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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Amazing os
I really loved it from starting gautam rai prakash pov n then whole flashback of swaron special moments
Swaron together forever
Looking forward to ur more write ups on swaron

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I noe m super late bt still...RES!!

*edited*

It was Amazingg nikita! 👍🏼
It doesn't seem that this is your first write-up..seriously! 😲
It was really nyc the way you portrayed the mind of sharon's dad..
i really lykd dis line--

"No, let her enjoy the blissful shower of raindrops. It's the celebration of the end of maidenhood and her journey to womanhood,"

the quick grill on swaron's relationship was well done too!
the ending was perfect!
Hoping to read more in the future from you! 😳
Brilliant effort at first i must say! ⭐️
And thank you for the pm! 😃

Edited by surbhimathur - 13 years ago

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

such a sweet OS..right from the start gautam rai prakash's wedding preps fr his princess..n description of raindrops..n den the whole recollection..i just loved it..
u shud keep writing more!!

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

firstly esa lag nai raha apne pehli bar try kiya he & nice OS sare aspects eksath aapne le liye & wo bi itbe short leght me ... & finally shadi ka din bhi aa raha he & with all elders permisn ...nice style of writting it's too good keep it up..😊

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nikita, awesome OS. You're descriptive skills are really good, you know! And I liked reading Gautam Raiprakash's point of view. Sharon's parts were beautifully penned. How beautifully you captured their journey in words. Loved the way it ended. On the whole, I Loved your OS.! :)

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Nikki 🤗 sorry late hogayi

nd now about this i mean ur first write-up, ye first write-up tha

nikki itna time kyu laga likhne mai to be frank u killed it

the way u expressed everyone's POV i loved it

Sharon n Swayam's 5 years relationship awww😳

ur writing skills are awesome will be surly waiting for ur works 😃

specially ending just loved it i could literally feel the love 😳 😆

Nikki-Mikki on whole it was freaking awesome

Love u ❤️

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Firstly congo for ur first write up😊 and no doubt it was amazing nikki...

loved the flow from Mr. raiprakash's POV to Sharon's POV...it was nice and refreshing to read sharon's flashback 😛 looking forward to more of your write ups😃 and in the end the understanding that SwaRon share is beautiful ending...

thanks for the pm...

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Nikki this is the best, coz swaron with real situation. I love the word forever associated with swaron, it gives me goosebumps, a nice feeling, Thanks yaar for such a sweet beautiful OS. Def Swaron are meant to be together.Sharons thoughts revealing her thoughts and swayam got to know excatly what she is thinking is really so very unique which can be found only in them. Loved it nikki. Its a mindblowing OS

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Amazing os
I really loved it from starting gautam rai prakash pov n then whole flashback of swaron special moments
Swaron together forever
Looking forward to ur more write ups on swaron

I'm glad u liked it. Thanks for such a sweet comment.

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--
such a sweet OS..right from the start gautam rai prakash's wedding preps fr his princess..n description of raindrops..n den the whole recollection..i just loved it..
u shud keep writing more!!

Thanks for the appreciation. I'm glad u loved it.

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