SwaRon Oneshot: The Confession!

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doc42

@doc42

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This was amazing . the ending was perfect, unsaid yet everything said . :)

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

this is bloody awsome...perfect perfect perfect confession...though sharon didnt say those magical words...it was perfect...Swayam questioning her constantly on all of their instances...and thats the factor from where she melted...GOD this is wat i wanted to see in the recent swwaron promo...

I so damn wanted to see a trembled sharon with swayams presence and swayam taking over the control...WOW...trembled sharon with swayam's touch, his words is so beautiful...it has to be through swayam that sharon need to realise her feelings for him...

Thanks a lot to u and ur friend...FAB OS..

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awesome os.

Beautifully writtem.

plz ask ur friend to write more on Swaron.

and thanks for posting it.

pm me if u write more.

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This is awesome... Like really awesome.. Your friend is really like a brilliant writter... N thanks for posting it onher behalf...

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awww Thank you all so much for the beautiful replies. 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

She told me to heartily thank you all for taking your time and reading it. She will try her best to write another if she has time. Right now, she's really busy with college but she will write whenever she gets the time. 😊

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Aaah. This is bloody PERFECT. Perfect in every sense. This is how the SwaRon really are, and this is exactly the distance Sharon is willing to walk by herself, towards Swayam. And Swayam is always, always too good. And this was tooo good. WOW, just thank you, to your friend for writing this marvelous piece, and to you, for making it reach out to us.

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

WOW This one is freaking adorable and cute. Loved how you described Sharon and Swayam's POV. Sharon's not so vocal confession part was adorable. Keep writing and do PM me the next time if its on SS.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

WOW...Kudos to you and your friend...Really well written...it had just the right amount of intensity in the showdown and the way Sharon gave Swayam a silent Yes in the end was beautiful !!!

Edited by ABBY92 - 13 years ago

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

This is really nice. One of the best versions of last weeks scenes i'd say. I wish this would have happened.

Oh well, do keep writing more you guys. You and your friend have done an awesome job.