D3 OS- YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

It was a beautiful O.S.Loved it!! 👏

P.S-Sorry for late reply.😳

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox
awww...you brought tears to my eyes seriously!!!😭
Such an emotional an OS!!!Superbly written!!!👏

thanx alot 😃

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: swaronluvr
lovely os..it was beautifully written
do writin more
loved it 😊

thanx 😊

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu
Awesome os...
though da ending was sad...but beautifully written...
loved da way u described swayam's pov

thanx 😃

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Really nice OS...You described Swayam's pain so beautifully and the end, though sad fit Swayam so well as no matter what, Sharon's wish will always be his command !!!

thanx alot !!😊

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Amazing os but I hate sad endings but I liked the way u describe swayam's emotion..it depends on u but please cont it n give a happy ending

umm vl think about it 😊 btw thanx 😊

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muzzy_sk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
amazing os !!
beautifully written 😊
i loved how u depicted the pain that swayam is undergoing and even after that he cares so much abt sharon .
do write more on swaron.

yeah vl surely do dat..and thnx fr ur cmmnt,it means alot😊