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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Luv it, luv it luv it Nikki😊 it was a serenely beautifully written SwaRon OS - luvd ur Sharon and the POV which described her journey of the relationship with its ups and downs...Swayam has been so aptly portrayed thru the fone convo...teh way he understands every nerve of hers makes him the most ideal luver for any girl, the way u ended it is what dreams r made of

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

This was really beautiful !! Loved how you depict the whole SwaRon journey till now and also their future !! Very well written !!

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honeyangel

@honeyangel

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

VERY WELL written and lovely dude... beautiful... Swaron : Together Forever.. ❤️

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tashu20

@tashu20

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

awesome os...loved it...!!!!!😊

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: meevee
Luv it, luv it luv it Nikki😊 it was a serenely beautifully written SwaRon OS - luvd ur Sharon and the POV which described her journey of the relationship with its ups and downs...Swayam has been so aptly portrayed thru the fone convo...teh way he understands every nerve of hers makes him the most ideal luver for any girl, the way u ended it is what dreams r made of

Meera, I was thinking that I wud personally quote the comments tomorrow but your comment compelled me to reply sweetie.
You are a fabulous writer and I've always admired ur write-ups and now when u are saying that u luved the OS, it really matters a lot to me.
Thanks.⭐️

Edited by nikita_arsha - 13 years ago

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

edited my comment! 😊
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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Amazing indeed, and it really doesn't look like your first writeup.Loved the start explanining things from her Dad's POV.

I loved that line irritating creature with affectionate eyes😳 can't say about the former but latter part toh i totally believe to be true. Loved the way she remember how they "finally" got together. And it took her two years to realize that she loves him hope that show wali Sharon doesn't take that long.

So in totality i really LOVED this os as well as the title.

Will look forward to more writeups on Swaron.😃

Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Sorry for the delay in the comment. Been a bit busy.

So anyways what I liked the best about your OS was Gautam Raiprakash's POV. I find it quite interesting when someone narrates a story from a third person's POV. Of course it isn't as much detailed but it lends a certain perspective to the story which is quite insightful. And you managed to do a fab job of it. I also liked the play of the vernacular language that you smoothly embedded in this OS. It was refreshing.

The veranda scene and the phone conversation was again nicely executed. It was a short, sweet and simple OS that held a lot of weight in terms of emotions. And I really like the way you write. Looking forward to more of your future works. Thanks for the PM.😊

Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 13 years ago

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ShravniC
Nikki 🤗 sorry late hogayi 
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nd now about this i mean ur first write-up, ye first write-up tha


nikki itna time kyu laga likhne mai to be frank u killed it 


the way u expressed everyone's POV i loved it 


Sharon n Swayam's 5 years relationship awww😳


ur writing skills are awesome will be surly waiting for ur works 😃


specially ending just loved it i could literally feel the love 😳 😆


Nikki-Mikki on whole it was freaking awesome 


Love u ❤️

Shravi, thank u thank u so much sissy.
Acha, abt the last part, I'm glad u liked it. I actually had goosebumps writing it. Itne cheesy lines toh sirf apna Swayum hi bol sakta hai. 😳

Edited by nikita_arsha - 13 years ago

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: shaani2209
Firstly congo for ur first write up😊 and no doubt it was amazing nikki...
</div><div>loved the flow from Mr. raiprakash's POV to Sharon's POV...it was nice and refreshing to read sharon's flashback 😛 looking forward to more of your write ups😃 and in the end the understanding that SwaRon share is beautiful ending...
thanks for the pm...

Rosh di, thanks for d appreciation. Feels like ages since we actually interacted. I'm glad u liked it. And as for the PM, no need to say thanks. 😊

Edited by nikita_arsha - 13 years ago

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