SwaRon OS: Shower Fiasco - Page 4

Damn, I so badly wish that this happened for real !!! I loved the way Sharon was coming on to Swayam in the beginning and it was Swayam who was playing the role of the vulnerable one !!! And then the way the roles were reversed and Swayam took charge...That was really HAWT !!! And gotta give it to you for the surprise ending with Rey walking in !!! I absolutely adore ShaReYam and this was a treat to read !!!

this damn thing just made n spoilt my day at the same time 😊😭
i have stopped watching d3 n m seriously missing swaron.so for the time when i was reading this i was in infinity n beyond.n when it got over i was like 😡.do us a favour.continue the swaron track in your own way n soon ur stories will have more trp than d3.i cant help smiling stupidly.the way u described swayam just brought back the crazy girl in me n the way u portrayed the characters esp sharon, u nailed it.this is what swaron are meant to be. but obviously manipulations have made the characters unreal for me. cz swaron would never fight so much after they r in a relationshp.

Naughty swaron
Last part was hilarious rey caught them n sharon ka excuse me cs hu n ye acs lol
Awesome

brilliant!!

first of all nice way to start on note that it for a change for what dull sequence is running on the main story which is being telecasted...

and i tell you this was absolutely romantic and rib tackingly funny one...i loved the way you just showed the start of the day of swayam...and it also reminded me that my routine is just like what you have shown in the ss...and now i will also be careful about my bathroom door ha ha ha...well comming back to the topic...you showed a typical boyish starting and it was perfectly described too one can visulise it also...

and than sharon's entry was really surprising and i just was laughing my heart out just imaging swayam's expressions...sharon was really naughty and i sok wish such thing is shown up on tv...man it was just so funny and you have described it so so well that one can not stop laughing...

and than came the sudden change in swayam's mood and it shifted to a romantic angle than...and gosh i so so loved their romance...swayam was just uncontrollable and sharon going shy more more...gosh i can imagine that romance and sharon's face gosh it was so cute and sweet...the romance was flowing all over...so romantic...

and in the end what an timed entry of rey shown to the peack...and the flavour suddenly took a comic angle...and it was damm funny i tell you...and the ending part and sharon going out giving false excuse was so spot on...on the whole it was full on entertaining one...really this can be used in the orignal track in the tv with out any alterations...

thanks so much for the PM...do write more stuff like this...always enjoy to read your writings...

😆😆 Nidhi u gave me the scare of my life!!! i grinnd silly whn i gt the pm bt had to look twice to mk sure i gt the title right!! Swayer_Tom giving us a 'shower fiasco'!!!😆 only rafi cud hv md that possible!!

awsome yar...u brought our intense couple back in hre...thanks a lot...enjoyed it...