D3 OS- YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

awww...you brought tears to my eyes seriously!!!😭

Such an emotional an OS!!!Superbly written!!!👏

Originally posted by: swaronluvr

lovely os..it was beautifully written

do writin more

loved it 😊

Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu

Awesome os...
though da ending was sad...but beautifully written...
loved da way u described swayam's pov

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Really nice OS...You described Swayam's pain so beautifully and the end, though sad fit Swayam so well as no matter what, Sharon's wish will always be his command !!!

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Amazing os but I hate sad endings but I liked the way u describe swayam's emotion..it depends on u but please cont it n give a happy ending

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

amazing os !!

beautifully written 😊

i loved how u depicted the pain that swayam is undergoing and even after that he cares so much abt sharon .

do write more on swaron.

Originally posted by: asmaju

Wonderful Os.

It was a nice but.

But still the end was not as expected.

thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: crazysky

its lovely

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome...its just beautiful