around us nd evrythng datz happening nly coz god exsists bt aisa bhi hota toh maaza a jata! Well i dnt knw wat i m saying bt i hope u get my point! Newayz u wer damn ri8 dey realy need to clear out der past baggage odrwise MUs wil keep happening! Loved d part where sharon had d dream bout her future in disguise f a ni8mare :P
Dnt knw y bt dis was my fav part from d whole OS 'In a flash he moved to her and cupped her face possessively caressing, almost as if it had a mind of it's own and none of his pain mattered anymore.'
Nd realy loved d way u gave a closure to most f d MUs! D SwaRon hug was beautiful :)
Keep writing sudha coz ur one hell of a writer :D

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