::Kriyansh story:: updated part 7-pge 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Awesome dude. Plz update nxt part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
hey updte was awesome.update next soon and dont 4rget 2 pm me ad me 2 in ur pm list.i hv send u buddy request
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
amazing story and please can you add me to your pm list :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
u really need to update soon and plz plz plz pm me loved the whole story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
PART 7-
Rey nd kriya dono shock. . .aur donoke itne jorse chillane par dad aur amma bhi shock. .
Rey- you? ?wat r u doing here?
Kriya- apne kya investigatin pe phd ki hai jo hamesha ajeeb ajeeb sawal puchte rahte ho?
Rey- wat. .phd. .ajeeb wat? ?
dad nd amma dono ko dkh rahe the. .
kriya- dikh nahi raha ye ghar hai aur mai yaha pe ghadi hu. .
rey- ha wo to dikh raha hai. . bt tum mere gharpe q khadi hu?
kriya- tumhara ghar. . .oh exuse me ye uncle ka ghar hai! !
rey- nd wo uncle mere dad hai. !
kriya . . are kya bolegi yarr ab. . .universji ko yad karne ka bhi tym nahi tha. . ek din itni sari cnfusin. . bapre bap. .
itne me dad. .
dad- ek ek. . ek min ruko plz. . .waise to do bdo k bich me nahi bolna chaiye. . bt mai bda hu to mai bol sakta hu. . waise tum dono ek dusre ko jante ho? ?
rey- yes! !
kriya- nahi. .
dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai. . kriya sochti hai ki agar polic statn wali bat uncle ko pata chalegi to wo kya sochenge uske bareme. .
itne me rey. .
rey- dad. .maine wo btaya tha na polic statn dehradun
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
it was sweet esp. the fight.
just wwanting to know rey's reaction when he comes to know kriya wud be staying with him.
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Dad- ohh. . to wo ye hai. . .
kriya shock. . - are ine to sb pta hai hey universji plz bcha lena. .
rey- yes dad. . bt ye yaha. . ? tu. .tu tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
dad- rey mai btata hu. .
dad tolds him about whole incidnce. . .
rey- ohh. . so wo broker .. .? . .oh no!
kriya- k. . kya hua broker ka. . kuch pata chala. . .
dad- ha beta pata to chal gaya. .
dad kriya ko broker k bare me bta dete hai. .
kriya stand in shock again. .
kriya- hey universji ab kya hoga!
kriya ka sad face dkh kar rey ko bhi bura lagta hai. . .
dad- kriya beta dnt be upset. . ab tum mere ghar pe ho na so u dnt wory waise maine tumhari mom se bat karli hai na. . .ab tum aise sad rahogi to unhe lagega ki mai tumhara khayal nahi rakh raha!
kriya- nai uncle aisa nai hai. . agar aj aap nai hote to pata nahi kya hota. .
dad- bs den bat khatam. . tum jake khana khalo nd jaldise so jao its 2 late. . nd dnt wory. .
kriya. . hmm . . ok. . uncle. ..
kriya apne rum me jati h. .
dad- amma kriya ka khana bhejdo uske rum me!
amma- thik h sab. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
dad- rey go nd fresh n up nd cme fast for dinner. .
rey- hmm. .ya dad. .
rey goes up to his rum. . .
in rum. .
remind al d incidnce wid kriya nd smile. .
nd says. .
killer. . so sweet she is. . .
bt as he bck to his senses. . hey dude wats wrng wid jst go n fresh i thnk i realy need 2 fresh!
dad asks amma- khaliya usne khana?
amma- ha khaliya. . bhot pareshan thi bt maine use sambhalke. . use sula diya. .
dad- hmmm. . acha kiya. .
amma- sab ek bat bolu?
dad-ha ha. .
amma- kriya aapko bhi achi lagi aur muze bhi. . waise bhi apna ghar itna bda hai. . kya wo yaha nahi rah skati. .
dad- are ha. . kya bat boli amma. . ye bat mere dimag me q nahi aai. . mai uski mom se bat kar lunga . . nd its final. .
rey itne me ata hai. . .
rey- wats final dad?
dad- final ye ki kriya yahi rahegi. . apne ghar.
rey- wat. .
amma- ha beta. .
dad- kya hua rey u r nt happy. .
rey- no no dad why do i hv a prblm. . she needs a hme. . nd its gud idea. .
rey in minds- why i m happy. .maine to usse zagda. . ? ?

THE END
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
i loved this part it was amazing and update fast but u forgot to pm me plz pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Sory dis time i hv no time to pm u all. . .sory. .
plz gve ur views nd leave d cments.. .next time pkka pm!

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