TaaRey-OS-pyar toh hona hi tha...part2 on pg 5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Caskkett

thank you so much...thanks for reading...and wanted to tell you, you do a great job with those AT's ...I can only imagine how much time it must be taking to make it ...and looking at fast everyone eat up the thread...you always have work at hand😆

Originally posted by: padmaja19

i loved each and every word of ur os 😃... u r a terrific writer must say, 👏... and the way u elaborate the romantic scenes om my, just loved it to the core... i don't have enough words to explain wat i'm feeling after readin ur os... u r god gifted must say... keep on writin such fab stories on our very own taarey😳😳

Originally posted by: fatima_tr

I wish I could do something much more then just liking the OS.

You are an excellent writer which is why it seems so effortless. You describe the smallest of things in depth and not for one moment I was bored. Your work has a very natural ring to it. On funny parts I laughed really loud and on intense parts I was literally holding on to the bed-sheet. :p I loved how you incorporated the original scenes but with a different story. :D

Parts that I loved:

1) The way Rey consoled her. Cutie patootiess <3
2) The sudden hug. Uhh...I could feel the intensity and his tight grip on her. *shivers* <3
3) The gal was on fireee. :D Loved the way she threatened the devil (Shivam) and the stupid students.
4) Scary and intimidating Rey...yum. <3
5) Swayam acting like he was mad :p and the way she confirmed that he wasn't mad like a gazillion times :p
6) And our bubbly Taani is back :D *dances* She is the cutest thing ever.
7) When Rey asked her if she would like water. xD so funny and cute.
8) 'India world cup jeet gaya' HAHAHAHAHAHA! Very nice I must say. <3
9) My heart literally stopped when he said that he doesn't love her anymore. I was like no she can't do that but then I read the whole thing. :p Kafi intense confession thi yaar. I can't wait for this to happen for real. <3
10) Daayuumm the kiss made me HOT! :p Very well described.
11) Rey being jealous that it might have not been her first kiss. He looks sexy when he is jealous. <3

Please please please write more often. You should make a ff if possible. I am in love with this OS.

Originally posted by: desigirlx5

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totally romantic!! gosh everything was perfect.

the beginning her emotions how u described her feelings when rey found her silent at rehearsal hall ifelt like i was picturing it 👏

then how taani took everything into her own hands and "fixed" the problem

then how taani became our bubbly taani again 😃

and romantic tr

you are such an amazing talented writer loved this OS 👏

Originally posted by: raj-guria-kriti

sooo ooo ooo romantic yaar!!!!!!!!!! wht a ss..🤗..gr888 job...👏ufff!!!! direct maar dala... 1st kiss kab hoga... 🤗 update soon... 😉

Originally posted by: blossom1234

part 2

loved it loved it loved it

so Romantic☺️☺️

u described each and everything very well👏

i just want this in the show now

amazing job👏👏

Originally posted by: patie

luvd it...☺️

Originally posted by: sreelu094

OMG NO WORDS

WAT WILL I DO.OH GOD PLEASE GIVE ME SOME WORDS

WAT WILL I SAY.ITS JUST AWESOME👏

IT WAS TOO LENGTHY AND I LIKE LENGTHY ONE😃

I LOVED EACH AND EVERY WORD IN IT

SORRY I WASN'T ABLE TO CMNT IN 1ST PART.IT WAS TOO GOOD

STILL LOVED 2ND PART MORE 🤪

WELL THANKS FOR THE PM 🤗