Jaane Nahi Denge Tujhe...New OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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New os...

Swayam's lines in red..

Doctor's lines in green

Neha's lines in blue

Sharon's lines in brown

Kria's lines in pink.

Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin
Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin

Kria faints and at that time swayam turned...kriaaa...all turn and saw her body lying down blood coming...the ambulance came and kria was admitted to the hosiptal...all crying outside...especially swayam and the weaklings...rey wasnt their he dint know what happened and was busy with taani🤢...

Chahe tujhko rab bulaa le
Hum na rab se darne waale
Raahon mein dat ke
Khade hain hum Yaaron se nazrein Chura le
Chahe jitna dum laage le
Jaane na tujhko aise denge hum

The doctor came out..i am sorry she isint reacting at all you guys have to make her happy or else you all can loose her...all were in tears...i wont loose my bestfriend i cant loose her...they go inside and saw kria stairing at the wall...kria??...she looked at them but turned her head away...they all say that they are sorry and would do anything to bring her back...

Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin

Hum aise nahi haar maan sakte...neha is right we cant loose hope we need to bring the old kria back...and without that moron.,..*moron refers to rey*

Do kadam ka yeh safar hai
Umr chhoti si dagar hai
Ek kadam mein ladkhadaya
Kyon

They all again go inside and saw that the nurse was feeding her soup and she wasnt drinking it at all...kria usse bhul jao..tumhe tumhaari life jeeni hain...life bahot badi hain and sirf ek baar milti hain...u cant loose hope kria!!.tum aise haar nahi manogi!!!...

Sunn le yaaron ki yeh baatein
Beetengi sab gum ki raatin
Yaaron se rootha hai saaale
Kyunn

All were trying to convince kria to listen to them and forget him...but kria was not and was angry with the...please kria...we are sorry...please...

Maa ne khat mein kya likhaatha tha
Jiye tu jug jug yeh kahaa tha
Chaar pal bhi jee na paaye tu
Yaaron se nazrein milaa le
Ek baar tu muskura de
uth ja saale yun sataaata hai
Kyon..

Kria remember what aunty said???...life mein hurdels aati hain lekin life chalti rehti hain...tum aise nahi jeene ka hope chod sakti ho...just look at us for once kria...just smile for once...bahot mazza aaraha hain na tang karne mein...all begged her to smile...

Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin
Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin
Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin
Jaane nahin denge tujhe
Jaane tujhe denge nahin

At last kria reacted she smiled...you guys are the bestest friends anyone can have in this world...all have a group hug...days passed kria was getting better...she would be pampered alot...the girls would shop for her...swayam n vicky would pick her on their back and roam here and their cracking jokes...amar would make energy drinking juices for her...which she would make a face and drink...bharat would crack stupid jokes to make her laugh...and nilesh would also crack jokes and rap aswell...kria had started living her life again...

Theirs a relation on earth...which is greater than love or family...and that is friendship...they dont hate you for your mistakes or punish you for them...they just gave you hug and say "mujhe include nahi kar sakta tha phir saath baith kar rote ya hasste"...they love you the way you are...true friends are to be found but once you find them they will never go away from your life...

Hope you all liked it...i couldnt add every characters lines...sorry for that!!!...😊😊

My other works :-

Tu jaane na-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3141191/tu-jaane-naa-kr-os

Kyun-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3131708/kyun-kr-os
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 13 years ago

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Himu_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome
Thanks for the pm
Want read more of ur works
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
nice update
loved ur thoughts about friendship!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome As Usual...Loved It...Thnx 4 d PM Me...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Aawiiee it was sch a cuteee OS
i hav tears in my eyes 😭
luvs their friendship
luvd it how they were encouraging kriya nd pampering her 😃
luvd ur OS 👏
do write more stuffs like dis
its awesumm 👍🏼
ty fr da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i don't have words to say.
it was really an amazing update.
hats off to u👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweet one...
Loved it ...
U r rite friendship is really a bliss...geater than any othr relation on earth...:)
thnq for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome thanx for the pm
n nice os
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
awesome...sach dosth humem kabhi nahin chod sakte...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
its beautiful OS...loved the frienship bonding between the gang
loved it

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