Swaron OS- The Gift - Page 2

Awesome one...:) keen to see what happens next.:) plz do pm me..

awesome...beautifully written

lame????????😲 Are you kidding? This is one the bestest OS I have ever read, love it when it is written from sharons POV, and here it is as if the whole OS is penned down by MsRaipraksash herself. It is simply awesome and you are one the best writers i have ever come across. Plz jaldi update karna, it is a request.

i jst luvd reading dis...waiting 4 d nxt update...😍

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

FINALLY!!! After such a looong wait we got an OS out of you! iEcstatic! 😃😃

You know Shalini you should exploit your talent. Maybe write an FF. That way we'll get to read your work from time to time. 😈

This one was an impeccable piece of writing. It strictly adhered to Sharon's character. Like there wasn't one place where I thought that Sharon wouldn't act like that. It was so true to her character and that has delighted me to no end. To go into the depths of her character and figure out why she acts that way she does is no easy feat. She's an extremely multi-dimensional person. And you did a bang-on job of portraying her. Hell, you did it better than the CV's. Though when you go to see that's not really a compliment.

And I like the bits with Swayam too. There again you didn't deviate from the true essence of the character. It was so Swayam of him to ask her for that.

I really like the concept and the setting. This is the first time I've read an OS in which they are having a breakfast date. That is so refreshingly normal and uncomplicated. Except for the part where you got in the conversation. Now that is what they should be fighting about! Real problems! Not some lame-ass, inconsequential Taani related problems that doesn't make an iota of sense. Seriously Shals you can kick all the writers ka butt without ever lifting your feet. And I have told you this before, you know bahot zamane pehle, that you're one of my favorite writers. Oh I forgot- the dialogues were superbly written. And so were Sharon's emotions and thoughts. All in all a highly satisfying read. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part! And I'm going to blatantly ignore the fact that you said you'd update in a day or two. You had better update soon and i mean SOON! 😳

P.S. Really? You really think this could be categorized as lame? Go get your head checked woman! 😳

Love,

Nidz.

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

Nidhi...🤗

Ur comment just made my day...😊 Hehe exploit my "talent"?! .. To be honest writing doesn't come to me as naturally as it should.. i have to be in a particular frame of mind and really willing to come up with something😳.. May be this will change if i work on it and mk a conscious effort to improve which i guess i will thanks to all the encouragement one receives on this forum.. :)

M glad u liked this.. u of all people.. since we have become better friends now i can't get too mushy with my remarks about u as i used to do earlier😆 But may be this one last time i'l tell u that ur one of my fav persons over here, writer or otherwise, and so it means a great deal to me if u like my work.. Thanks for such a long and lovely comment.. I'l try n update soon..

P.S. i like the idea of kicking sum's butt without having to lift my feet!😆