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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: frozen.devil
wow awsm siigy re radhi!!

Thank U Ji !!

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

moni awsm updt... i jus read it!

n i jus guessed ki d challenger mus b jogita... n it came out 2 b true..

m wondering how chanakya n chandragupt will tackle Vishal n his 'Kootneeti'... Vishal to chanakya ka baap nikla!! lolzz..

n duru... she's such a fool!

btw, continue soon!

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: frozen.devil
moni awsm updt... i jus read it!

n i jus guessed ki d challenger mus b jogita... n it came out 2 b true..

m wondering how chanakya n chandragupt will tackle Vishal n his 'Kootneeti'... Vishal to chanakya ka baap nikla!! lolzz..

n duru... she's such a fool!

btw, continue soon!

thanks so much honey,vishal sabka baap hain par hamesha wo winner ho ye zaroori to nahin,you can say he is chanakya's equal,kadake ke takkar wala raja,thats it,acharya is very very intelligent par haan vishal thoda unse zyada chaukanna rehta hain.

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

ya no doubt chanakya is a brilliant bulb... but dis chess player is vry smart... 😈

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: frozen.devil
ya no doubt chanakya is a brilliant bulb... but dis chess player is vry smart... 😈

yeah..he is...i did not wanted to show someone else good that chandu so i made duplicate people story so no matter who is the winner,main her will be ashish.😆

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: lucykaede

yeah..he is...i did not wanted to show someone else good that chandu so i made duplicate people story so no matter who is the winner,main hero will be ashish.😆

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Sorry For Late Comment ! Congo Bhoomidi !!!!
Vishal Jaise Chanakya Ka Baap Hai, Humein Lagta Hai Krishna Hasi-Chitholi Ka Baap Hai !!!

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Sorry For Late Comment ! Congo Bhoomidi !!!!
Vishal Jaise Chanakya Ka Baap Hai, Humein Lagta Hai Krishna Hasi-Chitholi Ka Baap Hai !!!

ha ha right but krishna is a king,he surely is a careless person but it is because he fully relies on vishal,he is a very caring person for his friends and wives and he is an awesome father,you will see in later updates.

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

FLASHBACK POST-HER SAVIOUR ANGEL

OUTSIDE KASHI UNIVERSITY..

TWO FRIENDS WERE WALKING.

their teacher sent them to bring some fruits for the classes.

suddenly they saw a girl was coming towards them with very fast speed.she bumped into vishal and they both fell.

vishal(10 years old at that time,the girl too was 9 years old)

krishna(11 years old)-are tum itne tez kyun dau rahe ho??

the girl fell in both of their feets-muzhe bacha lo,muzhe bacha lo..bhagwaan ke liye muzhe bacha lo.

vishal and krishna saw each other and took her to a safe place.her leg was bleeding like nothing.

vishal came to her-put her leg in his arms.

girl-are are ye aap kya kar rahe hain??mat kijiye aapko paap lagega.

vishal totally neutral expression-tum bolti bahut ho,apna muh band karo,he tore apart krihna's clothes.

krishna-are.

and tied on her legs.

vishal-ab rakht nahin bahega...

krishna-ab batao tum daud kyun rahe the??

girl-wo wo...

vishal-bolo..

she started crying.vishal slapped her...girl got shocked.she stopped crying.

vishal-muzhe aise vyakti bilkul bhe acche nahin lagte jo apne samasyon se haarkar rone baith jaate hain.

krishna-vishal ek stri ko tum kaise maar sakte ho,ye paap hain.

girl-koi paap nahin hain,mein,mein ek ganika ke putri hun,mere maa ke marne ke uprant muzhe assaka ke raja utha kar le jaa rahe the,mein ek ganika nahin banna chahti,muzhe bacha lijiye ya phir maar dijiye and she begged in front of them.

vishal-kya tum gurukul mein padhna chahte ho??

they both got shocked...

krishna-haan kya padhna chahte ho???

girl-ye aap kya keh rahe hain,ek ganika ke putri kaise gurukul jaise pavitra sthaan mein pravesh kar sakte hain.

vishal-maa saraswati sabki maa hain,sabko samanya adhikaar hain unhe prapta karne ka.

krishan-haan..he smiled at her 😊muzhe ye baat mere is mitra ne bahut acche se samzhai hain,mein bhe tumhare tarah he ek kulhina hun parantu vishal ne muzhe padhne ke liye prerit kiya.

girl-kya tum ek kulhina??

krishna-haan parantu is samay tum apne baare mein socho,hamari mitra hain chitrangada AUR rashi,wo kashi ke gurukul mein padhti hain kanyaon ke kaksha mein,wo tumhe aasani se dakhila dilwa denge.

girl started crying.

vishal-ab phir se thappad khana hain..she got so emotional that she hugged vishal and started crying in his arms...vishal caressed her head.and those three left...

i don't think there is a need to tell you guys who is this girl.😆

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: lucykaede

ha ha right but krishna is a king,he surely is a careless person but it is because he fully relies on vishal,he is a very caring person for his friends and wives and he is an awesome father,you will see in later updates.

Wow ! Yeh Toh Multi-talented Nikla !!

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