Originally posted by: SwaRon911
KD ... u better not lay a FINGER on Sawyerrray 😳 Me and Shishir are to blame 😆
Ahhh ... now where shall I start ..
So Taani let her into the HOUSE and after that Sharon ne "Apna hi ghar samjho" phrase ko kuch zyada hi seriously le liya .. eeeik bar maingate khul gaya toh bass . Baaki ka Sharon khud hi explore kar legi 😆. JUST like Sharon to barge into someone's (Bath) room unannounced 😆
And excuses toh dekho Mohtarma ke .. Darwaza khula thaa toh andar aagayi 😆
Like just cuz the door is open she can saunter in as and when she feels like into someone's private quarters 😆
The sly sly sly MINX !! 😈
Like she didnt hear the water running ... obviously .. someone was all geared up for a semi-nekkid show before pretending it was and accident and she is the coyest coy Maiden in the land of Coy-Dom 😆
Ahhh now what did I like about ur description of her object of fascination?
I love how u didnt fail to appreciate Majnu Bwoys err .. *Cough* errr ... Assets ... 😆 but at the same time .. ur tone of description was that of an objective writer with command over her vocabulary with just about enough appreciation to get the picture accross but not so much as to establish u as one of 'em ladies who watched the episode like a 3784628741 times just to ogle at a nekkid Majnu Bwoy 😆. We read and we know this has been written by an writer with vivid imagination not a PHANGURL. So 👏 for keeping that balance . And I'll tell you what I mean :
^ See what I mean ? You mention whats ... err .. going to work the reds in Sharon Raprakash's face in a while ... yet you do not forget whats COMICAL .. 😆 True Phangurls would swear by the HAWT bible and find NOTHING about the aforementioned Man-Boy 😳. He'd just be .. HAWT . Flawlessly HAWT. 😆
Now onto Swayam ... WHATTAY a way to rouse urself ... stand under the shower .. in a dress shirt 😆 . Even in half sleepy state , ever the Classy gentleman 😆. And ahhh ... when he notices Sharon Standing there .. the silly smile that his lips involuntarily take shape into whenever Sharon is in front of him .. factual or hypothetical Sharon 😆 .. Ahh that bit .. just .. kind of warmed the insides of me .. now how many times have we seen Swayam smile like that ? The kind thats so genuine and so out of ur control it can only come out honest-to-goodness fondness for the other person .. if only the NEW Swayam smiles like that at Sharon 😳 So Nidhi I dunno if I should love you for reminding me what once was ... or hate you for making me realise what no longer is . And the next very moment when Swayam realises its SHARON ... it REALLY is Sharon .. the PANIC and Shower-Curtain wrap to shield his virtues 😆 . What brilliant choice of words . SIMPLE , yet such smooth read , Swayam's state of bliss switching to sheer shock and panic .. what a smooth transition of emotions 😳. Along with u I would also credit Maheshwari (and Sneha ) for the way you write because ur imagination builds on what they have once shown u .. and you being an FF writer .. take on from there . I love how u write, Honest.
Okay onto the best bit . Now why do I say this is the best bit ? Because that IS what SwaRon really is for u . Sharon ... rules over Swayam's heart and she can and will corner him ... if it serves her interests ... 😆 BUT its SWAYAM who is WELL aware of all the nodes in her brains . Only SWAYAM would know how to disarm Sharon Raiprakash in a situtation where she seemingly has all the control ! I LOVE how the tables turn here .. ! From coquettish to Shy Sharon .. and from flushed to fiendish in a moment Swayam . Thats them alright. I loved this because this has always been their game. Sharon plays the court her way and Swayam lets her ... simply because he would ever want to win from her .. but when Swayam starts playing ... she knows its game lost . Now being with a guy who knows u THAT well can be an amazing thing ... OR terrifying. And with Swayam and Sharon its both. Which is why those two are seriously screwed up, yet beautiful at the same time. 😊
Onto the next bit which was prolly KD's favourite bit .. she loves the threesome 😆. Again very well written, the bits with Rey's appearance because that is EXACTLY how Swayam and Sharon we knew and loved would have reacted. Sharon Raiprakash, always in control and Swayam Shekhawat .. always ready ... yet when caught in a compromising position by a friend who knows them well enough to know this is exactly what it looks like .. they have nothing better to say to him than "This is not what it really looks like" 😆 .
I loved this OS because this is ... quintessentially SwaRon.
Class writing Sawerrayyy !!! 👍🏼 🤗 VERY few ppl manage to write about Swayam and Sharon the way they really are .. and instead infuse their own fantasy 'Swayam' and 'Sharon' into their core-characteristics ... but u remain true to what it really is , the way it really is . And THAT my dear .. is talent beyond mere flowery vocabulary. 👏
Arjun
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