Swaron OS: (Un) platonic love - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow wow wow wow wow...
Amazing awesum outstanding. . Beautiful ...
1st of al thnkz fr 3 updates in a day...
Ur amazing at it..
N itz really an wonderful os loved it 2 d core... Hope dis happens inn d3 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is so Swayam "He kissed her so lovingly and tenderly, that she was almost crushed by the force of it. Even after they were out of breath, he still kept on kissing her. Finally they broke apart. He rested his forehead against her, his hands still encircling her waist." 👍🏼 ❤️

This was so cute and funny and so Sharon 😆 "Oh shit! Shivam is still lying there on the ground. Should we go help him?" she asked, doubtfully.

Sharon's realisation was beautifully drafted..love the way she confessed..love the way u write and this was so cute and passionate.



Edited by AmritaluvSwaRon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
You call this a surprise?
It's like a treat to my dear bud Raf and the people she coexists with harmoniously on Planet Fairy Tale. Uh-huh! So, yeah, delightful on their parts! =D

As for me? It sadly reminds me of the now absolutely screwed up characters of Swayum and Sharon. Like, their story has been messed on a Twi-level, like when you read the last two books, you clearly know that Meyer is confused with what to do with her 'epic love saga'. The writers are either confused about SwaRon or dun give a f**k, whatever. So, on the lines of the messed up story and characters, you've penned down a very beautiful prose, and I will not repeat my praises for your writing here as well, as this is a surprise for people from Planet Fairy Tale, not me. 😛


Love,
Kanks



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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
simply awesome thnx for pm..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
wow the OS is awesome

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
its amazing ...girl you create magic...every tym you write something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it to the core.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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freaking awesome...loved how you have described sharon's beauty in the rain...loved the locker room part like hell...totally breathtaking...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Savage

You call this a surprise?

It's like a treat to my dear bud Raf and the people she coexists with harmoniously on Planet Fairy Tale. Uh-huh! So, yeah, delightful on their parts! =D

As for me? It sadly reminds me of the now absolutely screwed up characters of Swayum and Sharon. Like, their story has been messed on a Twi-level, like when you read the last two books, you clearly know that Meyer is confused with what to do with her 'epic love saga'. The writers are either confused about SwaRon or dun give a f**k, whatever. So, on the lines of the messed up story and characters, you've penned down a very beautiful prose, and I will not repeat my praises for your writing here as well, as this is a surprise for people from Planet Fairy Tale, not me. 😛


Love,
Kanks




😆 I figured you would react like that. Someone told me to write something romantic and though I'm not too good at it, I gave it a shot anyways.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
wow amazing os
luved it to the core
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
its awesome... mind blowing...really amazing...great work...👏

thnx 4 d pm

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