Swaron OS: (Un) platonic love - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
write more of this kind it was awesome and beautiful
loved it
tunx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Amazing as always 😆
You know, if you'll come upwith such surprises, I'll definitely hope you cant update your FFs/SSs due to some reason or another once in a while 😈 😆
Thanks for the PM 🤗 Double thanks for the update mania 😉 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay I'm so sorry for being this late, I really am. Such a wonderful OS n I miss the PM. Perfect!!

This was a beautiful interpretation of what possibly could be coming our way(which is pretty much next to impossible, but what the he'll, as they say "ummed pe duniya kayam hai"). Beautiful, simply beautiful!!

The first thing that came to my mind when I read that title was Kanks n Rafi di's fight on Kanks's thread. But I saw that the Question that I was going to ask had already been answered by you on the 2nd page. Lolz

Thnx 4 d PM n sorry again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
u r one hell of a writer yaar...u r just superb...i always read ur updates again n again...n yet m nt fed up...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Now THAT is some SERIOUS un-platonic love ! 😆
DAMn u really took the UN in UN-platonic love seriously ! 😲
I am SO glad FINALLY someone wrote an OS that laid out , in DETAIL .. precisely why SwaRon can never really be friends ... in some absurd alternate universe where this happens , I hope my doppelganger bludgeons the FF-writer with an aluminium alloy baseball bat 😛 😆.


Swayam beat up whathisface to pulp. Brownie points for THAT . 😎
And Sharon .. She SLAPPED him before she kissed him 🤣. And I love the fact that Sharon manages to awaken the 'inferno' in the usually calm , composed and gentle Swayam .. both when she kisses him and when he beats up the creep for her. In cheese-speak taht my KD hates so very much ... SwaRon are SO written in the STARS ☺️ 😍.

One thing I like about ur way of writing romance that u manage to do it without making it look desperate or just outright crass and plain carnal . Even if its just a look shared, or fingers brushing past each other or a kiss .. its always so beautifully penned in ur brand of fiction .. and I love that thing about ur work . 😳 Which reminds me .. now that I have seen your kind of romance .. A certain Miss K. is yet to show me hers. Here's pleading to all that Holy , that her 'romance' doesnt border on Cannibalistic encounters. 😛 Jokes . I LOVE KD .. 😳 😳 Which is why I LOVE pulling her leg :D :D ❤️

THERE .. I hope the LONG asss comment made up for the delay ? 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
really awsome display of confuse mind state of sharon...and the built in anger and frustration of swayam...it was really awsome write up...please pm me next time when you write something..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: pratik54000

really awsome display of confuse mind state of sharon...and the built in anger and frustration of swayam...it was really awsome write up...please pm me next time when you write something..


Yup . PMs for me too 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRon911


Yup . PMs for me too 😎


Didn't I send you a PM?😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom


Didn't I send you a PM?😕



Just saying. 😆 For future references , ya know ? 😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaRon911




<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff3366">Just saying.😆For future references , ya know ?😎</font>



hey i am new over here i read it first time...i didnt receive any pms for this one

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