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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani



Don't Be Afraid Di ! All Will Be Okay ! God's With U !!


thanks so much radhi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

chanakya straight went to his room where vishal was already waiting for him.
chanakya-kya chahte ho tum hamse??
vishal-mein chahta hun ke aap mere lakshya ko pura karein.
chanakya-kya hain tumhara lakshya??
vishal-pehle to magadha par adhikaar karna tha kintu ab kuch aur hain.

Hmm...Phir Suspense ?

ye suspense story ki key hain.

dhuru's mother came to her room crying-chitra,chitra mere putri.
she is actually not dhuru's mother,she is her step mother but dhuru thinks that she is her mother,dhanu didn't told her that her mother died after giving her birth.(her mother's role is of a very little importance and she only serves for chitra's rage)

Oh ! To Hum Tab Galat The ?
haan par maine likha to bhe aisa he tha.

Krishna and raashi got scared and stopped eating food.

Krishna chocked his food in the plate and everyone just got disgusted with this.

Vishal-sahastron baar mana kara hain kintu phir bhe.

Rashi-are bhojan he to hain kaun sa loha kha rahe hain hum.

Vishal-chal yahan se murkhon.

Don't U Think, In The Second Red Line The Hum Would Be Tum Or She Meant Was Is Written ?

it meant hum means both.

Dasi-maharaj wo kuch bacche mahel mein tufaan machaye hue hain,wo keh rahe hain unhe apne chacha se milna hain.

Vishal,rashi and Krishna-hey prabhu and those three just ran to the hall.

Everyone confused.

Chandu-acharya..

Chanakya-kuch mat puchna,is pagalkhane mein kuch bhe ho sakta hain.(lol)

Got The Right Word !😆😆 Par Bachche Kya Krishna Ke Hai ? Jo Vishaal Se Milne Aaye Hai ??


you got that right,i don't think it is that much of a suspense,yeah wo bacche krishna ke he hain.


And All Three Of The Titles Are Awesome !! Waiting For The Update !!!

thanks...


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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww...awsm updt..!! shanky - mihika scene ws gooddd...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER-20-CONFEDERACY OF KINGS,BUT WHO WILL BE THE RULER??
vishal,krishna and rashi came to the hall,there were kids and a woman.kids just ran to meet vishal.
kids-chacha,chacha..that woman came also to them.
krishna in jealousy coughed-cough..cough...
kids-pranaam pitaji.
krishna-chalo muzhe dekha to.kaise hain aap leena.(leenajavi)
leena-hum theek hain,bacche bahut zidd kar rahe the to hamein inhe yahan laana pada.
krishna said in ears of vishal- bacchon ko chandragupta se dur rakhna hoga nahin to ...
suddenly chandu and chanakya came from behind.kids got shocked seeing chandu.
they ran to chandu..
chandu shocked..😲
kids-chacha,chacha...
chandu-ah...mein tumhara chacha nahin hun.
kids laughed-hamse parihaas kar rahe hain na.
chanakya was confused,he saw vishal and krishna.
krishna pointed towards himself saying they were his kids and chankya thought-tabhe ye bacche aise hain.😆
chandu in them saw one kid and got shocked,he was a boy,the same boy whose mother gave them shelter after they lost the battle against dhanu.(remember the shiksha of the woman who said to eat food from sides and not from center and then chanakya realized his mistake,the same boy.😆),chankya also noticed him and he was very surprised.
krishna-bacchon chalo...
leena-haan chalo bacchon,chacha ko karya karne hain chalo...
leena and kids went in the room.
chandu got angry-😡,he came to vishal.
chandu-ye sab kya hain,wo baccha wo baccha kaun hain.
krishna-wo mera putra hain,raajkumar hain isliye shishtachaar na bhulen.😡
chandu-kintu tumhara putra,wo kaise...ah...
vishal-vishraam karo...kuch der baad sabha hain and krishna and vishal left.
chankya remembered shaktaar saying-koi hain jisne tumhari hamesha sahayata ki hain.
chandu-acharya,wo baccha,wo to...
chanakya got shocked that it was vishal wo helped them at that time,he remembered that woman saying..
woman-are murkh jab tarkaari jal rahe hain to kinare se kha agar tu beech mein haath daal dega to haath to jalega he.
chandu-acharya.
chanakya thinking-to iska artha hain wo stri vishal ke dut the magadha mein ,jisne hamein sharan de aur muzhe mere bhool ka ehsaas karaya.(some words are of urdu but sry i don't know perfect hindi)
chandu-iska artha acharya,us din jo us stri ne baat kahe,wo.
chankaya-wo us stri ke shabd nahin parantu vishal ke shabd the,usne hamein hamare bhool ko gyat karaya.
chandu smiled-iska artha hain vishal hamara mitra hain.
chanakya-ye sochne ke tum bhool na karna and he left.
in deep evening...
malayketu,shaktaar,parvateshwars,chandu,chanakya and vishal were in a sabha type room.
vishal-prastaav to accha hain kintu magadha ko aupchaarik taur par jeetne ke liye pehle magadha mein vidroh ke stithiyan utpanna karne honge.
malayketu-sahe kaha aapne,agar hum vidroh ke stithiyan utpanaa karana chahte hain to dhanananda bhe chup nahin baithega.
there was nepal's king as well and he was not under vishal.
nepal's king got up-mein pehle he ye spashta kar dena chahta hun ke hum chahe jeete ya nahin,mera rajya swatantra rahega.
chanakya disgusted😡
vishal-yahan hum abhe jeeten nahin hain to kripya kar ke aap shant ho jayen aur acharya ko apna mat rakhne den.
chanakya-dhanyawaad.ham magadha ko jeetne se pehle uske antarik rajyon ko jeetenge.surasena aur assaka to itne mehtwapoorna rajya hain ke un dono ko jeetne se magadha bhaybheet ho jayega aur magadha ko jeetna assan ho jayega.
vishal 😳 happy when someone talks intelligently-hmm..yahan hum magadha mein virodh karenge aur wahan surasena aur assaka ko jeetenge.
malayketu-kintu assaka aur surasena ka raaja kaun hoga.
vishal-aap pehle jeetne den,raja hum baad mein bhe chun lenge.
one parvateshwar-nahin,hamein jaana hain ke surasena aur assaka ka raja kaun hoga.
vishal showed him an eye-ye na bhulon ke aap ek maharaja hone ka swang rachte hain,aap hain nahin.
malayketu was angry but he did not said anything-nahin maharaja,hamara artha hain ke pehle he agar ye tai ho jaaye to accha hoga.
vishal-to theek hain assaka ka raja hoga chandragupta...aur surasena ko chalyenge RAAJKUMARI CHITRA.
everyone got highly shocked...
malayketu-raajkumari,ek stri...???😲
chanakya was too confused for the first time as he did not knew that chitra was vishal's alley.
one parvateshwar-kintu raajkumari chitra ko rajya dena matlab surasena ko dubara magadha mein vileen karna hain.
vishal chuckled-raajkumari karya bhaar sambhalenge kintu mere antargat.isse wahan ke aam jan virodh nahin karenge.
chanakya-mein samazh raha hun aap kya kehna chahte hain.
vishal-acharya hamein laajjit na karein,aap hamse bade hain,kripa karke aap hamse choton jaisa he vyavhaar karein.
chandu 😳 and chanakya😳
chanakya-ah jaisa mein keh raha tha kintu raajkumari jee is baat ka vidroh nahin karenge.krishna laughed loudly,everyone😳
krishna coughed-ah...shama kijiyega..
vishal sighed-ah to jaisa mein keh raha tha,haan raajkumari iska virodh nahin karenge.
malayketu-koi sambandh hain aap dono ka.
vishal 😡
malayketu-arthat ke raajkumari maanenge kaise??
vishal-wo aap muzh par chod den,to ye tai raha,hamare senayen milkar pehle surasena aur assaka ko jeetenge aur phir magadha par aakraman karenge.
as everyone stand up to leave vishal told chandu and chanakya to stay there.now only vishal,krishna and chandu chanakya were there.
vishal-chandragupta,tumhara kuch reh gaya hain yahan.
chandu-kya?
vishal clapped hands,two soldiers came with two people.
chandu and chanakya shocked...chandu-mihika aur shashanka.
krishna imitating-haan ye dono ratriyon ko rasbhari banate hain.😆
shanky and mihika were very scared that they got caught.
vishal-acharya,aapse ye umeed na the.and vishal and krishna left.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt moni!!

d last part is fab... n abt krishna... uski baaki 49 maharaniyan kahan hai?? 😆

updt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


thanks so much radhi.



Welcome Di !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
kids-pranaam pitaji.
krishna-chalo muzhe dekha to.kaise hain aap leena.(leenajavi)
leena-hum theek hain,bacche bahut zidd kar rahe the to hamein inhe yahan laana pada.
krishna said in ears of vishal- bacchon ko chandragupta se dur rakhna hoga nahin to ...
suddenly chandu and chanakya came from behind.kids got shocked seeing chandu.

Bechara !! (For Both Chandu And Krishna !!) Bachche Ek Ko Bhul Gaye, Aur Ek Ke Peechhe Pad Gaye !!

chandu in them saw one kid and got shocked,he was a boy,the same boy whose mother gave them shelter after they lost the battle against dhanu.(remember the shiksha of the woman who said to eat food from sides and not from center and then chanakya realized his mistake,the same boy.😆),chankya also noticed him and he was very surprised.

Ohho !! Acharya Bhayankar Shocked Ho Gaye The ?

chanakya thinking-to iska artha hain wo stri vishal ke dut the magadha mein ,jisne hamein sharan de aur muzhe mere bhool ka ehsaas karaya.(some words are of urdu but sry i don't know perfect hindi)
chandu-iska artha acharya,us din jo us stri ne baat kahe,wo.
chankaya-wo us stri ke shabd nahin parantu vishal ke shabd the,usne hamein hamare bhool ko gyat karaya.
chandu smiled-iska artha hain vishal hamara mitra hain.
chanakya-ye sochne ke tum bhool na karna and he left.

Bechara ! Kuchh Toh Raahat Mili Thi Use, Phir Acharya Ne Ghao Mein Namak Chhirak Di !

vishal-to theek hain assaka ka raja hoga chandragupta...aur surasena ko chalyenge RAAJKUMARI CHITRA.
everyone got highly shocked...
malayketu-raajkumari,ek stri...???😲

😲😲

vishal clapped hands,two soldiers came with two people.
chandu and chanakya shocked...chandu-mihika aur shashanka.
krishna imitating-haan ye dono ratriyon ko rasbhari banate hain.


Yeh Krishnaa Kabhi Nahin Sudhrega !!

😲
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niceee updt haan... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

kids-pranaam pitaji.
krishna-chalo muzhe dekha to.kaise hain aap leena.(leenajavi)
leena-hum theek hain,bacche bahut zidd kar rahe the to hamein inhe yahan laana pada.
krishna said in ears of vishal- bacchon ko chandragupta se dur rakhna hoga nahin to ...
suddenly chandu and chanakya came from behind.kids got shocked seeing chandu.

Bechara !! (For Both Chandu And Krishna !!) Bachche Ek Ko Bhul Gaye, Aur Ek Ke Peechhe Pad Gaye !!

yup...😆

chandu in them saw one kid and got shocked,he was a boy,the same boy whose mother gave them shelter after they lost the battle against dhanu.(remember the shiksha of the woman who said to eat food from sides and not from center and then chanakya realized his mistake,the same boy.😆),chankya also noticed him and he was very surprised.

Ohho !! Acharya Bhayankar Shocked Ho Gaye The ?

obviously,jab chandu jitna bada ek boy ek acharya ko sikhayega to acharya ko krodh to ayega he kintu acharya apne maansik stithi se ubar gaye,thanks to vishal,

chanakya thinking-to iska artha hain wo stri vishal ke dut the magadha mein ,jisne hamein sharan de aur muzhe mere bhool ka ehsaas karaya.(some words are of urdu but sry i don't know perfect hindi)
chandu-iska artha acharya,us din jo us stri ne baat kahe,wo.
chankaya-wo us stri ke shabd nahin parantu vishal ke shabd the,usne hamein hamare bhool ko gyat karaya.
chandu smiled-iska artha hain vishal hamara mitra hain.
chanakya-ye sochne ke tum bhool na karna and he left.

Bechara ! Kuchh Toh Raahat Mili Thi Use, Phir Acharya Ne Ghao Mein Namak Chhirak Di !

yup...😳

vishal-to theek hain assaka ka raja hoga chandragupta...aur surasena ko chalyenge RAAJKUMARI CHITRA.
everyone got highly shocked...
malayketu-raajkumari,ek stri...???😲

😲😲

vishal clapped hands,two soldiers came with two people.
chandu and chanakya shocked...chandu-mihika aur shashanka.
krishna imitating-haan ye dono ratriyon ko rasbhari banate hain.


Yeh Krishnaa Kabhi Nahin Sudhrega !!

😲

yes par aage chalke story ke chars mein kuch changes honge.😃

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