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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Wonderful Os.

It was a nice but.

But still the end was not as expected.

thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

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-bitz-

@-bitz-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow nice surprise!

Although it had a sad ending ! it was perfect ! it showed Swayam's feelings ! How much hurt he is but still is smiling just for his Sharon!

Loved it !

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@shivi_reylover

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

g8 os...ur ff ka chap 5 was nice

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Touching OS..luvd the way u conveyedSwayam's anguish as well as his unflinching love for Sharon

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Thanx for the pm...
Asesome os...
Love thr emotions..beautifully written..

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
You have made a double post for this OS. This being the link you have given in your D3 FF commenting here.
just copying my comment from the other post which you can delete later.

Loved it nicely written. Loved how you have shown Swayam's emotions and POV. Even though he is heartbroken he still cares only about Sharon. How he can't think of anything but Sharon's comfort. The ending felt a bit abrupt, may be its just me. Can you think of continuing it to another part may be an SS. Would love to read how this goes forward.
May be a sharon's POV. 😉

we'll surely c if we can continue it...bt mayb not now..hv many assignments..btw..thnx a lot..😃

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: marauder
Beautifully written. Although this OS has a sad ending but its still awesome. Just loved how you potrayed the pain of Swayam . It would be awesome if you decide to continue this OS.

thanks a lot...wil think if we can continue it..😊

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Sach kahu I hate sad endings especially for swaron. But you have written an awesome OS portraying swayams mental condition soon after their talk. The OS is so expressive and very moving.A different style of writing. If you dont mind(i know it is the writers privilage to end however they like) plz write another OS with a happy ending😳 Sorry yaar control nahi hota.

thnx a lot...nd we'l surely think abt continuing it..aftr all we all want swaron 2gethr...😃