TaaRey-OS-pyar toh hona hi tha...part2 on pg 5

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nikita

@nakuulxfan4life

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Totally romantic and filmy!!😳 Mere aankhon mein khushi ke ahsu hain...😭😳 Lovely OS!

Quote

christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

what an update dr!☺️
! it was amazing.even if you write continously for 5 pages about TaaRey i will read it..
you are fabulous writer👏
loved this taani a lot...the last scene and the rehearsal room waala scene 😳 touched my heart..love TaaRey

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nikita.aarons
Totally romantic and filmy!!😳 Mere aankhon mein khushi ke ahsu hain...😭😳 Lovely OS!

thanks dear😆

Quote

.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: blue_cherub
what an update dr!☺️
! it was amazing.even if you write continously for 5 pages about TaaRey i will read it..
you are fabulous writer👏
loved this taani a lot...the last scene and the rehearsal room waala scene 😳 touched my heart..love TaaRey

thanks a lot dear😊

Quote

PreciousHeart

@PreciousHeart

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

its was amazing👏 hope something like this happens iin the shhow luved the OS❤️😃

Quote

.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: saraasad22
its was amazing👏 hope something like this happens iin the shhow luved the OS❤️😃

thanks a lot😊

Quote

padmaja19

@padmaja19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i loved each and every word of ur os 😃... u r a terrific writer must say, 👏... and the way u elaborate the romantic scenes om my, just loved it to the core... i don't have enough words to explain wat i'm feeling after readin ur os... u r god gifted must say... keep on writin such fab stories on our very own taarey😳😳

Quote

-silhouette-

@-silhouette-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

I wish I could do something much more then just liking the OS.

You are an excellent writer which is why it seems so effortless. You describe the smallest of things in depth and not for one moment I was bored. Your work has a very natural ring to it. On funny parts I laughed really loud and on intense parts I was literally holding on to the bed-sheet. :p I loved how you incorporated the original scenes but with a different story. :D

Parts that I loved:

1) The way Rey consoled her. Cutie patootiess <3
2) The sudden hug. Uhh...I could feel the intensity and his tight grip on her. *shivers* <3
3) The gal was on fireee. :D Loved the way she threatened the devil (Shivam) and the stupid students.
4) Scary and intimidating Rey...yum. <3
5) Swayam acting like he was mad :p and the way she confirmed that he wasn't mad like a gazillion times :p
6) And our bubbly Taani is back :D *dances* She is the cutest thing ever.
7) When Rey asked her if she would like water. xD so funny and cute.
8) 'India world cup jeet gaya' HAHAHAHAHAHA! Very nice I must say. <3
9) My heart literally stopped when he said that he doesn't love her anymore. I was like no she can't do that but then I read the whole thing. :p Kafi intense confession thi yaar. I can't wait for this to happen for real. <3
10) Daayuumm the kiss made me HOT! :p Very well described.
11) Rey being jealous that it might have not been her first kiss. He looks sexy when he is jealous. <3

Please please please write more often. You should make a ff if possible. I am in love with this OS.