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Swaron238

@Swaron238

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OMG!!! Loved it!!! U ttly nailed this one gal!! :D

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Shristi, adipoli OS 👍🏼

Loved the concept and you wrote it so beautifully.

Loved the fact that the OS had the real essence of Swayam and Sharon. The photo frame part was really cute. The challenge, the water fight very well thought.

The ending was perfect, i hope Swayam was blessed enough to see the next day morning sky.

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wonderful os srish.

The challenge and hose part was fuin.

Thanks for pm.

Do write more aur dare to say u r nt a gud writer..

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Fabulous OS!! Just loved it!! 👏

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Girl you write so well...how can u even say u dnt.

Loved it Srishti😊...Mrs. Sharon Swayam Shekhawat sounds so cute..😊 I was expecting a little more romance after the gardener' exit but, it was cute and a villa in outskirts is just wow...totally kinda thing. Keep writing n thnx fr the PM. 😊