SwaRon OS: Together Forever - Page 4

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Nikki this is the best, coz swaron with real situation. I love the word forever associated with swaron, it gives me goosebumps, a nice feeling, Thanks yaar for such a sweet beautiful OS. Def Swaron are meant to be together.Sharons thoughts revealing her thoughts and swayam got to know excatly what she is thinking is really so very unique which can be found only in them. Loved it nikki. Its a mindblowing OS

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

I noe m super late bt still...RES!!

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It was Amazingg nikita! 👍🏼
It doesn't seem that this is your first write-up..seriously! 😲
It was really nyc the way you portrayed the mind of sharon's dad..
i really lykd dis line--

"No, let her enjoy the blissful shower of raindrops. It's the celebration of the end of maidenhood and her journey to womanhood,"

the quick grill on swaron's relationship was well done too!
the ending was perfect!
Hoping to read more in the future from you! 😳
Brilliant effort at first i must say! ⭐️
And thank you for the pm! 😃

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Nikita, awesome OS. You're descriptive skills are really good, you know! And I liked reading Gautam Raiprakash's point of view. Sharon's parts were beautifully penned. How beautifully you captured their journey in words. Loved the way it ended. On the whole, I Loved your OS.! :)

Originally posted by: Rutu

Amazing indeed, and it really doesn't look like your first writeup.Loved the start explanining things from her Dad's POV.

I loved that line irritating creature with affectionate eyes😳 can't say about the former but latter part toh i totally believe to be true. Loved the way she remember how they "finally" got together. And it took her two years to realize that she loves him hope that show wali Sharon doesn't take that long.

So in totality i really LOVED this os as well as the title.

Will look forward to more writeups on Swaron.😃

Originally posted by: nikita_arsha

Surbhi, I'm glad u liked it. The line is my personal favourite. Thanks for giving me all the adulation and praise.😊

And as for the PM, no need to say thanks.

res...

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Are you sure this is your first write-up?

I mean this is UN-BELIAVABLE😲

I always knew you've got a style to move with buh this was worth dying nikki 🤢😆

and i'm sure no one can come out from the trance bounded by your beautiful writing style😳

U portrayed the character Sharon so well...there is no way backing out...

Her whole journey from her denotions to her secret admirer part then to that abondoned old stair case was so mesmerizing I could feel the inner her...😊

Kuddos to You!! Darls😛

You are an awesome writer Nikki...N m sure you know this really well😉

- Mania 🤗

P.S. Though I'm not a SwaRon fan...but I could really relate it 😃