SwaRon OS: Shower Fiasco

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tanharocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Haha this so super nice...it was actually refreshing and thnx a ton for writing this...wish i would have been able to press the like option like hundred times:)

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suyashkhare10

@suyashkhare10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Wow! It was Awesome! We, the Swaronians would surely have loved to see it!!👏👍🏼👏

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Trushna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

awesome os 👏
really loved it & thanks 4 pm

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__anonymous__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

O-M-G . . . . . . . . . .😲 . . . . .this is one of the AWESOME-EST OSs I've ever come across in my whole life . . . . . . . . .😍 . . . .too enthralled to react . . . . . . .😕 . . . .seriously girl, u get sparks flying around my pc right now under the influence of ur BREATHTAKINGLY SIZZLING HAWT os . . . . . . . . .😳 . . . .I was grinning like an idiot through out the whole time. . . . . . .and now running out of proper words that can come to my aid to jott down my inner upheaval of this moment . . . . . . .☺️

and instead of thanking u for coming up with this master piece . . . . I'm gonna ask u LOUD . . . . .why why why. . . . . . .why did u do that . . . . . .😉 . . ..why did u picturize Swayam so freaking SENSUAL ?????? I'm already an effortless Shantanu Maheshwari PHANGURL . . . . . . . .😎 . . . . . And ur SPELLBINDING stuff is gotta ignite the fire even more vigorously . . . . .😎 . . . . . . . . .

Anyway. . . . . . .u've penned down this os MINDBLOWINGLY . . . . . .👏 . . . . .It's really an OUT OF WORLD experience to go through this piece . . . . .😳 . . . . . .HATS OFF TO U, GIRL . . . . . . .👍🏼 AND THANKS Of course . . . . . . . . .😛

Edited by MagicalShantanu - 13 years ago

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Meera Banerjee

@meeryy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Ok, Nidsy...this was PHENOMENAL!

Thanks to Raf n Shishir for suggesting something like this...something that we might NEVER get to see on the show [for obvious reasons]... but wow, you write SO well! And I loved how you described Sharon here...coy, but not quite.

This is no phangirl stuff...this has been written with a dose of intelligent humor...yeah maybe with some extra "swayamlicious" portions thrown in...so what of that

And I have this silly grin on my face over the ending... very very real, very very creative. Loved ShaReYam 😳

iTotally-adore👏

Edited by meery. - 13 years ago

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Okay, now THAT is something with awesomeness crawled all over it. The part when Swayam frantically takes upon the shower curtain to shield his pure virtue , that too from Sharon, that was so smooothly written! (:P)

And the ending Nidhi, the ending! 😆

I just gotta say this. You write like a boss.

Edited by D3fication - 13 years ago

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Literally i wished yu wud Continue! MORE of it!

it was an AWESSOME OS!!
really loved it wer..
1st :- Swayam being half naked! and still hides himslf!
2nd :- Sharon smirks!

3rd :- Swayam cant handle it.. and grab a HOld of her wrist and pulls her..
4th (the funny part):- ahahah Rey enterss!
:D
Hw awessome cud it get?!

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booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

It was incredibly cute, from beginning to end. The way swayam was pissed at the alarm clock was super cute and so was hiding behind the shower curtain. What really was my favourite part was how swayam realised that he was not hallucinating as this Sharon didn't have the same silly smile on her face, she was smirking. Hahaha
That was just too funny and real at the same time.
Thanks for the PM.
And you should rename this OS to shower heaven 😉

Edited by booksfreak07 - 13 years ago

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NinaArief

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

well reading something like this is usually not better than watching it, but you have done a great job kid.

Edited by NinaArief - 13 years ago

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

that was hell lot of fun...first swaron cute and hot romance and then the icing on the cake given by rey...wish something like this happened in the show...