Swaron OS- The Gift - Page 4

res😳

Awesome update
I really loved sharon's pov
Specially ending
Beautifully written

Shalu u just carried on from where u left off literally ...all her dilemma was relateable bcoz she is Sharon...but kudos for that last para, every word in that was true to its meaning and had a mesmerizing effect...really really really wish ki ek baar hum D3 mein bhi Shar ko wahi karte hue dekhen jo tumne usse karwaya hai...😃 waiting to know the aftereffects of the bold step of our Diva

Originally posted by: meevee

Shalu u just carried on from where u left off literally ...all her dilemma was relateable bcoz she is Sharon...but kudos for that last para, every word in that was true to its meaning and had a mesmerizing effect...really really really wish ki ek baar hum D3 mein bhi Shar ko wahi karte hue dekhen jo tumne usse karwaya hai...😃 waiting to know the aftereffects of the bold step of our Diva

How come I was not informed of this OS . Agar aaj Sudha ne mention nahi kiya hota second part ke barey mein to mujhe to pata bhi nahi chalta.

Coming to the OS. This is definitely the truest depiction of Sharon so far in any of the FF I have ever read. She is completely like the Sharon we knew. So hats off to you Shalini for such brilliant potrayal of Sharon. I just loved how this OS began. Simple and in such an uncomplicated manner like breakfast date. An there also loved how you presented Sharon's mind wondering over various thoughts. It was really good and as well as amusing. And then the way the mood of the OS shifts from something light to something serious was applaudable. I just loved how both Swayam and Sharon remain true to their character.

Coming to this update. It was way beyond cool. The way Sharon was comtemplating everything was just so Sharon like. Simply loved the entire update. I can't even pick any particular favourite scene in it. And one more thing - you definitely have way with words. Your writing was visually expressive. Loved the way you described the entire ride of Sharon.

And the last part of this update had definitely left me wanting to crave for more. Beautifully penned the calming effect of Swayam on Sharon. Waiting eagerly for the next update.

hey!!!awesummm piece!!!!perfectly written!!! luvd d way sharon thought bout each fnds reacn,u hav mastered in undrstnding SHARON'S charactr,dats why u express her so wel in ur writings!!!!god bless..;)

Originally posted by: D3fication

Wow. Should i bow down to you?

You have gotten into sharon's head, analysed and scrutinized every little thing and given us Sharon like NO ONE in their stories ever have. I think this may have been the best SwaRon we can get from Sharon's point of view, something which one does not get very often.

Needless to say, i loved the update. REALLY loved it. :D

Eagerly, very eagerly waiting for the next part. Update soon! :)

Originally posted by: marauder

How come I was not informed of this OS . Agar aaj Sudha ne mention nahi kiya hota second part ke barey mein to mujhe to pata bhi nahi chalta.

Coming to the OS. This is definitely the truest depiction of Sharon so far in any of the FF I have ever read. She is completely like the Sharon we knew. So hats off to you Shalini for such brilliant potrayal of Sharon. I just loved how this OS began. Simple and in such an uncomplicated manner like breakfast date. An there also loved how you presented Sharon's mind wondering over various thoughts. It was really good and as well as amusing. And then the way the mood of the OS shifts from something light to something serious was applaudable. I just loved how both Swayam and Sharon remain true to their character.

Coming to this update. It was way beyond cool. The way Sharon was comtemplating everything was just so Sharon like. Simply loved the entire update. I can't even pick any particular favourite scene in it. And one more thing - you definitely have way with words. Your writing was visually expressive. Loved the way you described the entire ride of Sharon.

And the last part of this update had definitely left me wanting to crave for more. Beautifully penned the calming effect of Swayam on Sharon. Waiting eagerly for the next update.