::Kriyansh story:: updated part 7-pge 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii... guys...presenting d fresho story of our vry oen kriyaansh...i m writing 4r d 1st tym...so plzz gutakhi maf...i m giving d outline today... story will start...aftr sme tym...
Outline: Ray is vry knwn dancer nd kriya is smal twn grl cming to mumbai...she is a dancer to bt she dnt get ny opportunities to show up her dance...she came to mumbai alone..
Part1(A)- Page 1
Part1(B)- Page 2
Part2- Page 3, 4
Part3- Page 4
Part4- Page 6
Part5- Page 7
Part6- Page 8
Part7- Page 10
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Amti4u thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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We all are waiting for Kriyaansh stories... Go ahead.. and pls do pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice intro..
Plz continue and PM me also
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx guys 4r d interst...i will start d story soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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the story theme u al knw lyk as d3 d nw year party nd d plic statn scene. . .aftr dat in kriyas hme-
kriya: ma i m sory maine janbujke dance nai kiya woh to wo launde. .
mumy kriya ko bd luk deti h
kriya cntinued : wo ladko ki wajahse. . ma apko to pata h mai kuch galat nai kar skti. . ma i m sory. plz maf kardo. . ( kriya in mind: plz universji ma ko manalo kai ajke tamashe k bd mera mumbai jana na cncel ho jaye)
ma: muze pta h beta meri kriya kuch galat nai kar skti. .
smiles nd hugs kriya
ma: chalo chalo bhot ho gaya drama ja tuze pcking nai karni h kya. . kal subah flite h teri. .
kriya: teri . ? matlb ma aap mere sath nai aa rahe ho ? ma aise kaise apne kaha tha aap mere sath chaloge. . (sad face)
ma: ha kaha tha par kriya u knw ma job mai tumhare sath nai aa sakti. . nd i knw meri beti ab bchi nai rai. . aur mai to milne aya karungi na. . ab yahi ye hal h to waha to akele rahegi waha kya hoga?
kriya: ma. . ! ( she hugs her ma )
ma: acha kriya maine broker se bat karli h wo tuze airport lene ayega nd 5
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept...pm me plz whn u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part1(B)-
5 flats dikhayega aur usmese ek pasand kar lena aur ha ye kam 1 din me ho jana chaiye ok?
kriya: ok ma. . ab mai jau packing karni h, aur sona bi h.
ma: ha ha ja sari chize dhyan se rkh dena aur jaldi se soja beta kal subah jaldi uthna h. ja beta!
kriya: ja rai hu ma gn!
ma: gn
kriya: ma?
ma: ab kya?
kriya hugs her ma tightly
kriya: thank u ma i love u.
mom gives a sigh of smile
ma: i love u 2 beta
kriya apne rum me jati h nd starts pcking nd thnkin abt d nw journey of her lyf
kriya: huh. .finaly i m goin 2 mumbai. .d dreamcity. i m sory ma, mai janti hu apko mera dance karna pasand nai bt kya karu dance meri jindagi hai. .nd muze pata h jb apki beti apna sapna pura karegi aap mera sath jarur rahoge!
cute smile on her face nd talking 2 universji.
- thank u universji. aap upar baithke aram kya kar rahe ho chalo pcking karo ma nahi to kya. .aap to mere sath chal rahe ho!
wid lots of dream in eyes kriya take a long breath nd so jati h!. .
guys
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome..plz pm me when u update next time..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww nice part n cant wait for the next update and plz pm me when u update

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