::Kriyansh story:: updated part 7-pge 10 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5-
they reachd d brokers ofice,
kriya- thank u uncle, ab mai chalti hu thank u so much.
dad- are beta tumhare pair me chot aai h tum kaise jaogi,. tum ruko. .driver jao dkhke aao. .
kriya- nai uncle..
dad- tum ruko beta driver jao!
driver goes 2 d oficend within 5 min he return bck! nd says,
driver- sir, ofic bnd h. .
ye suntehi kriya was lyk. .wat d hel . .nd again in tensin,
kriya- hey universji. .ye kya kiya? ab mai kya. .kaha jaungi. .
dad- beta tum tensin mat lo. .
nd kriya ka phn rings. . it was her moms cl!
ma- ha beta pahuch gai. .aur flat pasand aya ya nai. ?
kriya sb kuch ma ko bta deti h!
dad- lao beta mai bat karta hu!
kriya holds up a phn. .
dad- helo mam, mai mr. singhaniya bol raha hu. .
ma- ohh. .sir. .thank u thank u so much. .apne meri beti ki itni help ki. .
kriyas mom was aware of dat she is speaking to mr.singhaniya. .d steel merchant. .mumbai k jane mane shaqs. .
dad- are koi bat nai. .apki beti bhot pyari h. .aur usne muze sb bta diya aap chinta mat kijiye. .mai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
PART 5 CNTINUE-
ghar leke ja raha hu. . she wil be fyn at my hme nd us broker k bare me pata lagata hu!
ma- nai sir thats ok wo kisi hotel me ruk jayegi.
dad- kaisi bat kar rai mam. .wo mumbai me nai h nd she dnt knw dis city nd uska hotel me rukna sahi nai h. .mai use ghar leke jata hu. .u dnt wry. .
ma- ohk. .sir thank u so much. .
dad- lijiye kriya se bta kijiye.
he gave d phn 2 kriya,
ma- kriya beta dnt wory. .wo bhot ache insan h. .tum achese jana nd mai us broker ko phn karti hu ok beta
kriya- ohk ma.
kriya nai chahti ki wo ma ko ya uncle ko mana karke aur pareshani bdhaye isliye man jati h!
ma- ohk beta dhyan rakhna.
kriya- ha ma bye!
she puts her phn!
dad- dnt wory beta sb thik ho jayega. . driver ghar chalo!
kriya- thank u uncle. .
kriya was so tensd nd thnking abt her first day in mumbai. .
they reachd d hme!
dad- chalo beta hum pahuch gaye!
wo kriya ko pareshan dkhte h aur bolte h. .
dad- beta dnt be tensed. .relax! ab chalo.
kriya givs a smile nd get out of a car!

END!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Gr8 kria n rey ek hi ghar main.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
😛 😛 😛 OMG KRIA REY K GHAR.. Dats gonna be gr8 fun.. Supeb update 👏 loved it.. Thanks 4 pm.. Update fast n pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
its awesome,,,,,,,,,kriya rey ke ghar..update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
OMG!!!!Kriya in her would be sasural!!!NICE!!NICE!!!...cant wait to c wat happens...update jaldi...n plz add me to ur pm list!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
ooohhh!!!!!! wow gr8...kriya in his sasural 1st tym...hehehehehe 😊

n thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
nice updates...
kria meeting her to be sasurji..lol.. n he is so helpful..aww..
waiting for kriyansh to meet in rey's house...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
PART 6-
kriya rey k dad k sath car se utarti is bat se anjan ki she was abt 2 enter reys hme,
the house is lyk a mahal. . nd kriya ki ankhe bs yahi dkhke aur bdi bdi hoti ja rahi thi. .
kriya-uncle ye apka ghar h. . ? i mean palace?
dad kriya ki is bt pe has padte h. .
dad- ha beta ye mera khudka ghar h. .aur ab tumhe isme enter karna h chalo. . driver saman leke aao. .chalo beta!
kriya- ha h h. .(smiles)
kriya enters d hme nd amazed wid d interior of hme. .it ws flawles. .
dad introduces her 2 amma.,
dad- beta ye amma h. . ghar ka khayal yahi rakhti. h mai to din rat ofic me rahta hu. .
kriya- namste amma!
amma- namaste beta!
dad- kriya aaj yahi rukegi iska saman niche guest rum me lagwa dijiye. . aur ha beta agar koi chiz ko jarurt ho to muze ya amma ko bol dna daro mat. .relax. .aur mai apne bete ko kah deta hu us broker k bare me pata karne, , u dnt wory. .amma aap kriya ko ghar dikha dijiye aur iska rum bhi. .
kriya- uncle thank u so much aap mere liye itna kuch. .
dad- uffo. .firse nahi. .ab jao!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
PART 6 CNTINUE-
kriya- ohhk. (smiles)
amma- chalo beta!
kriya- hha.
kriyas rum was in basement. .use basement bhi nai kah skti. .waha bi kuch kam interior nahi tha!
amma ghar ko dscrib karte karte kriya ko rum tak pahuch deti hai. .
amma- ye raha beta tumhara rum. .tum fresh ho jao mai khana lagati hu. .tum upar ajana. .
kriya- thik hai!
kriya rum k darwaje pe thi. .wo actualy darwaje k bahar dkh rahi thi. . jise hum hall kah skte h. .it ws 2 big. .nd thoda age open garden. .
kriya- are wa rum se nikalte hi garden kya bat. .kriya kya kar rahi. .apna ghar nai h chal chup chap ander!

Dad upar the wo fresh hokar aye nd cls up rey nd told him 2 inquire abt dat broker. .
amma- sab ye bchi bhot pyari h. .
dad- ha amma kriya bhot achi h. . aur pahlehi din uske sath aisa. ..waise use rum to pasand aya na. ?
amma- ha aisa to lag raha tha ki wo apni pareshani bhul gayi.
dad- chalo acha h!

at 8 pm,
door bel rings,
amma opens d door,
rey- amma. . kaisi hai aap . .i mis u alot. . .
Edited by Ray135 - 13 years ago

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