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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: magical_mania

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Are you sure this is your first write-up?

I mean this is UN-BELIAVABLE😲

I always knew you've got a style to move with buh this was worth dying nikki 🤢😆



Coming to the update...the very first few lines can engross any reader into it

and i'm sure no one can come out from the trance bounded by your beautiful writing style😳

U portrayed the character Sharon so well...there is no way backing out...

Her whole journey from her denotions to her secret admirer part then to that abondoned old stair case was so mesmerizing I could feel the inner her...😊

Kuddos to You!! Darls😛

You are an awesome writer Nikki...N m sure you know this really well😉

- Mania 🤗

P.S. Though I'm not a SwaRon fan...but I could really relate it 😃

Mannu, I was waiting for u to read dis one. Thanks a ton darls for appreciating me so much. I'm really glad dat u liked the OS. I hope I was able to bring out the real Sharon from this write-up.

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Diksha Kumar

@Diksha97

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Nysh yaar...
Luved it to the end...
I wud have been much more glad if u had extended it..:((..

M sending u the buddy reuest...do accept it..I think we guys can be great friends...😉

Luking forward to ur next updates,
Diksha

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Diksha97
Nysh yaar...
Luved it to the end...
I wud have been much more glad if u had extended it..:((..

M sending u the buddy reuest...do accept it..I think we guys can be great friends...😉

Luking forward to ur next updates,
Diksha

Diksha, I accepted your buddy request. Glad u liked it.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

This was awesome Nikita, loved the concept, you have beautifully shown the bonding between a father and daughter and the fathers emotions when his daughter is getting married. You have justified the title in the end, and i like the phone convo that SwaRon have. Thanks for the PM and do write more and always PM me when you do.

For some weird reason i don't see the like tab to like the OS so for now i'd say its Super like from me.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

this was ur first write-up 😲 are u sure? coz this was fabulous...

i so loved the writing...

SwaRon journey was written so well

i would love if u have extended this...

plz pm me when u write on SwaRon 😊

P.S so sorry.. im not able to find the like button.. it has disappeared 😕

Edited by ---Priya--- - 13 years ago

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
This was awesome Nikita, loved the concept, you have beautifully shown the bonding between a father and daughter and the fathers emotions when his daughter is getting married. You have justified the title in the end, and i like the phone convo that SwaRon have. Thanks for the PM and do write more and always PM me when you do.
For some weird reason i don't see the like tab to like the OS so for now i'd say its Super like from me.

Thanks Sudha, it really means a lot to hear from you as I've always admired your awesome writing skills. No worries for the like button, IF behaves strange at times.

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

god nikita such an awsome os...i wanted to read something that summerise a beautiful love story...and what better than swaron can i get to read...amazingly described all the main points from trial relationship to confession to marriage wow wow and just amazing the only thing is comming to my mind now about this write up...

thanks for pm nikita...

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: pratik54000
god nikita such an awsome os...i wanted to read something that summerise a beautiful love story...and what better than swaron can i get to read...amazingly described all the main points from trial relationship to confession to marriage wow wow and just amazing the only thing is comming to my mind now about this write up...

thanks for pm nikita...

Thanks for the deligthful comment Bhaiya.

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Phew, Finally read it!

Believe it or not, reading pre-marriage stuff gives me creeps! Like sacchi.

But thats a personal prerogative. So, tension naa le. Nothing regarding your writing! :P

First of all, I loved how you included her parents! It was much needed!

And though I consider myself to be a SwaRon novice, this still was a beautiful fairytale.

This was sooo a happily ever after to their tale. Amazingly described!

And true to thr characters!

Cheers Niks! Good going! Do write more!

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: aria009hera
Phew, Finally read it! 


Believe it or not, reading pre-marriage stuff gives me creeps! Like sacchi. 


But thats a personal prerogative. So, tension naa le. Nothing regarding your writing! :P


First of all, I loved how you included her parents! It was much needed! 


And though I consider myself to be a SwaRon novice, this still was a beautiful fairytale. 


This was sooo a happily ever after to their tale. Amazingly described! 


And true to thr characters! 


Cheers Niks! Good going! Do write more!

Anki di, finally you read it, ahh.
Thanks for the delightful comment and yeah, I love being true to the characters.
I have actually written a bit more but I won't compel u to comment :P

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