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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

How do you always know it's not good? 😳

It's very nicely written, just a few mistakes here and there. The concept is well put and I thoroughly liked the narrative. It made a very refreshing read, yes, it did. =)

Thanks for the PM.

-Kankshita

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awesome os...👏

love it...

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neetha

@neetha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

oh ggod shristi ..ths was justt soo cute..i smiled thruout i read it..its very much like TanHa..cute cute n adorable..they are soo cute..n the best part abt SwaRon is no matter hw much they love..they never stop fightin..n tats wat amkes them special..

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

That was a cute OS and enjoyed it...u do write in an engaging style so pls write more😊

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I always tell you, Srish, you really write well!!

It was very well written, and second Kankshita, how u always say its not good? The grammar was also too right, very few mistakes!!

I say it not good, cos I make huge blunders. You dont need to copy what I say.

The concept is lovely, its beautifully etched!

The small details u gave, makes it great! The description is great to read, and small things like, sharon's entry, swayam putting their photo, swaron revenge is really mast!

Your OS have a nice swaron after wedding thing, and are fun to read!!

Thanks for posting it, finally and thanks for pm!!

Keep writing more!Thank you for pm.

Madz!