TaaRey-OS-pyar toh hona hi tha...part2 on pg 5

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.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

😊

Originally posted by: KunwarKiDeewani
Great Job 👏
Loved It 😳
The part where he says JHOOTH BOLNA MERI HOBBY HAI 😆
And wen she repeats his words n da chal ab kat le part - 😆 👏
I loved it - Too Adorable cant wait for part 2 😳

thanks yaar...😊

I am Rupali

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desigirl_VD

@desigirl_VD

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

unres

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seriously if i could just say one word it would be amazing!

loved this os cnt wait for the next part

where do i begin how rey stopped her from going with shivam

how he 'jokingly' (we know u meant it rey 😆) told shivam that taani wanted to break up with him

how he noticed taani's uncomfortable behavior around shivam

how he didn't want to let her go

and the chipku taarey scenes ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

loved this!! 🤗 👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by desigirlx5 - 13 years ago

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

loved each and every bit of this part!! great job👏 waiting for the next

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rajashree

@raj-guria-kriti

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

superb os... simply superb... actual mein ho sakta hain kya??? kash... ..loved it yaar...🤗

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-silhouette-

@-silhouette-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

One of the best I have read so far :)

You are a very good writer and you describe every small detail in an engrossing manner. What I really loved about this OS is the fact that you just did one scene and elaborated on that. Simple yet very beautiful! :)

Parts that I loved:

1) The way the story starts in such an abrupt manner. :)
2) Rey predicting that she would ask about his wrist and she does. :p This was just adorable! :D
3) When Rey fights for Taani just because he feels something is not right. Love a possessive Rey xD
4) I laughed really hard when Taani wasn't letting Rey speak :p She snapped right back at Rey :D
5) Rey finally apologizing for his behaviour. :D
6) When Rey said, "Taani wants to break up with you." That was twist and if it was true it would have been something different then the usual Rey finding out the truth. :)
7) The hud and the almost kiss had me running in my street like a retard. :p Very well written :D
8) Rey asking her to make him stop was sexy :p It showed how much affect she had on him. <3
9) So close yet so far. :( It got so intense when they were inches apart but stupid Swayam had to ruin it. :p

Can't wait for the next part and you should write more often :D

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Man!sha

@_LostSoul_

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awesome.

U r a brilliant Writer.

Loved it.

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desigirl_VD

@desigirl_VD

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

edited my comment on page 2 😳

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Ritika

@...Ritzy...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Edited my comment on Page 1 😳

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.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: RitikaLoveAmar
Wow the part where TaaRey shared beautiful moments is so romantic..☺️ I loved it thoroughly 👏 Nice one dear Eagerly waiting for part 2 😳

thanks a lot Ritika...glad you liked it...

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.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: blossom1234
just one word after reading this OS ...loved it 👏👏👏it was amazing
keep writing more👍🏼

thank you so much...thanks for reading...and wanted to tell you, you do a great job with those AT's ...I can only imagine how much time it must be taking to make it ...and looking at fast everyone eat up the thread...you always have work at hand😆

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