SwaRon OS: Shower Fiasco

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mugdha

@mugdhaMJ

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

exactly...this is how swaron love story should be...so happy to read it...thanks

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

wow it was intense loved it

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Now that was ammmaaazzzinnnggg!!! :D :D

I was laughing my head off! :)

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

🤣 🤣 🤣Oh God ! I can just picturize the whole thing and can't dtop myself from laughing, my bro thinks I have become mad 🤣 🤣 But who cares !! 🤣 🤣

The most hilarious line was of Sharon --- "I was just helping him being the CS " and Rey completing -- "in taking a bath" 🤣🤣 Oh GOD !! Thankq Thanq for such a good OS plz write some more...

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

woww...dis was just fantastic!!...naughty naughty sharon!!...and ooohhh...sexy swayam!!!...it was just aammmazzingg!!!!!!!...u r such a gud writer...love all ur works..!!...nd once again...dis was fan-fan-fantasticcc!!!!!!!

do keep writin more nd keep sendin pms...😃😃

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awesm os dam funny,aww swayam is so cute yar

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@DaShInG_DeViL

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

sorry for such a late comment dear...

now coming to the OS it was truly a delight to read...loved each and every line of it...and it was amazingly penned down.

well thought over and i loved the bit of humor along with romance...keep writing sweets u have got some good writing abilities in u...and this OS was surely an example of it.

thanks for the pm.

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neetha

@neetha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

goshh nidhi..i hav sooo many butterflies in ma stomach right now..omgg!!!the half naked swayammm...n then the closeness of two heavenly bodies...ummm..m short of words..m still blushin..this was awesome..n m gonna read this like any no. of times again n again..

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

"the moustache twirling villain who was all set to steal my virtue not a few minutes ago"

ANDDD CUT!

That's the thing that defines your brilliance En!!

It was not a phangurl writing. (Apologizing in advance) it was like JKR writing a on page summary of Twilight. 😆

Brilliant. The little things. Like Swayam making a comical hairstyle out of his wet hair. "Non-conservative" admiration by Sharon. This all talks virtues of your vocab and writing prowess. And the best thing, it was entertaining for both shrieking phangurls and SwaRon lovers.

Loved it.

*edited*

Oh damn I just realized I've changed my user name.

It's me, Pree (Sheherzade).

Edited by CoffeeAddict - 13 years ago

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

"Actually Rey, um, I'm the CS and he is the ACS,
so um, I was helping him..." said Sharon,
fabricating as she went along. "To take a bath?" suggested Rey, now openly
smirking.
This was 🤣
Now I know what I am missing by not reading your ff.
Calls for a visit to Chaotic Concoctions soon
Fangirlish yet a great read.
Hats off lady!