Shiva - Vishnu -& Her Outburst-SwaRon OS

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Gargi

@gargicool

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Very well written, surely a unique concept! I liked the plot, innovative of you to include Shiva and Vishnu in it. 😳

I liked this line of Swayam too, where he wonders if he himself is so confusing to her! He was adorable, all through the OS. I also liked the way Sharon 'comes around', as you called it. Her outburst was a much needed one in the present times. (Damn! The CVs fail to understand that from the past 1 and half year) Also,the beach parts were very good.

Will checkout your gallery.😊

Edited by gargicool - 13 years ago

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swaronilicious

@swaronilicious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

WOW you really need to give cvs your ideas for me it was just PERFECT and truly PURE SwaRon

pls do pm me whwnever you write about Swaron pls i luv your works

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paro1311

@paro1311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Brilliant OS!!! Reading this made me feel so much better after the not so gr8 episode that i sat thru.. So after being a silent reader of this forum nd an ardent swaron fan from day one, i decided to logon as a member just to say how thankful i am for your OS 😊

Expecting more such works from all the writers in this forum who keep 'the real swaron' alive for us.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Sudha for a moment I thought hey what is this shiv and vishnu in SwaRon OS. Later when i read on, i found out it is super sweet like all your works. Wow the SwaRon hug Sudha everything is so realstic, sharon dreams about their breakup and with Gods acts accordingly.Love you so much for the hug. It is the need of the day. Well sudha

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Sudha🤗

RES

Unres

Firstly apologies for the delay, I was busy with something

Coming to the update, reading this work gave me immense satisfaction since you touched those points which we literally beg to CV's to show ...A MUCH NEEDED SwaRon convo.

And the Convo between two Gods was really a nice touch and added bits of light moment.

For me this was one of your most refine works.

Keep coming Sudha😳

Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Edited my comment - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65328227

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

res

*edited*

first of all a big sorry for being late dear!!😛

coming to the os,my god,seriously its only possible for a person like you to relate the concept like what you did here.

i don't think anybody could ever think of starting a swaron os,that to with lord vishnu and shiva😃...

and dear you are absolutely right,all swaron fans needed it!!! we are really suffering a lot with the current track! sick of it, and this was very refreshing one to cool my heart...

keep on shaping masterpieces...your friend will always be waiting for your works...

love you sudha...🤗

Edited by tanzz15 - 13 years ago

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hey sudha dis is for d first tym when i read abt god in Os or all typ bt un dono ka condsnhe usme sachme bhagvaan ji hi help kar sakte he so just loved d Os 👏 thanx for Pm 😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

That was a really good concept and frankly speaking, a little divine intervention is what SwaRon really need right now !! I loved the fact that you cleared all the MUs between them !! Sharon finally spoke her heart out and realised that she does fear losing him !! I'm happy that though she said she needed time, this time she didn't restrain herself from expressing a little of what she does feel for Swayam !! And her dream for her future with Swayam was absolutely beautiful !!

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

ya it was nice 👏one . god intervention in swaron relationship is needed now . i enjoyed der face to face conversation and hug i know in d3 we wont get a hug . thanx for pm